Incorporate feedback form reviewer LisaFC

Author: deining

userguide/content/en/docs/adding-content/diagrams-and-formulae/index.md

@@ -43,15 +43,15 @@ The probability of getting \(k\) heads when flipping \(n\) coins is:
 \tag*{(1)} P(E) = {n \choose k} p^k (1-p)^{n-k}
 ```
 ````
-Both standard syntax and `math` block renders to the same formula:
+Both standard syntax and `math` block render to the same formula:
 
 The probability of getting \(k\) heads when flipping \(n\) coins is:
 ```math
 \tag*{(1)}  P(E) = {n \choose k} p^k (1-p)^{n-k}
 ```
 
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-In order to display mathematical formulae and/or chemical equations inside your page(s), you need to run hugo version 0.141.0 or above. With older hugo versions, an error is thrown.
+In order to display mathematical formulae and/or chemical equations in your page(s), you need to run Hugo version 0.141.0 or above. With older Hugo versions, an error is thrown.
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@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ This [wiki page](https://en.wikibooks.org/wiki/LaTeX/Mathematics) provides in-de
 
 ### \(\LaTeX\) typesetting using standard syntax
 
-As of hugo v0.122, \(\LaTeX\) you can enable typesetting in Markdown using the standard syntax. To do so, you have make use of the goldmark `passthrough` extension inside your `hugo.toml`/`hugo.yaml`/`hugo.json`:
+As of Hugo v0.122, \(\LaTeX\) you can enable typesetting in Markdown using the standard syntax. To do so, you need to use of the goldmark `passthrough` extension inside your `hugo.toml`/`hugo.yaml`/`hugo.json`:
 
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@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ markup:
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-You may alter this definition according to your needs. For details, please refer to the official [hugo docs](https://gohugo.io/content-management/mathematics/#step-1).
+You can edit this definition to meet your own needs. For details, see the official [Hugo docs](https://gohugo.io/content-management/mathematics/#step-1).
 
 ### Activating and configuring \(\KaTeX\) support
 
@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@ params:
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-By default, docsy pulls in the latest officially released version of \(\KaTeX\) / mhchem extension at build time. If that doesn't fit your needs, you can specify the wanted \(\KaTeX\) version inside your configuration file `hugo.toml`/`hugo.yaml`/`hugo.json`:
+By default, Docsy pulls in the latest officially released version of \(\KaTeX\) / mhchem extension at build time. If that doesn't fit your needs, you can specify the \(\KaTeX\) version you want in your configuration file `hugo.toml`/`hugo.yaml`/`hugo.json`:
 
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@@ -471,24 +471,24 @@ sequenceDiagram
 
 Support of Mermaid diagrams is automatically enabled as soon as you use a `mermaid` code block on your page.
 
-By default, docsy pulls in the latest officially released version of Mermaid at build time. If that doesn't fit your needs, you can specify the wanted mermaid version inside your configuration file `hugo.toml`/`hugo.yaml`/`hugo.json`:
+By default, Docsy pulls in the latest officially released version of Mermaid at build time. If that doesn't fit your needs, you can specify the wanted mermaid version inside your configuration file `hugo.toml`/`hugo.yaml`/`hugo.json`:
 
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-version = "10.9.0"
+version = "11.4.1"
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 params:
   mermaid:
-    version: 10.9.0
+    version: 11.4.1
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 {
   "params": {
     "mermaid": {
-      "version": "10.9.0"
+      "version": "11.4.1"
     }
   }
 }