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Author: forsyth2

docs/source/v2.1/WaterCycle/index.rst

@@ -1,13 +1,14 @@
 E3SMv2.1 (Water Cycle)
 ====================
 
-The simulation compaign for E3SMv2 (Water Cycle) was performed with two
-separate model configurations:
+The simulation campaign for E3SMv2.1 was performed with Low Resolution (LR) configuration
 
 * **v2_1.LR** (lower resolution)
 
-If you use data from this simulation campaign, please cite the relevant overview
-manuscripts.
+If you use data from this simulation campaign, please cite the following overview
+manuscript:
+
+* `Smith et al. 2024 (GMD) <https://gmd.copernicus.org/preprints/gmd-2024-149>`_
 
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    :maxdepth: 2

docs/source/v2.1/WaterCycle/simulation_data/index.rst

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Simulation Data
 
 The E3SMv2.1 simulation data is available on **ESGF** and **NERSC HPSS**.
 
-The preferred retrieval method is **ESGF**. Native output is available at `ESGF <https://esgf-node.cels.anl.gov/search/e3sm/?model_version=2_1>`_, and a subset of the data is reformatted to conform to CMIP conventions and submmited to the CMIP6 ESGF archive (ESGF links are provided in the table below for published data).
+The preferred retrieval method is **ESGF**. Native output is available at `ESGF <https://esgf-node.cels.anl.gov/search?project=CMIP6&activeFacets=%7B%22source_id%22%3A%22E3SM-2-1%22%7D>`_, and a subset of the data is reformatted to conform to CMIP conventions and submmited to the CMIP6 ESGF archive (ESGF links are provided in the table below for published data).
 
 Additionally, all native model output data has also been archived on **NERSC HPSS** using `zstash <https://e3sm-project.github.io/zstash>`_.
 
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ Note that the data management tool `zstash <https://github.com/E3SM-Project/zsta
 2. To retrieve files with zstash command:
    ::
 
-    zstash extract --hpss=/home/projects/e3sm/www/WaterCycle/E3SMv2_1/LR/v2.LR.piControl "*.elm.h0.00[3-4]?-??.nc"
+    zstash extract --hpss=/home/projects/e3sm/www/WaterCycle/E3SMv2_1/v2_1.LR.piControl "*.eam.h0.00[3-4]?-??.nc"
 
 
 For more information, refer to `zstash usage <https://e3sm-project.github.io/zstash/_build/html/master/usage.html#extract>`_.