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docs/man/must_ep2000pro.txt: rephrase for better English [networkupstools#3228]
Signed-off-by: Jim Klimov <jimklimov+nut@gmail.com>
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docs/man/must_ep2000pro.txt

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*must_ep2000pro* -a 'DEVICE_NAME' ['OPTIONS']
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NOTE: This man page only documents the hardware-specific features of the
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must_ep2000pro driver. For information about the core driver, see
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'must_ep2000pro' driver. For information about the core driver, see
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linkman:nutupsdrv[8].
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SUPPORTED HARDWARE
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This driver supports MUST EP2000Pro compatible, line-interactive
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UPS with the following characteristics.
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UPS with the following characteristics:
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1. 12V or 24V external battery
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2. Connection: RS-232 or USB (by RS232-To-USB)
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2. Connection: RS-232 or USB (via RS232-to-USB converter dongle)
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Some models that may be covered by this driver:
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* Energy Smart.2 600W
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Generally, device doesn't have any identification data, so
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autodetection is not possible. Only one documented info is
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software version with unknown meaning.
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Generally, these device do not serve any identification data, so
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autodetection is not possible. Only one documented piece of info is
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"software version" with unknown meaning.
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must_ep2000pro uses the libmodbus project, for Modbus implementation.
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The `must_ep2000pro` driver uses the libmodbus project, for Modbus
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implementation.
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INSTALLATION
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are available. You can force the `configure` script to build it with the
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following arguments:
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:; ./configure --with-serial=yes --with-modbus=yes
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:; ./configure --with-serial=yes --with-modbus=yes
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You also need to give proper (R/W) permissions on the local serial device
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file to allow the NUT driver run-time user to access it. This may need
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This driver also supports the following optional settings:
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*lowbatt*='num'::
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Set the value of battery.charge.low to 'num'. Device itself has only switch off
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Set the value of `battery.charge.low` to 'num'. Device itself has only switch-off
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INSTANT COMMANDS
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If you run the *shutdown.return* command with mains present it does nothing.
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device immediate. No any setting in device documentation for shutdown delay.
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If you run the *shutdown.return* command without mains present it immediately
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powers off the device.
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There is no setting in device documentation to specify a shutdown delay.
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