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Hello Team,
this issue obviously has very low priority and may be I'm wrong, but I open it anyway, with the only desire to make "Jakarta EE Platform Specification" better. If I'm wrong - sorry for wasting your time...
So... If you read the first phrase of "Introduction":
"Enterprises today need to extend their reach, reduce their costs, and lower the response times of their services to customers, employees, and suppliers."
It seems, in my opinion, that here:
- "extends reach" and "reduce costs" of enterprises does not depend on "services",
- and that for enterprises, all that is related to services, is ONLY "lower the response times to customers, employees, and suppliers".
So it seems that "Jakarta EE" (that, theoretically, help to develop applications that provide those services) is only for "lower the response times to customers, employees, and suppliers" and not for "extends reach" and "reduce costs".
If you read the second phrase, however:
"Typically, applications that provide these services must combine existing enterprise information systems (EISs) with new business functions that deliver services to a broad range of users."
now we have "services to a broad range of users" so here we say about services that "extend reach".
And below in the "Introduction":
"The Jakarta™ EE Platform reduces the cost and complexity of developing multitier, enterprise services."
so here we have "reduce the cost".
I repeat, maybe I'm wrong, but what do you think about the following version of the first phrase:
"Enterprises today need the services that extend their reach, reduce their costs, and lower the response times to customers, employees, and suppliers."
Thank you very much for patience!
Have a nice day,
Dmitri.