book 1 issues

Author: sharonhoward

texts/00_book_of_remembrances/book_of_remembrances.xml

@@ -6483,12 +6483,10 @@
          <l n="27"><w norm="Fame">Fames</w> <w norm="speak">speake</w> me <choice><abbr>ho.<add place="above">nrs</add></abbr><expan>honour's</expan></choice> <w norm="minion">minnion</w><supplied reason="mod">?</supplied> <w norm="And">&amp;</w> could I<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied></l>
          <l n="28">With <w norm="Indian angels">Indian-Angells</w><surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus><anchor n="166" corresp="#p160n01" resp="ednote"/> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> a speaking <w norm="eye" type="l">Eye</w><pc norm=",">.</pc></l>
          <l n="29">Com<ex>m</ex>and bare heads<pc norm=",">;</pc> <w norm="bowed">bow'd</w> knees<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied>  strike <w norm="justice">Justis</w> <add place="below">dumb</add><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> </l>
-         <!-- Q rendering place=below. word is displayed but with no indication that it's an insertion. how many are there?
-           but then again is it really an <add> anyway? if it's just running out of space on the line, it's not the same as going back and adding something you forgot. if it's not an <add> it's a bit flipping late to be wondering what it is.
-           also did i come up with completely different tagging for same thing on p.161 and not notice?
-           
-           "dumb" is only just above the word "Tongue" on the next line; has a line underneath it, but I think the intention is a boxing effect (as more obviously in "more" above) rather than underlining the word dumb. 
-           [review] Yes, it is an insertion to maintain end-line rhyme of 'dumb' and 'tongue'-->
+         <!-- Q did i come up with completely different tagging for same thing on p.161 and not notice? looks like i did...
+           don't remember anything about this lol
+           <seg rend="place(right)">
+           -->
          <l n="30">As well as blind <w norm="and">&amp;</w> lame, <w norm="and">&amp;</w> give a <w norm="tongue">Tongue</w>
          </l>
          <l n="31">To stones by <w norm="epitaphs" type="l">Epitaphs</w>; be <w norm="called">calld</w> great master</l>

texts/01_book_one/book_one.xml

@@ -6561,8 +6561,7 @@ In the vacancy of a wise <w norm="and">&amp;</w> prudent <w norm="governor">Gove
                 Daughter<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <persName ref="ppl:awt1" n="per598">Alice Thornton</persName><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> 
 
                 of her
-                <w norm="being">beeing</w> <w norm="My" type="u">my</w> 
-                    <!-- NOTE a correction in a darker ink - identified as later hand so not included. -->
+                <!-- NOTE a correction in a darker ink, identified as later hand so not included. -->
                  <rs type="person" ref="ppl:ktp1"><w norm="Fourth" type="u">fourth</w> <w norm="Child" type="u">child</w></rs><pc norm=",">.</pc><anchor n="193" corresp="#p145n01" resp="ednote"/><lb/>
                 <date type="birth" when-custom="1656-06-12">June 12<hi rend="superscript">th</hi><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> 1656</date>. <w norm="Baptised">Baptized</w> <date when-custom="1656-06-14">the 14<hi rend="superscript">th</hi></date>
             </head>
@@ -13285,25 +13284,30 @@ In the vacancy of a wise <w norm="and">&amp;</w> prudent <w norm="governor">Gove
             <p xml:id="p-0780"> <quote xml:id="q-940" type="phrase" source="#_Romans_1:17 #_Galatians_3:11 #_Hebrews_10:38">The <w norm="just" type="l">Just</w> shall live by faith</quote>. <milestone unit="marker" rend="delim(diagonal2)"/></p>
             <p xml:id="p-0781"><persName ref="ppl:wt1" n="per1299">Mr <w norm="Thornton's">Thorntons</w></persName> <term n="997" xml:id="b1p279t01" ref="gloss:b1p279t01">motto</term> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> my <w norm="own">owne</w>.</p>
             <p xml:id="p-0782">
-           <!-- Q check with ST 
-               this is not great... I'm not sure it can be fixed.
-           -->
-        <!-- NOTE the three <seg>s are arranged horizontally across the page. 
+                
+        <!-- Q TEST let's see what this does.
+            the three <seg>s are arranged horizontally across the page. 
              this is not happening in rendering. 
              curlybraces markup is not happening either, not sure why not given that it works elsewhere.
+             
         -->
-        <seg type="epigraph" rend="place(left) braced(})">
-          <hi rend="italic-mod-only">Nisi Christus Nemo:</hi><anchor n="408" corresp="#p279n02" resp="ednote"/><lb/>
-            <hi rend="italic-mod-only">Tout pour <w norm="l'église:">le' Eglize:</w></hi><anchor n="409" corresp="#p279n03" resp="ednote"/></seg>
-            <seg rend="place(centre) braced(})">
-                  None but Christ.<lb/>
-                  All for the <w norm="church">Church</w><supplied reason="mod">.</supplied></seg>
-            <seg rend="place(right_mid)">God</seg>
+        <seg type="epigraph" rend="braced(})">
+          <hi rend="italic-mod-only">Nisi Christus Nemo:</hi><anchor n="408" corresp="#p279n02" resp="ednote"/><!--<lb/>-->
+            <hi rend="italic-mod-only">Tout pour <w norm="l'église:">le' Eglize:</w></hi><anchor n="409" corresp="#p279n03" resp="ednote"/>
+        </seg>
+                <lb/>
+        <seg rend="braced(})">
+             None but Christ.<!--<lb/>-->
+             All for the <w norm="church">Church</w><supplied reason="mod">.</supplied></seg>
+          
+          <fw place="right">    
+            <seg>God</seg>
+          </fw>
                 <!-- Q [layout] uses curly brackets to connect the two phrases and 'God' is positioned midway between the two.-->
 
-                </p>
+        </p>
 
-            <p><term n="998" xml:id="b1p279t02" ref="gloss:b1p279t02"><w norm="Anagram">Annagrame</w></term>.<anchor n="410" corresp="#p279n04" resp="ednote"/></p>
+        <p><term n="998" xml:id="b1p279t02" ref="gloss:b1p279t02"><w norm="Anagram">Annagrame</w></term>.<anchor n="410" corresp="#p279n04" resp="ednote"/></p>
 
            </div>
         <div xml:id="div-127" type="poetry" rend="pre(rule)">