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<div class="hd-meta">
<span>5-Dim Critique</span>
<span>Β·</span>
<span>2026.04.27</span>
<span>Β·</span>
<span>OD Β· Critique skill</span>
</div>
<h1 class="hd-title">magazine-web-ppt<br>example deck</h1>
</div>
<p class="hd-verdict">
<strong>7.4 / 10 overall.</strong> Strong philosophical
backbone and detail β the deck looks like one designer made
every slide. Innovation is conservative on purpose; functionality
loses points only because the example ships without real images.
</p>
</header>
<!-- ============ Radar + Score table ============ -->
<section class="top">
<div class="radar-card">
<div class="lbl">Score Radar</div>
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<!-- Score area Β· Phil 8 / Hier 7 / Det 8 / Func 6 / Innov 5
Distances from center (radius 110):
Phil 8 β 88 : 150, 150 - 88 = 150, 62
Hier 7 β 77 : 150 + 77*sin(72Β°), 150 - 77*cos(72Β°)
β 150 + 73.24, 150 - 23.79
= 223.24, 126.21
Det 8 β 88 : 150 + 88*sin(144Β°), 150 - 88*cos(144Β°)
β 150 + 51.72, 150 + 71.20
= 201.72, 221.20
Func 6 β 66 : 150 - 66*sin(36Β°), 150 + 66*cos(36Β°)
β 150 - 38.79, 150 + 53.40
= 111.21, 203.40
Innov 5 β 55 : 150 - 55*sin(108Β°),150 - 55*cos(108Β°)
β 150 - 52.32, 150 + 17.00
= 97.68, 167.00
Wait - cos(108Β°) is negative, so 150 - 55*(-0.309) = 150 + 17, that's bottom of axis. But Innov axis is top-left. Let me redo.
Innov axis end point: 45.34, 116.05. Vector from center (150,150): (-104.66, -33.95), magnitude 110.
At score 5, scale = 5/10 = 0.5: center + 0.5 * (-104.66, -33.95) = 150 - 52.33, 150 - 16.97 = 97.67, 133.03 -->
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<text class="lbl" x="270" y="116" text-anchor="middle">HIERARCHY</text>
<text class="lbl-n" x="278" y="100" text-anchor="middle">7</text>
<text class="lbl" x="220" y="259" text-anchor="middle">DETAIL</text>
<text class="lbl-n" x="220" y="275" text-anchor="middle">8</text>
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<text class="lbl-n" x="80" y="275" text-anchor="middle">6</text>
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<div class="overall">Overall Β· <span class="n">7.4</span> / 10 Β· band <em>Strong</em></div>
</div>
<div class="scores" aria-label="Score breakdown">
<div class="score-row">
<div class="score-name">Philosophy consistency<span class="en">Phil. cons.</span></div>
<div class="score-bar"><span class="score-bar-fill" style="width:80%"></span></div>
<div class="score-num">8<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
<div class="score-band band-strong">Strong</div>
</div>
<div class="score-row">
<div class="score-name">Visual hierarchy<span class="en">Hier.</span></div>
<div class="score-bar"><span class="score-bar-fill" style="width:70%"></span></div>
<div class="score-num">7<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
<div class="score-band band-strong">Strong</div>
</div>
<div class="score-row">
<div class="score-name">Detail execution<span class="en">Detail</span></div>
<div class="score-bar"><span class="score-bar-fill" style="width:80%"></span></div>
<div class="score-num">8<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
<div class="score-band band-strong">Strong</div>
</div>
<div class="score-row">
<div class="score-name">Functionality<span class="en">Func.</span></div>
<div class="score-bar"><span class="score-bar-fill" style="width:60%"></span></div>
<div class="score-num">6<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
<div class="score-band band-functional">Functional</div>
</div>
<div class="score-row">
<div class="score-name">Innovation<span class="en">Innov.</span></div>
<div class="score-bar"><span class="score-bar-fill" style="width:50%"></span></div>
<div class="score-num">5<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
<div class="score-band band-functional">Functional</div>
</div>
</div>
</section>
<!-- ============ Dimension cards ============ -->
<h2 class="section-title">Dimension reports<span class="en">Evidence per axis</span></h2>
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<div class="dim-name">Philosophy consistency<span class="en">Phil. cons. Β· ε²ε¦δΈθ΄ζ§</span></div>
<div class="dim-score">8<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
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<p class="dim-evidence">
The 9-slide rhythm reads as a single direction (Monocle Editorial)
from cover to close. <code>chrome</code> vocabulary stays in one
register: <em>"A Talk Β· 2026.04.22"</em>, <em>"Act II Β· 04 / 09"</em>,
<em>"Page 06 Β· ιε₯"</em>. The drift is the <code>kicker</code> on
slide 5 β <em>"Act II"</em> is good, but the slide title <em>"ζε "</em>
is a one-character display word that competes with the Act number for
eyeballs. Worth tightening.
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<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-keep">Keep</span><span>The chrome / kicker / foot vocabulary across all 9 slides β it's the deck's identity.</span></div>
<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-fix">Fix</span><span>Slide 5: bump the kicker to <em>"Act II Β· ζε "</em> or shrink the display title to clear the hierarchy.</span></div>
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<div class="dim-name">Visual hierarchy<span class="en">Hier. Β· θ§θ§ε±ηΊ§</span></div>
<div class="dim-score">7<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
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<p class="dim-evidence">
Hero pages (1, 5, 7, 9) are textbook β display serif dominates,
<code>kicker</code> and <code>meta-row</code> recede. Body pages
mostly hold up: stat-cards on slide 2 use <code>.stat-label</code>
(mono small) β <code>.stat-nb</code> (serif large) β <code>.stat-note</code>
(sans body), three tiers, no collision. The miss is slide 3's
<code>callout</code> β its left-rule competes visually with the
<code>.h-xl</code> heading because both sit at the same x-coord
and similar weight. Eye doesn't know if to read heading-first or
quote-first.
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<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-keep">Keep</span><span>Stat-card 3-tier structure on slide 2 β copy this everywhere.</span></div>
<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-fix">Fix</span><span>Slide 3: indent the <code>callout</code> by <code>2vw</code> or push it below the lead so it visibly belongs to a lower tier.</span></div>
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<div class="dim-head">
<div class="dim-name">Detail execution<span class="en">Detail Β· η»θζ§θ‘</span></div>
<div class="dim-score">8<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
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<p class="dim-evidence">
Magazine-grade in places β every <code>.foot</code> aligns
baseline-to-baseline across all 9 slides; <code>.meta-row</code>
uses one mono spec throughout (<code>.16em</code> tracking,
uppercase). Pipeline on slide 4 keeps perfect grid even when
column count drops to 3. Two real misses: (1) Slide 3 image-slot
uses <code>aspect-ratio:16/10</code> but the placeholder text
inside is centered which makes it look hollow at viewport widths
β€ 1100px; (2) the dot-nav at the bottom overlaps the foot text
on slide 5 because the hero centered grid eats vertical space.
</p>
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<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-keep">Keep</span><span>The mono <code>.foot</code> spec β it's the deck's grace note, do not change letter-spacing.</span></div>
<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-fix">Fix</span><span>Slide 5 hero grid: cap inner content at <code>min-height:78vh</code> so the foot stays clear of the dot-nav.</span></div>
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<div class="dim-head">
<div class="dim-name">Functionality<span class="en">Func. Β· εθ½ζ§</span></div>
<div class="dim-score">6<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
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<p class="dim-evidence">
Keyboard / wheel / touch navigation works correctly inside the
host iframe (verified: β/β/PageUp/PageDown all advance). ESC
opens the index overview, dot clicks register. Big miss is the
example ships <em>without real images</em> β slide 3 shows a
dashed <code>.img-slot</code> placeholder where a product
screenshot belongs, which is the right call for an example file
but means the user can't judge how the layout holds at full
fidelity. Second miss: <code>iframe</code> sandbox is
<code>allow-scripts</code> only in the example card, so the
WebGL background loads but the dot-nav inside the iframe takes
a click before keyboard nav captures focus.
</p>
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<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-keep">Keep</span><span>The 5-bug-fix nav script (real scroller detection, capture-phase listeners) β proven and stable.</span></div>
<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-fix">Fix</span><span>Add a <code>data:</code> URI placeholder image (1Γ1 colored gradient) in the example so slide 3's layout reads at any width.</span></div>
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<div class="dim-head">
<div class="dim-name">Innovation<span class="en">Innov. Β· εζ°ζ§</span></div>
<div class="dim-score">5<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
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<p class="dim-evidence">
Innovation is intentionally conservative β this is a port of
ζΈθ's guizang-ppt-skill, and the value proposition is
<em>predictability</em>, not novelty. The dual WebGL background
(Holographic Dispersion on dark, Spiral Vortex on light) is the
one earned moment; the cross-fade on slide-theme transitions is
subtle and well-timed. But everything else (layout vocabulary,
chrome / foot pattern, theme presets) is faithfully replicated
from the upstream. There is no "lean-forward" surprise that
makes a viewer screenshot a slide. For its declared purpose
(Monocle Editorial direction), this is appropriate. For an
AI demo-day deck, it's a missed opportunity.
</p>
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<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-keep">Keep</span><span>The dual-shader cross-fade β it's the only "magic" the deck performs and it earns its keep.</span></div>
<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-qw">Quick win</span><span>Add one <em>typographic</em> moment per deck β e.g. an oversized italic <code>em</code> kicker that breaks the grid on the closing slide.</span></div>
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<h2 class="section-title">Action lists<span class="en">Keep Β· Fix Β· Quick wins</span></h2>
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<div class="list-head keep"><span>Keep</span><span class="ct">don't break it</span></div>
<ul>
<li>The 9-page rhythm: <code>hero dark β light β dark β light β hero light β dark β hero dark β light β hero light</code>. It's the gold standard.</li>
<li>Dual WebGL backdrops + the <code>1.2s</code> cross-fade between dark and light slides.</li>
<li><code>chrome</code> / <code>kicker</code> / <code>foot</code> vocabulary β they carry the Monocle direction.</li>
<li>3-tier <code>stat-card</code> on slide 2 (<code>label</code> β <code>nb</code> β <code>note</code>).</li>
</ul>
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<section class="list-card">
<div class="list-head fix"><span>Fix</span><span class="ct">P0 β visually expensive</span></div>
<ul>
<li>Slide 3 callout indent β currently competes with <code>.h-xl</code>; push 2vw right or below the lead.</li>
<li>Slide 5 hero centered grid β cap content height at <code>78vh</code> so foot doesn't overlap the dot nav.</li>
<li>Slide 3 add a <code>data:</code> gradient placeholder image so the layout reads at narrow widths even without real assets.</li>
<li>Slide 5 kicker / display: pick one to be primary β currently both fight.</li>
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<div class="list-head qw"><span>Quick wins</span><span class="ct">5β15 min, high signal</span></div>
<ul>
<li>Inject <code>data-screen-label</code> on every slide for accessibility + grep self-checks.</li>
<li>Add one oversized italic <em>en</em> moment on the closing slide for typographic surprise.</li>
<li>Move the <code>#hint</code> overlay from <code>opacity:.4</code> to <code>.55</code> on hero pages β currently invisible.</li>
<li>Add a print stylesheet (one slide per page) so PDF export carries the rhythm.</li>
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