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chore(copy): drop AI-slop tells from marketing copy
Per encryption4all/dobby#44 — sweep marketing/SEO copy for AI-isms. - Drop "enterprise-grade" superlative across en.json, nl.json, SEO.svelte default, and marketing JSON-LD. - Replace trailing -ing participle ("ensuring full GDPR compliance and data sovereignty") with a plain statement. - Replace rule-of-three brochure list ("Full transparency, no vendor lock-in, community-driven") with concrete language. No functional or layout changes; only user-visible copy. Closes #44
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src/lib/components/SEO.svelte

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const siteName = 'PostGuard for Business';
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const defaultDescription =
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'PostGuard for Business offers enterprise-grade identity-based email signing and encryption for organizations.';
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'Identity-based email signing and encryption for organizations.';
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const siteUrl = $derived(env.PUBLIC_SITE_URL || `${page.url.protocol}//${page.url.host}`);
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const defaultImage = $derived(`${siteUrl}/pg_logo.png`);

src/lib/locales/en.json

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},
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"hostedEU": {
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"title": "Hosted in the EU",
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"description": "All data is stored and processed within the European Union, ensuring full GDPR compliance and data sovereignty."
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"description": "All data is stored and processed in the European Union. GDPR-compliant by default."
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},
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"encryption": {
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"title": "End-to-End Encryption",
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"description": "Emails are encrypted end-to-end. Only the intended recipient with the right identity attributes can decrypt."
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},
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"openSource": {
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"title": "Open Source",
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"description": "Built on the open-source PostGuard protocol. Full transparency, no vendor lock-in, community-driven."
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"description": "Built on the open-source PostGuard protocol. Audit the code or run it on your own infrastructure."
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},
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"revocation": {
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"title": "Email Revocation",
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},
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"footer": {
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"brandName": "PostGuard for Business",
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"tagline": "Enterprise-grade identity-based email signing",
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"tagline": "Identity-based email signing for organizations",
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"product": "Product",
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"resources": "Resources",
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"personal": "PostGuard Personal",
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},
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"seo": {
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"siteName": "PostGuard for Business",
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"defaultDescription": "PostGuard for Business offers enterprise-grade identity-based email signing and encryption for organizations.",
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"defaultDescription": "Identity-based email signing and encryption for organizations.",
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"homeTitle": "Secure Email Signing for Your Organization",
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"homeDescription": "PostGuard for Business offers enterprise-grade identity-based email signing and encryption. Manage API keys and audit email activity."
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"homeDescription": "Identity-based email signing and encryption for organizations. Manage API keys and audit email activity."
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},
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"pricing": {
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"title": "Pricing",

src/lib/locales/nl.json

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},
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"hostedEU": {
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"title": "Gehost in de EU",
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"description": "Alle gegevens worden opgeslagen en verwerkt binnen de Europese Unie, voor volledige AVG-naleving en datasoevereiniteit."
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"description": "Alle gegevens worden opgeslagen en verwerkt in de Europese Unie. Standaard AVG-conform."
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},
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"encryption": {
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"title": "End-to-end versleuteling",
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"description": "E-mails worden end-to-end versleuteld. Alleen de beoogde ontvanger met de juiste identiteitskenmerken kan ontsleutelen."
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},
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"openSource": {
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"title": "Open source",
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"description": "Gebouwd op het open-source PostGuard-protocol. Volledige transparantie, geen vendor lock-in, community-gedreven."
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"description": "Gebouwd op het open-source PostGuard-protocol. Bekijk de code of draai het op uw eigen infrastructuur."
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},
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"revocation": {
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"title": "E-mailintrekking",
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},
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"footer": {
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"brandName": "PostGuard for Business",
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"tagline": "Enterprise-grade identiteitsgebaseerde e-mailondertekening",
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"tagline": "Identiteitsgebaseerde e-mailondertekening voor organisaties",
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"product": "Product",
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"resources": "Bronnen",
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"personal": "PostGuard Persoonlijk",
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},
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"seo": {
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"siteName": "PostGuard for Business",
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"defaultDescription": "PostGuard for Business biedt enterprise-grade identiteitsgebaseerde e-mailondertekening en versleuteling voor organisaties.",
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"defaultDescription": "Identiteitsgebaseerde e-mailondertekening en versleuteling voor organisaties.",
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"homeTitle": "Veilige e-mailondertekening voor uw organisatie",
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"homeDescription": "PostGuard for Business biedt enterprise-grade identiteitsgebaseerde e-mailondertekening en versleuteling. Beheer API-sleutels en controleer e-mailactiviteit."
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"homeDescription": "Identiteitsgebaseerde e-mailondertekening en versleuteling voor organisaties. Beheer API-sleutels en controleer e-mailactiviteit."
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},
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"pricing": {
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"title": "Prijzen",

src/routes/(marketing)/+page.svelte

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url: 'https://business.postguard.eu/pg_logo.png'
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},
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description:
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'PostGuard for Business offers enterprise-grade identity-based email signing and encryption for organizations.',
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'Identity-based email signing and encryption for organizations.',
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sameAs: ['https://postguard.eu', 'https://docs.postguard.eu']
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},
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