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Author: robrichard

spec/Section 3 -- Type System.md

@@ -2206,7 +2206,7 @@ fragment someFragment on User {
 #### @defer Arguments
 
 - `if: Boolean! = true` - When `true`, fragment _should_ be deferred (see
-  related note below). When `false`, fragment will not be deferred. Defaults to
+  related note below). When `false`, fragment must not be deferred. Defaults to
   `true` when omitted.
 - `label: String` - An optional string literal (variables are disallowed) used
   by GraphQL clients to identify data from responses and associate it with the
@@ -2232,10 +2232,6 @@ additional list items in subsequent responses.
 
 The `@include` and `@skip` directives take precedence over `@stream`.
 
-Note: The [Directives Are Defined](#sec-Directives-Are-Defined) validation rule
-ensures that GraphQL Operations containing the `@stream` directive cannot be
-executed by a GraphQL service that does not support this directive.
-
 ```graphql example
 query myQuery($shouldStream: Boolean! = true) {
   user {
@@ -2252,8 +2248,8 @@ query myQuery($shouldStream: Boolean! = true) {
 #### @stream Arguments
 
 - `if: Boolean! = true` - When `true`, field _should_ be streamed (see related
-  note below). When `false`, the field will not be streamed and all list items
-  will be initially included. Defaults to `true` when omitted.
+  note below). When `false`, the field must not be streamed and all list items
+  must be initially included. Defaults to `true` when omitted.
 - `label: String` - An optional string literal (variables are disallowed) used
   by GraphQL clients to identify data from responses and associate it with the
   corresponding stream directive. If provided, the GraphQL service must include

spec/Section 7 -- Response.md

@@ -326,8 +326,8 @@ field that is not known to be complete. Clients should expect the GraphQL
 Service to incrementally deliver the remainder of indicated list field. When the
 Pending Result is associated with a `@defer` directive, it indicates that the
 response fields contained in the deferred fragment are not known to be complete.
-Clients should expect the the GraphQL Service to incrementally deliver the
-remainder of the fields contained in the deferred fragment.
+Clients should expect the GraphQL Service to incrementally deliver the remainder
+of the fields contained in the deferred fragment.
 
 If the associated `@defer` or `@stream` directive contains a `label` argument,
 the Pending Result must contain an entry `label` with the value of this
@@ -370,9 +370,9 @@ An Incremental List Result's `id` entry must match the `id` that was returned in
 a prior Pending Result. This Pending Result must be associated with a `@stream`
 directive.
 
-The Incremental List Result's `path` can be determined using the prior Pending
+The Incremental List Result's path can be determined using the prior Pending
 Result with the same `id` as this Incremental Result. The Incremental List
-Result's `path` is the same as the Pending Result's `path`.
+Result's path is the same as the Pending Result's `path`.
 
 Every Incremental List Result must contain an `items` entry. The `items` entry
 must contain a list of additional list items for the response field at the
@@ -393,27 +393,27 @@ the "Errors" section.
 
 **Incremental Object Result Format**
 
-An Incremental List Result's `id` entry must match the `id` that was returned in
-a prior Pending Result. This Pending Result must be associated with a `@defer`
-directive.
+An Incremental Object Result's `id` entry must match the `id` that was returned
+in a prior Pending Result. This Pending Result must be associated with a
+`@defer` directive.
 
-The Incremental Object Result's `path` can be determined using the prior Pending
+The Incremental Object Result's path can be determined using the prior Pending
 Result with the same `id` as this Incremental Result. The Incremental Object
 Result may contain a `subPath` entry. If the `subPath` entry is present, The
-Incremental Object Record's path can be determined by concatenating the Pending
+Incremental Object Result's path can be determined by concatenating the Pending
 Result's `path` with this `subPath`. If no `subPath` entry is present, the path
 is the same as the Pending Result's `path`.
 
-Every Incremental Object Result must contain an `data` entry. The `data` entry
+Every Incremental Object Result must contain a `data` entry. The `data` entry
 must contain a map of additional response fields. The `data` entry in an
 Incremental Object Result will be of the type of a particular field in the
-GraphQL result. The Incremental Object Result's `path` will contain the path
+GraphQL result. The Incremental Object Result's path will contain the path
 segments of the field this data is associated with.
 
 An Incremental Object Result's data may contain response fields that were
 contained in more than one deferred fragments. In that case, the `id` of the
 Incremental Object Result must point to the Pending Result that results in the
-shortest `subPath`.
+shortest path.
 
 If any field errors were raised during the execution of the results in `data`
 and these errors propagated to a path higher than the Incremental Object