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Follow the instructions at the:
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link:https://docs.harvesterhci.io/v1.4/[official website for {harvester}]
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to get more information how to set up {harvester}.
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for detailed information on how to set up {harvester}.
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NOTE: Make sure you meet the hardware requirements specified in
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https://docs.harvesterhci.io/v1.4/install/requirements
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IMPORTANT: Make sure you checked the support matrix and use a supported {rancher} version:
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https://www.suse.com/suse-harvester/support-matrix/all-supported-versions/harvester-v1-4-x/
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To benefit from the synergies {rancher} and {harvester} can create, you need to import your {harvester} in the {rancher} UI.
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To benefit from the synergies {rancher} and {harvester} can create, you need to import your {harvester} instance into the {rancher} UI.
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To do so, follow the steps described here:
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link:https://docs.harvesterhci.io/v1.4/rancher/virtualization-management[Importing Harvester cluster]
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WARNING: Make sure to only use OS images that are supported with {harvester}.
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You can get an overview of the currently supported images at https://docs.harvesterhci.io/v1.4/vm/virtual-machines .
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Find an overview of the currently supported images at https://docs.harvesterhci.io/v1.4/vm/virtual-machines .
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# end::harvester-image-upload[]
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To create an IP Pool, log in to your {harvester} instance and go to *Networks -> IP Pools*.
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Click *Create* in the upper right corner to create a new IP Pool:
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image::SAP-EIC-Harvester-IPPool-Empty.png[titel=Create a new IP Pool,scaledwidth=99%,opts=inline,Embedded]
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image::SAP-EIC-Harvester-IPPool-Empty.png[title=Create a new IP Pool,scaledwidth=99%,opts=inline,Embedded]
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On the next screen, you should see a menu similar to this:
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image::SAP-EIC-Harvester-IPPool-Create.png[Create IP Pool Menu,scaledwidth=99%,opts=inline,Embedded]
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image::SAP-EIC-Harvester-IPPool-Create.png[title=Create IP Pool Menu,scaledwidth=99%,opts=inline,Embedded]
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Click *Edit as YAML* and adjust the IP Pool to your needs.
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This section describes how to set up a load balancer using {harvester} to distribute traffic to virtual machines.
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IMPORTANT: This approach only works with {harvester} 1.4.2 or higher and requires that the target virtual machines are connected to the management network of {harvester}.
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IMPORTANT: This approach only works with {harvester} 1.4.2 or higher and requires that the target virtual machines be connected to the management network of {harvester}.
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If your management network is not managed by a DHCP, your first step would be to create an IP Pool.
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If your management network is not managed by a DHCP, your first step is to create an IP Pool.
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# end::rancher-harvester-lb-intro[]
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image::SAP-EIC-Harvester-LB-Create.png[title=Create Load Balancer Menu,scaledwidth=99%,opts=inline,Embedded]
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Therefore the *Key* and *Value* must match the *Instance Labels* of the target virtual machines.
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Here, you will specify which virtual machines the Load Balancer will target.
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To do this, the *Key* and *Value* must match the *Instance Labels* of the target virtual machines.
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image::SAP-EIC-Harvester-LB-Selector.png[title=Load Balancer Backend Server Selector,scaledwidth=99%,opts=inline,Embedded]
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