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Improve English grammar. clarity, and consistency
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‎src/generated/resources/assets/create_enchantment_industry/lang/en_us.json‎

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‎src/main/java/plus/dragons/createenchantmentindustry/common/registry/CEIAdvancements.java‎

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EXPERIENCED_ENGINEER = create("experienced_engineer", b -> b.icon(AllItems.EXP_NUGGET)
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.title("Experienced Engineer")
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.description("Get some Nuggets of Experience")
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.description("Obtain some Nuggets of Experience")
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.whenIconCollected()
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.after(ROOT)),
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SPIRIT_TAKING = create("spirit_taking", b -> b.icon(AllItems.EXP_NUGGET)
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.title("Spirit Taking")
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.description("Store your experience through an experience hatch")
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.title("Spirit-Taking")
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.description("Store your experience using an Experience Hatch")
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.after(EXPERIENCED_ENGINEER)),
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SPIRITUAL_RETURN = create("spiritual_return", b -> b.icon(AllItems.EXP_NUGGET)
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.title("Spiritual Return")
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.description("Retrieve some experience through an experience hatch")
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.description("Retrieve some experience using an Experience Hatch")
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.after(SPIRIT_TAKING)),
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A_SHOWER_EXPERIENCE = create("a_shower_experience", b -> b.icon(AllItems.EXP_NUGGET)
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LUMEN_NEXUS = create("lumen_nexus", b -> b.icon(CEIBlocks.EXPERIENCE_LANTERN)
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.title("Lumen Nexus")
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.whenIconCollected()
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.description("Obtain Experience Lantern")
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.description("Obtain an Experience Lantern")
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.after(SPIRITUAL_RETURN)),
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// Mechanical Grindstone
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.after(EXPERIENCED_ENGINEER)),
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GRIND_TO_POLISH = create("grind_to_polish", b -> b.icon(AllItems.SAND_PAPER)
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.title("Grind To Polish")
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.description("Sandpaper? I've gotten better one")
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.title("Grind to Polish")
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.description("Sandpaper? I've got a better one")
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.special(CDPAdvancement.TaskType.NOISY)
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.after(GONE_WITH_THE_FOIL)),
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EXPERIENCED_RECYCLER = create("experienced_recycler", b -> b.icon(CEIBlocks.GRINDSTONE_DRAIN)
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.title("Experienced Recycler")
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.description("Get 1,000,000 mB of experience from Mechanical Grindstone")
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.description("Obtain 1,000,000 mB of Liquid Experience from Mechanical Grindstones")
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.special(CDPAdvancement.TaskType.EXPERT)
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.whenStatReach(Stats.CUSTOM.get(CEIStats.GRINDSTONE_EXPERIENCE.get()), MinMaxBounds.Ints.atLeast(1000000))
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.after(GONE_WITH_THE_FOIL)),
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// Blaze Enchanter
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BLAZE_ENCHANTERY = create("blaze_enchantery", b -> b.icon(CEIBlocks.BLAZE_ENCHANTER)
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.title("Blaze Enchantery")
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.description("Blaze can do more than boil water. Obtain a Blaze Enchanter")
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.title("Blaze Enchantry")
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.description("Blazes can do more than boil water. Obtain a Blaze Enchanter")
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.whenIconCollected()
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.after(EXPERIENCED_ENGINEER)),
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BLAZING_ENCHANTMENT = create("blazing_enchantment", b -> b.icon(Items.GOLDEN_HELMET)
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.title("Blazing Enchantment")
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.description("Add a new enchantment to an unenchanted item using Blaze Enchanter")
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.description("Enchant an unenchanted item using a Blaze Enchanter")
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.after(BLAZE_ENCHANTERY)),
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SIGIL_FORGING = create("sigil_forging", b -> b.icon(CEIItems.ENCHANTING_TEMPLATE)
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.title("Sigil Forging")
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.description("Add a new enchantment to an enchanting template using Blaze Enchanter")
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.description("Add a new enchantment to an Enchanting Template using a Blaze Enchanter")
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.after(BLAZING_ENCHANTMENT)),
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THOUSAND_RUNES = create("thousand_runes", b -> b.icon(CEIBlocks.BLAZE_ENCHANTER)
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.title("Thousand Runes")
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.description("Blaze Enchanter enchants 1,000 times")
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.description("Use a Blaze Enchanter 1,000 times")
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.whenStatReach(Stats.CUSTOM.get(CEIStats.ENCHANT.get()), MinMaxBounds.Ints.atLeast(1000))
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.special(CDPAdvancement.TaskType.EXPERT)
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.after(SIGIL_FORGING)),
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// Blaze Forger
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BORN_TALENT_OF_FIRE = create("born_talent_of_fire", b -> b.icon(CEIBlocks.BLAZE_FORGER)
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.title("Born Talent of Fire")
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.description("Blazer is good at this. Obtain a Blaze Forger")
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.description("Blazes were born for this. Obtain a Blaze Forger")
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.whenIconCollected()
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.after(EXPERIENCED_ENGINEER)),
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BLAZING_FUSION = create("blazing_fusion", b -> b.icon(Items.GOLDEN_SWORD)
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.title("Blazing Fusion")
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.description("Combine two items of same kind using Blaze Forger")
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.description("Merge two of the same item using a Blaze Forger")
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.after(BORN_TALENT_OF_FIRE)),
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SIGIL_CASTING = create("sigil_casting", b -> b.icon(CEIItems.ENCHANTING_TEMPLATE)
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.title("Sigil Casting")
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.description("Apply an Enchanting Template using Blaze Forger")
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.description("Apply an Enchanting Template using a Blaze Forger")
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.after(BLAZING_FUSION)),
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MAGIC_UNBINDING = create("magic_unbinding", b -> b.icon(CEIItems.ENCHANTING_TEMPLATE)
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.title("Magic Unbinding")
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.description("Strip enchantment off item using Blaze Forger")
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.description("Strip an item's enchantment off using a Blaze Forger")
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.after(SIGIL_CASTING)),
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BLAZING_CENTURION = create("blazing_centurion", b -> b.icon(CEIBlocks.BLAZE_FORGER)
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.title("Blazing Centurion")
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.description("Blaze Forger forges 1,000 times")
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.description("Use a Blaze Forger 1,000 times")
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.whenStatReach(Stats.CUSTOM.get(CEIStats.FORGE.get()), MinMaxBounds.Ints.atLeast(1000))
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.special(CDPAdvancement.TaskType.EXPERT)
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.after(MAGIC_UNBINDING)),
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TRANSCENDENT_OVERCLOCK = create("transcendent_overclock", b -> b.icon(Items.EMERALD)
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.title("Transcendent Overclock")
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.description("How could it happen? Enchantment Level Cap Didn't exist?")
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.description("How is this possible? Enchantment level caps don't exist?")
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.special(CDPAdvancement.TaskType.EXPERT)
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.after(PROBABILITY_SPIKE)),
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PARADOX_FUSION = create("paradox_fusion", b -> b.icon(Items.REDSTONE)
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.title("Paradox Fusion")
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.description("How could it happen? They should not appear at same time!")
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.description("How is this possible? They shouldn't appear at the same time!")
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.special(CDPAdvancement.TaskType.EXPERT)
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.after(TRANSCENDENT_OVERCLOCK)),
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OSHA_VIOLATION = create("osha_violation", b -> b.icon(Items.BARRIER)
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.title("OSHA Violation")
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.description("You SHOULD NOT let it happen!!!")
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.description("You should NOT have let this happen!!!")
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.special(CDPAdvancement.TaskType.SECRET)
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.after(LIGHTNING_CATALYSIS)),
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OMNI_ENCHANTER = create("omni_enchanter", b -> b.icon(Items.NETHER_STAR)
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.title("Omni-Enchanter")
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.description("Unbelievable! You've super-enchanted 1,000 times! Now the number speaks for itself")
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.description("Unbelievable! You've Super Enchanted 1,000 times! Now the number speaks for itself")
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.whenStatReach(Stats.CUSTOM.get(CEIStats.SUPER_ENCHANT.get()), MinMaxBounds.Ints.atLeast(100))
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.special(CDPAdvancement.TaskType.EXPERT)
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.after(PARADOX_FUSION)),
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// Printer
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COPIABLE_MASTERPIECE = create("copiable_masterpiece", b -> b.icon(Items.WRITTEN_BOOK)
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.title("Copiable Masterpiece")
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.description("Copy a Written Book using Printer")
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.description("Copy a Written Book using a Printer")
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.after(EXPERIENCED_ENGINEER)),
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COPIABLE_MYSTERY = create("copiable_mystery", b -> b.icon(Items.ENCHANTED_BOOK)
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.title("Copiable Mystery")
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.description("Copy a Enchanted Book using Printer")
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.description("Copy an Enchanted Book using a Printer")
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.after(COPIABLE_MASTERPIECE)),
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BRAND_REGISTRY = create("brand_registry", b -> b.icon(Items.NAME_TAG)
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.title("Brand Registry")
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.description("Using the printer to name an item")
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.description("Use a Printer to rename an item")
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.after(COPIABLE_MYSTERY)),
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SUPPLY_CHAIN_REFACTOR = create("supply_chain_refactor", b -> b.icon(PackageStyles.getDefaultBox())
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.title("Supply Chain Refactor")
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.description("Using the printer to change package address")
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.description("Use a Printer to change a package's address")
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.after(BRAND_REGISTRY)),
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ASSEMBLY_AESTHETICS = create("assembly_aesthetics", b -> b.icon(CDPItems.RARE_MARBLE_GATE_PACKAGE)
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.title("Assembly Aesthetics")
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.description("Using the printer to change package pattern")
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.description("Use a Printer to change a package's pattern")
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.after(SUPPLY_CHAIN_REFACTOR)),
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GREAT_PUBLISHER = create("great_publisher", b -> b.icon(CEIBlocks.PRINTER)
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.title("Great Publisher")
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.description("Printer prints 1,000 times")
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.description("Use a Printer 1,000 times")
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.whenStatReach(Stats.CUSTOM.get(CEIStats.PRINT.get()), MinMaxBounds.Ints.atLeast(1000))
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.special(CDPAdvancement.TaskType.EXPERT)
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.after(BRAND_REGISTRY));

‎src/main/java/plus/dragons/createenchantmentindustry/common/registry/CEIEnchantments.java‎

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"Blaze Enchanter Super Enchanting Exclusive Enchantments");
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public final TagKey<Enchantment> printingDeny = tag(
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"printer/deny",
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"Printer denied Enchantments");
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"Printer-Denied Enchantments");
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protected ModTags() {
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super(CEICommon.ID, Registries.ENCHANTMENT);

‎src/main/java/plus/dragons/createenchantmentindustry/common/registry/CEIStats.java‎

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public static final RegistryEntry<ResourceLocation, ResourceLocation> SUPER_ENCHANT = create("super_enchant")
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.lang("Super-Enchant")
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.lang("Super Enchant")
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public static final RegistryEntry<ResourceLocation, ResourceLocation> PRINT = create("print")

‎src/main/java/plus/dragons/createenchantmentindustry/config/CEIFluidsConfig.java‎

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static class Comments {
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static final String experienceVaporizeOnPlacement = "Whether Liquid Experience vaporize into Experience Orbs upon placement.";
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static final String experienceVaporizeOnPlacement = "Whether Liquid Experience will vaporize into Experience Orbs upon placement.";
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static final String printerFluidCapacity = "The amount of liquid a Printer can hold (mB).";
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static final String enableWrittenBookPrinting = "If printing Written Book function of Printer should be enabled.";
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static final String enableEnchantedBookPrinting = "If printing Enchanted Book function of Printer should be enabled.";
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static final String enableCreateCopiableItemPrinting = "If printing Create's copiable item of Printer should be enabled.";
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static final String enablePackagePatternPrinting = "If changing package pattern function of Printer should be enabled.";
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static final String enablePackageAddressPrinting = "If assigning package address function of Printer should be enabled.";
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static final String enableCustomNamePrinting = "If assigning custom name function of Printer should be enabled.";
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static final String printingCustomNameAsItemName = "Whether printing custom name (displayed in italic) as item name (displayed in non-italic).";
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static final String printingGenerationChange = "The generation change when copy written books, " +
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static final String printingEnchantedBookCostMultiplier = "The cost multiplier of printing Enchanted Book.";
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static final String printingEnchantedBookDenylistStopCopying = "Whether Printer denylist prevents enchanted book from being copying." +
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static final String enableWrittenBookPrinting = "If the printing of Written Books function of Printers should be enabled.";
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static final String enableEnchantedBookPrinting = "If the printing of Enchanted Books function of Printers should be enabled.";
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static final String enableCreateCopiableItemPrinting = "If the printing of Create's copiable items function of Printers should be enabled.";
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static final String enablePackagePatternPrinting = "If the changing package patterns function of Printers should be enabled.";
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static final String enablePackageAddressPrinting = "If the assigning package addresses function of Printers should be enabled.";
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static final String enableCustomNamePrinting = "If the assigning custom names function of Printers should be enabled.";
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static final String printingCustomNameAsItemName = "Whether printing custom names (displayed in italics) should instead print as as item names (displayed in non-italics).";
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static final String printingGenerationChange = "The generation change when copying Written Books; " +
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"a value of 1 will prevent copying copy of copy";
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static final String printingEnchantedBookCostMultiplier = "The cost multiplier of printing Enchanted Books.";
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static final String printingEnchantedBookDenylistStopCopying = "Whether the Printer denylist prevents Enchanted Books from being copied." +
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"Setting this to false allows copying Enchanted Books without denied enchantments";
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static final String blazeEnchanterFluidCapacity = "The amount of liquid a Blaze Enchanter can hold (mB).";
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static final String blazeForgerFluidCapacity = "The amount of liquid a Blaze Forger can hold (mB).";
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static final String experienceLanternFluidCapacity = "The amount of liquid an Experience Lantern can hold (mB).";
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static final String experienceLanternDrainRate = "The amount of Experience an Experience Lantern can drain from player per 0.5 tick (mB).";
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static final String experienceLanternDrainRate = "The amount of experience an Experience Lantern can drain from player per 0.5 ticks (mB).";
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‎src/main/java/plus/dragons/createenchantmentindustry/config/CEIKineticsConfig.java‎

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static class Comments {
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static final String deployerKillDropXp = "Whether Deployer killed entities should drop experience.";
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static final String deployerKillXpScale = "Scale for experience dropped from Deployer killed entities.";
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static final String deployerMineDropXp = "Whether Deployer mined blocks should drop experience.";
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static final String deployerMineXpScale = "Scale for experience dropped from Deployer mined blocks.";
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static final String deployerCollectXp = "Whether Deployer collect dropped experience as Experience Nugget.";
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static final String deployerMendItem = "Whether Mending enchantment applies to Deployer held item (Needs deployerCollectXp = true).";
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static final String deployerSweepAttack = "Whether Deployer can perform sweep attack.";
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static final String crushingWheelKillDropXp = "Whether Crushing Wheel killed entities should drop experience.";
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static final String crushingWheelKillDropXpChance = "Probability of Crushing Wheel killed entities dropping experience.";
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static final String crushingWheelKillDropXpScale = "Scale for experience dropped from Crushing Wheel killed entities.";
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static final String deployerKillDropXp = "Whether Deployer-killed entities should drop experience.";
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static final String deployerKillXpScale = "Scale for experience dropped from Deployer-killed entities.";
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static final String deployerMineDropXp = "Whether Deployer-mined blocks should drop experience.";
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static final String deployerMineXpScale = "Scale for experience dropped from Deployer-mined blocks.";
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static final String deployerCollectXp = "Whether Deployers collect dropped experience as Nuggets of Experience.";
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static final String deployerMendItem = "Whether the Mending enchantment applies to Deployer-held items (Needs deployerCollectXp = true).";
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static final String deployerSweepAttack = "Whether Deployers can perform sweep attacks.";
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static final String crushingWheelKillDropXp = "Whether Crushing Wheel-killed entities should drop experience.";
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static final String crushingWheelKillDropXpChance = "Probability of Crushing Wheel-killed entities dropping experience.";
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static final String crushingWheelKillDropXpScale = "Scale for experience dropped from Crushing Wheel-killed entities.";
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}
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}

‎src/main/java/plus/dragons/createenchantmentindustry/config/CEIProcessingConfig.java‎

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static final String regularLightningStrikeTransformXpBlockChance = "Probability of natural lightning strikes transforming Blocks of Experience.";
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}

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