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Author: EmilyMacias

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@@ -216,30 +216,29 @@ <h1>Demistifying Investment</h1>
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         We can see that age, income, and education are all factors that
-        contribute to the likelihood of investing.
+        contribute to the likelihood of investing. Gender has also been
+        referenced as a major factor in the likelihood of investing, with women
+        investing less than men. However, this is not represented in the current
+        data. This can be for a varity of reasons, including this gender gap
+        slowly closing as more women are empowered to invest or alternatively,
+        due to the data not being fully representative of the investing
+        population in the US.
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       <h1>Financial Literacy Resources</h1>
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-        Let's learn what it looks like to invest properly, why it can be so
-        powerful, and what the current investing landscape looks like. To do
-        this we will explore 3 main topics:
+        Now that we have briefly explored the investment landscape, let's
+        explore what it looks like to invest properly and why it can be so
+        powerful. To do this we will aim to understand three main topics: What
+        generational wealth is and how investments contribute, how we can invest
+        safely, and what different types of investments can be and return.
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-      <ul style="max-width: 80%; margin: 20px auto; line-height: 1.8">
-        <li>What generational wealth is and how investments contribute</li>
-        <li>What investing can actually look like safely</li>
-        <li>
-          What the investing landscape looks like in terms of who invests and
-          how much
-        </li>
-      </ul>
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-        To begin, let's talk about what an investment even is. Investments can
-        take many different forms, from traditional stock holdings to real
+        Let's start at the beginning, what even is an investment? Investments
+        can take many different forms, from traditional stock holdings to real
         estate investments. Both of these contribute to what we call
         generational wealth, where money is passed down between generations of a
         family, primarily in these investment forms.