modified: en/Archive/Development/Miscellaneous suggestions/SharedTracks

User Summary: Rewriting some sentences in response to gender-neutral pronouns

Author: James103

Page/en/Archive/Development/Miscellaneous suggestions/SharedTracks.mediawiki

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ The easy part of this: allow other players, for a fee, to use your station and/o
 ===Trains===
 
 We have Player 1, Player 2 and Player 3.
-Player 1 builds a nice network. Player 2 wants to use part of that network. Now Player 1 can build a Toll-Port, which allows Player 2 to access their network. At this port they defines the restrictions they want to add to the trains of Player 2:
+Player 1 builds a nice network. Player 2 wants to use part of that network. Now Player 1 can build a Toll-Port, which allows Player 2 to access their network. At this port they define the restrictions they want to add to the trains of Player 2:
 * One-Time Fee (which slows down the train for a moment, to pay the fee)
 * Fee per tile moving
 * Fee per day spent on property
@@ -23,11 +23,11 @@ Player 1 builds a nice network. Player 2 wants to use part of that network. Now
 * Allow stopping
 * Allow ignoring red
 * On crash, guilty part has to pay X times the yearly income + new-value for destroyed property
-* Om too many crashes/year, the guilty part goes to jail: being unable to do anything for a year or two.
+* On too many crashes/year, the guilty part goes to jail: being unable to do anything for a year or two.
 
-There was also some overthinking about what would happen if someone stopped their train on the track (if allowed, or via break-down). Normally, nothing happens. There only happens something when an other train is behind you and now has to wait for a red light. You pay every X ticks for their loose of cargo value. Now who pays if 4 trains behind eachother stand still? The first one, causing the red light. The X ticks are needed, in case everyone starts accelerating.
+There was also some overthinking about what would happen if someone stopped their train on the track (if allowed, or via break-down). Normally, nothing happens. There only happens something when an other train is behind you and now has to wait for a red light. You pay every X ticks for their loose of cargo value. Now who pays if 4 trains behind each other stand still? The first one, causing the red light. The X ticks are needed, in case everyone starts accelerating.
 
-Now what happens if player 3 is allowed on the network of player 2, can it access the network of player 1? In general: no. Player 1 has to allow player 3 via the toll-ports of player 2. Here they can ask other amounts of money if they wishes. This means that if player 2 is a good friend, you can allow him for free, while asking money to player 3.
+Now what happens if player 3 is allowed on the network of player 2, can it access the network of player 1? In general: no. Player 1 has to allow player 3 via the toll-ports of player 2. Here they can ask other amounts of money if they wish. This means that if player 2 is a good friend, you can allow him for free, while asking money to player 3.
 
 What we want, is that the info about the agreement between player 1 and player 2 is hidden for player 3, but code-wise this can be hard, so for now it is public-information.
 
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ If you don't protect your stations, and allow them via the toll-port, they are a
 
 ===How do the toll-ports look like===
 
-They can only be horizontal or vertical tracks. They use a whole tile. A custom sprite will tell it is a toll-port
+They can only be horizontal or vertical tracks. They use a whole tile. A custom sprite will tell it is a toll-port.
 
 ===Things to keep in mind===