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tutorials/networking/websocket.rst

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extends Node
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# The URL we will connect to
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@export var websocket_url = "wss://ws.postman-echo.com/raw"
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@export var websocket_url = "wss://ws.postman-echo.com/raw"
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var socket = WebSocketPeer.new()
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func _ready():
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socket.connect_to_url(websocket_url)
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# Send a message every 5 seconds
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# Send a message every 5 seconds.
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var timer = Timer.new()
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timer.wait_time = 5.0
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timer.timeout.connect(_send_message)
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var code = socket.get_close_code()
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var reason = socket.get_close_reason()
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print("WebSocket closed with code: %d, reason %s. Clean: %s" % [code, reason, code != -1])
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set_process(false) # Stop processing.
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set_process(false) # Stop processing.
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This will send a message every 5 seconds that will be echoed back
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extends Node
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# The port we will listen to
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# The port we will listen to.
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const PORT = 9080
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# Our WebSocketServer instance
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# Our WebSocketServer instance.
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var _server = WebSocketMultiplayerPeer.new()
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# Keeps track of the connected peer IDs
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# Keeps track of the connected peer IDs.
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var peer_ids: Array[int] = []
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func _connected(id):
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peer_ids.append(id)
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# This is called when a new peer connects, "id" will be the assigned peer id,
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# This is called when a new peer connects, "id" will be the assigned peer id.
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print("Peer %d connected" % id)
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func _disconnected(id):
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peer_ids.erase(id)
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# This is called when a client disconnects, "id" will be the one of the
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# disconnecting client
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# disconnecting client.
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var peer = _server.get_peer(id)
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var code = peer.get_close_code()
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var reason = peer.get_close_reason()
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if peer_state == WebSocketPeer.STATE_OPEN:
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while peer.get_available_packet_count():
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var packet_text = peer.get_packet().get_string_from_utf8()
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print(" Got data from peer %s: %s" % [peer_id, packet_text])
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print("Got data from peer %d: %s ... echoing" % [peer_id, packet_text])
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# Echo the packet back
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# Echo the packet back.
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peer.send_text(packet_text)
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elif peer_state == WebSocketPeer.STATE_CLOSING:
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# Keep polling to achieve proper close.

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