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Author: benjie

src/pages/community/foundation/local-initiative.mdx

@@ -66,8 +66,8 @@ Guidelines must still be honoured).
 ### Local identity
 
 Locals are encouraged to use the name of their area in their Local name and identity.
-The area chosen to be in the Local name should be meaningfully "local". It should
-be culturally identified as a "local area", and at its largest should be a region that you
+The area chosen to be in the Local name should be meaningfully "local." It should
+be culturally identified as a "local area," and at its largest should be a region that you
 can reasonably commute within by public or private transport for an evening event. Often
 this is a city, but we appreciate that's an imperfect simplification.
 
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ this is a city, but we appreciate that's an imperfect simplification.
  - GraphQL California
 </div>
 
-If a brand or company wishes to be featured in the Local's identity, it should take secondary
+If a brand or company wishes to be featured in the Local's identity, it must take secondary
 precedence after the local area name and GraphQL:
 
 <div className="grid md:grid-cols-2 md:gap-5">
@@ -95,8 +95,6 @@ precedence after the local area name and GraphQL:
 </div>
 </div>
 
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 ## Support
 
 Each approved Local is entitled to request the following support for each