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adoc/SLES4SAP-hana-angi-perfopt-15.adoc

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// TODO PRIO3: align with manual pages SAPHanaSR(7) and susHanaSR.py(7)
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* {HANA} 2.0 SPS05 rev.059.04 and later provides Python 3 and the HA/DR provider hook
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adoc/SLES4SAP-hana-scaleout-multitarget-perfopt-15.adoc

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