network-update: more edits

Author: coot

blog/2025-01-20-network.md

@@ -10,15 +10,20 @@ hide_table_of_contents: false
 
 ### Documentation 
 
-We reviewed the [technical report][network-spec], we closed a number of issues:
+We reviewed the [technical report][network-spec]. We closed a number of issues,
+the most important are:
 
-* [__RollBack claimed to sometimes contain a header__][on#4686]
-* [__Is BlockFetch mini-protocol inclusive in the argument range?__][on#4628]
-* [__Wrong colors in figure 3.7 of network-spec__][on#4662]
-* [__Document CBOR encoding of Local TX-Submission mini-protocol__][on#4521]
 * [__Document Local Tx-Monitor mini-protocol__][on#3420]
+* [__Document CBOR encoding of Local TX-Submission mini-protocol__][on#4521]
 * [__Links to implemented mini-protocols are obsolete__][on#2780]
 
+And a few smaller issues:
+
+* [__RollBack claimed to sometimes contain a header__][on#4686]
+* [__Wrong colors in figure 3.7 of network-spec__][on#4662]
+* [__Is BlockFetch mini-protocol inclusive in the argument range?__][on#4628]
+  (we just verified that the issue is outdated)
+
 This was done in the [Network Spec Update][on#5036] PR, we also fixed many grammar
 & spelling errors [network-spec: language][on#5044].