The page opens with strong philosophical framing (the Maggi problem, what's missing, what was built) and then cuts directly to "Our goal: 10 monthly sponsors" with no acknowledgment of the reader's position before the pitch.
Needs one bridging sentence between the framing and the ask — something that names what the reader is being invited to participate in before presenting the tiers.
The page opens with strong philosophical framing (the Maggi problem, what's missing, what was built) and then cuts directly to "Our goal: 10 monthly sponsors" with no acknowledgment of the reader's position before the pitch.
Needs one bridging sentence between the framing and the ask — something that names what the reader is being invited to participate in before presenting the tiers.