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           <h2 id="whats-new" class="govuk-heading-l">What’s new</h2>
           <p class="govuk-body">1 May 2025: Updates to refresh the GOV.UK brand</p>
-          <p class="govuk-body">From June 2025, parts of the Design System will change to support a wider refresh of the GOV.UK brand. To get ready, we’ve released GOV.UK Frontend v5.10.0.</p>
-          <p class="govuk-body">Service teams in government should see the new guidance in these components to update to the refreshed GOV.UK branding:</p>
+          <p class="govuk-body">Prts of the Design System will change support a wider refresh of the GOV.UK brand. Services should show the refreshed brand from 25 June 2025.</p>
+          <p class="govuk-body">This is the first step of the brand refresh and only affects these components:</p>
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             <li><a href="/components/header/" class="govuk-link">GOV.UK header component</a></li>
             <li><a href="/components/footer/" class="govuk-link">GOV.UK footer component</a></li>
             <li><a href="/components/service-navigation/" class="govuk-link">Service navigation component</a></li>
             <li><a href="/components/cookie-banner/" class="govuk-link">Cookie banner component</a></li>
           </ul>
-          <p class="govuk-body">Read the <a href="https://github.com/alphagov/govuk-frontend/releases/tag/v5.10.0" class="govuk-link">full release notes</a> to see more details on what’s changed.</p>
+          <p class="govuk-body">To help service teams in government get ready, we’ve released GOV.UK Frontend v5.10.0.</p>
+          <p class="govuk-body">Read the <a href="https://github.com/alphagov/govuk-frontend/releases/tag/v5.10.0" class="govuk-link">full release notes</a> to see more details and how to update.</p>
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