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Update marketing page messaging for clarity and engagement
- Revised text in the integration and status update sections to enhance clarity and user understanding. - Changed "You Connect to your work" to "Connect to your work" for consistency. - Updated the description of team updates to emphasize receiving relevant information. These changes aim to improve user engagement and ensure clear communication on the marketing page.
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apps/marketing-app/src/app/(app)/page.tsx

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<div>
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<h5 className="text-xl font-semibold mb-3 max-sm:text-lg max-sm:mb-2">
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Connect to your work
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Connect to your workflow
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</h5>
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<p className="text-muted-foreground text-lg leading-relaxed max-sm:text-base">
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You Connect to your work (GitHub, Slack) which takes less than 5 minutes
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Connect to your work (GitHub, Slack) which takes less than 5 minutes
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</div>
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You are always up to date
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</h5>
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<p className="text-muted-foreground text-lg leading-relaxed max-sm:text-base">
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Your team can optionally adjust their status updates.
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Receive updates from your team. Don't worry about obsolete info in ticketing systems.
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</p>
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</div>
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apps/marketing-app/src/app/components/brand-copy.tsx

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// Call-to-action copy
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export const CTACopy = {
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Primary: "Turn activity into updates",
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Secondary: "Connect to your work",
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Secondary: "Connect to your workflow",
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Specific: "Drop your standups",
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} as const;
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apps/marketing-app/src/app/components/target-audience.tsx

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role: "Engineers",
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description: "Less reporting, more coding.",
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benefits: [
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"Your commits and PRs write your updates for youno extra steps required.",
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"Your commits and PRs write your updates for you-no extra steps required.",
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"Stop interrupting your morning just to repeat what you did yesterday.",
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"Your work stays visible to the team without constant explanation.",
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role: "Product Managers",
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description: "Instant clarity, zero chasing.",
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benefits: [
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"Immediately see who's moving ahead and who's stuckno chasing required.",
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"Immediately see who's moving ahead and who's stuck, no chasing required.",
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"Spot blockers early, before they derail your timeline.",
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"Keep stakeholders informed without constant status requests.",
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