The homepage sets up the problem well (Maggi/grandma hook, the coordination layer that's missing) but the ending is abrupt. It jumps from the problem statement to "if this is pulling you, come in" without bridging the reader to what iSRL actually is or what they're being invited into.
Needs a short transition that lands the setup before asking anything of the reader.
The homepage sets up the problem well (Maggi/grandma hook, the coordination layer that's missing) but the ending is abrupt. It jumps from the problem statement to "if this is pulling you, come in" without bridging the reader to what iSRL actually is or what they're being invited into.
Needs a short transition that lands the setup before asking anything of the reader.