style review

Author: Amrita42

concepts/systemd-targets.xml

@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@
 <title>Setting up a &systemd; target</title>
 <para>To set up a &systemd; target, you need to create a new target unit file and define any required dependencies.
   A target is a group of unit files that manages the state of services. A target can be used to control groups of services
-  or define system states.</para>
+  or to define system states.</para>
   <procedure>
     <step>
     <para>Create a new file with the <literal>.target</literal> extension in <filename>/etc/systemd/system/</filename>. </para>
@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@ WantedBy=multi-user.target
 </listitem>
      <listitem>
       <para>
-        <emphasis>WantedBy:</emphasis> specifies that this target should be a part of <literal>multi-user.target</literal>.
+        <emphasis>WantedBy:</emphasis> specifies that this target should be part of <literal>multi-user.target</literal>.
       </para>
       </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
@@ -172,12 +172,12 @@ WantedBy=multi-user.target
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-           <emphasis>Description:</emphasis> human-readable description of the target.
+           <emphasis>Description:</emphasis> A human-readable description of the target.
           </para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            <emphasis>Documentation:</emphasis> URIs to documentation.</para>
+            <emphasis>Documentation:</emphasis> URIs pointing to documentation.</para>
         </listitem>
              <listitem>
               <para>
@@ -188,19 +188,19 @@ WantedBy=multi-user.target
               <listitem>
                 <para>
                   <emphasis>Wants:</emphasis>
-                  Units that can be started but is not mandatory.
+                  Units that can be started but are not mandatory.
                 </para>
                 </listitem>
                 <listitem>
                   <para>
                     <emphasis>After/Before:</emphasis>
-                    the order of the dependency.
+                    Defines the order of dependencies.
                   </para>
                   </listitem>
                   <listitem>
                     <para>
                       <emphasis>Conflicts:</emphasis>
-                      units that should not be active while this target is active.
+                     Units that should not be active while this target is active.
                     </para>
                     </listitem>
               </itemizedlist>