Hi, I enjoyed reading your blog (such as about running R code using older versions of R), so I couldn't miss your book.
After reading the fist "real" chapter, I feel it is a bit rambly and mixes several concepts in a single paragraph, and several ideas are spread around multiple paragraphs. I think that using more subheadings would improve the clarity and the organisation of the text.
I see some points that could be highlighted and their current position in the text:
- What is R (first, but also third and fourth paragraphs)
- R is not Rstudio (first and second paragraphs)
- The strengths of R (second, third, and fourth paragraphs)
- Best Practices for Paths (from fifth paragraph onwards)
- The Learning Loop (the last chunk)
The current text could be reorganised to follow said highlights, which would enhance the reading
Hi, I enjoyed reading your blog (such as about running R code using older versions of R), so I couldn't miss your book.
After reading the fist "real" chapter, I feel it is a bit rambly and mixes several concepts in a single paragraph, and several ideas are spread around multiple paragraphs. I think that using more subheadings would improve the clarity and the organisation of the text.
I see some points that could be highlighted and their current position in the text:
The current text could be reorganised to follow said highlights, which would enhance the reading