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Case study clafirications

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 ## Example
 
-These manuscript folios are an excerpt from the original draft of the 1895 novel _Piccolo mondo antico_ by novelist and Nobel Prize nominee for Literature, Antonio Fogazzaro. The original autograph numbering in pen (384, 385, [386], 387) does not reflect the intended reading order, so archivists noted an alternative reading sequence in pencil: 171r (387), 171v (384), 172r (385), 172v ([386]).
+These manuscript folios are an excerpt from the original draft of the 1895 novel _Piccolo mondo antico_ by novelist and Nobel Prize nominee for Literature, Antonio Fogazzaro. The pencil numbering in the upper right of each page (171r–172v) follows the bifolio's physical order, but does not correspond to the author's intended sequence, which he noted in ink: 384 (171v), 385 (172r), [386] (172v), 387 (171r).
 
-Two Ranges are provided within the `structures` to represent this case study. From the two Ranges with the `behavior` value `sequence`, the first Range should be used as the navigation default, and the other should be selectable according to the `label`.
+Two Ranges are provided within the `structures` to represent this case study. From the two Ranges with the `behavior` value `sequence`, the first Range should be used as the navigation default, and the other should be selectable via its supplied `label`.
 
 Images provided by permission of Biblioteca Civica Bertoliana.