an attempt at clarifying a sentence

Author: Florian Goth

paper.tex

@@ -619,10 +619,11 @@ \subsubsection{Risk Assessment and Opportunities}
 Even, if the concept of an RSE unit fails at a specific institution, its duties and the employed people
 can be shifted to the other departments until a new structure has been found.\\
 Governance and organisational location are points that have to be negotiated
-inividually at each institution and probably also for a lot of employees of the RSE unit.
+inividually at each institution and probably also for a lot of employees of the RSE unit in order to fit the needs of the scientists.
 This comes partially from the aforementioned stakeholders, but also from the necessity,
-that while the unit is a central infrastructure, it needs to be able within
-the agile structures of academic research, therefore a certain lack of structures is expected.
+that while the unit is a central infrastructure,
+it needs to be able to provide the services of their employees within the agile structures of academic research -- close to the scientists.
+Therefore a certain lack of formalised, organisational structures can be expected.
 Finding people for staffing this unit is a challenging tasks, but this is partially adressed
 through the wide network within the university that the unit forms, and also by
 further measures described in \ref{subsec:staff}.