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           categories like for income where individuals with lower incomes are
           seemingly more willing to try and invest. We can theorize about why
           this is the case, from attempts to use investing as a way to build
-          wealth quickly or drastically to potentially ensuring a stable plan b
-          not provided by employer benefits to age being a factor. Regardless,
-          to fill the gap for those that do not feel empowered to invest and to
-          ensure that those that do invest have a good understanding of the
-          basics, let's explore two basic and key ways to invest via
-          visualizations: stocks and real estate.
+          wealth more quickly or drastically to potentially trying to ensure a
+          stable plan b not provided by employer benefits (e.g. 401k).
+          Regardless, to fill the gap for those that do not feel empowered to
+          invest and to ensure that those that do invest have a good
+          understanding of the basics, let's explore two basic and key ways to
+          invest via visualizations: stocks and real estate.
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