comments review

Author: sharonhoward

texts/01_book_one/book_one.xml

@@ -2291,8 +2291,8 @@
                  <pc>-</pc>fection</w>, adorned with those <w norm="heavenly">Heavenlie</w> qualities<lb/>
                  of knowledge <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w norm="freedom">freedome</w> of <w norm="will" type="l">Will</w><surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> whereby <w norm="we">wee</w><lb/>
                  had some <w norm="resemblance">remsemblance</w> of thee<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> our <w norm="great" type="l">Great</w> Creator<pc norm=";">.</pc><lb/>
-                 <w norm="neither" type="l">Neither</w> as <w norm="we">wee</w> <w norm="lie">lye</w> in the <w norm="loins">loynes</w> of our <w norm="first">frist</w>
-                   <!-- Q sic? [endnote] [word] SiC - i.e., first. -->
+                 <w norm="neither" type="l">Neither</w> as <w norm="we">wee</w> <w norm="lie">lye</w> in the <w norm="loins">loynes</w> of our <choice><sic>frist</sic><corr>first</corr></choice>
+                   
                  <w norm="parents" type="l">Parents</w><lb/>
                 <w norm="who">whoe</w>, <quote xml:id="q-137" type="partial" source="#_Jeremiah_31:29-30 #_Ezekiel_18:2">by eating that <w norm="sour">sower</w> grape<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> hath <w norm="set">sett</w> an <w norm="edge" type="l">Edge</w><lb/>
                  upon our teeth</quote><pc norm=";">.</pc> <quote xml:id="q-138" type="allusion" source="#_Numbers_19:20"><w norm="much" type="l">Much</w> <w norm="less">Lesse</w> as <w norm="we">wee</w> are defiled with<lb/>
@@ -4542,8 +4542,8 @@ In the vacancy of a wise <w norm="and">&amp;</w> prudent <w norm="governor">Gove
                  <w norm="brother" type="l">Brother</w></rs><pc norm=",">.</pc> which was the <term n="273" xml:id="b1p102t05" ref="gloss:b1p102t05">preludium</term> to our many afflictions<lb/>
                  <w norm="and">&amp;</w> troubles in that <w norm="poor">poore</w> <w norm="family" type="l">Family</w><pc norm=",">.</pc> when we lost such a head<lb/>
                 <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w norm="pillar">Piller</w><surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> in <w norm="whose">whoes</w> life consisted much the <w norm="continuance">contineuance</w><surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> <add place="above">of</add><lb/>
-                <supplied reason="omitted">of</supplied> that noble extraction<surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w norm="gallantry">galantry</w>, not <w norm="leaving">leaveing</w> <add place="above">in it</add> his second<lb/>
-                 behind him. 
+               that noble extraction<surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w norm="gallantry">galantry</w>, not <w norm="leaving">leaveing</w> <add place="above">in it</add> his second<lb/>
+               behind him. 
                 The <w norm="occasion">occassion</w> of his death <w norm="and">&amp;</w> our misery was<lb/>
                 this. <milestone unit="marker" rend="delim(diagonal2)"/> <w norm="Upon">uppon</w> the dispatch of that <w norm="business">bussinesse</w> at <placeName ref="place:Lond_080" n="place172">London</placeName><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> by<lb/>
                 <persName ref="ppl:rd1" n="per391"><w norm="my" type="l">My</w> <w norm="cousin" type="l">Cosen</w> Darley</persName><surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> of the discharge<surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> of his <w norm="estate" type="l">Estate</w> from <term n="274" xml:id="b1p102t06" ref="gloss:b1p102t06"><choice><abbr>Seq.</abbr><expan>sequestration</expan></choice></term><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied><anchor n="138" corresp="#p102n02" resp="ednote"/><lb/>
@@ -13312,10 +13312,12 @@ In the vacancy of a wise <w norm="and">&amp;</w> prudent <w norm="governor">Gove
             <p xml:id="p-0781"><persName ref="ppl:wt1" n="per1299">Mr <w norm="Thornton's">Thorntons</w></persName> <term n="997" xml:id="b1p279t01" ref="gloss:b1p279t01">motto</term> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> my <w norm="own">owne</w>.</p>
             <p xml:id="p-0782">
            <!-- Q check with ST [curlybraces]
-               this is a problem... I'm not sure it can be fixed.
+               this is a problem... I'm not sure it can be fixed. But maybe could be improved.
                NB I've slightly changed the order of the text as transcribed 
            -->
-        <!-- NOTE the three <seg>s are arranged horizontally across the page.  -->
+        <!-- NOTE the three <seg>s are arranged horizontally across the page. 
+             this is not happening in rendering. curlybraces markup is not happening either, not sure why not given that it works elsewhere.
+        -->
         <seg type="epigraph" rend="place(left) braced(})">
           <hi rend="italic-mod-only">Nisi Christus Nemo:</hi><anchor n="408" corresp="#p279n02" resp="ednote"/><lb/>
             <hi rend="italic-mod-only">Tour pour <w norm="l'église:">le' Eglize:</w></hi><anchor n="409" corresp="#p279n03" resp="ednote"/></seg>
@@ -13410,23 +13412,27 @@ In the vacancy of a wise <w norm="and">&amp;</w> prudent <w norm="governor">Gove
                 <fw type="pageNum">282</fw>
         <div xml:id="div-130" type="poetry" subtype="sonnet">
             <head place="centre" rend="post(rule)">An <w norm="Inducement" type="u">inducement</w> to Love Heaven<anchor n="416" corresp="#p281n01" resp="ednote"/> <milestone unit="marker" rend="delim(diagonal2)"/></head>
-            <!-- Q layout on page is now !!!! not entirely sure why it's happened. lg removed divs, but what about ruled lines? -->
+            <!-- Q layout on page is now !!!! not entirely sure why it's happened. PC describes it as "gnarly"...
+                lg -> removed divs, and still need ruled lines.
+                final decision on Monday but probably will have to get rid of lg and reinstate divs.
+            -->
             <lg type="octave">
+        <!--<div xml:id="div-131" type="poetry" rend="post(rule)"> can't have this inside lg-->
             <l n="1">Leave me<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <w norm="O" type="u">o</w> love, which <w norm="reachest" type="l">Reachest</w> but to dust<pc norm=",">.</pc></l>
             <l n="2">And thou my <w norm="mind">minde</w> aspire to higher things<supplied reason="mod">.</supplied></l>
             <l n="3">Grow rich in grace, which never <w type="archaism">taketh</w> <w norm="rust" type="l">Rust</w><pc norm=",">;</pc></l>
             <l n="4"><w norm="Whatever">What ever</w> fades, but <w norm="fading">faiding</w> pleasure brings.</l>
 
-        <!--</div>-->
-        <!--<div xml:id="div-131" type="poetry" rend="pre(rule)">-->
+        <!--ruled line here... can't do this without another div. but can't have div inside lg.  why alice why -->
 
             <l n="5">Draw in thy <w norm="beams">beames</w>, and humble all thy might<pc norm=",">.</pc></l>
             <l n="6">To that <term n="1000" xml:id="b1p281t01" ref="gloss:b1p281t01"><w norm="sweet">Sweete</w></term> <w norm="yoke">yoake</w>, where lasting <w norm="freedoms">freedomes</w> be<pc norm=",">.</pc></l>
             <l n="7">Which <w norm="breaks">breakes</w> the <w norm="clouds" type="l">Clouds</w>, and opens forth the light<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied></l>
             <l n="8">That doth both shine<surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> and gives us sight to see.</l>
-            </lg>
         <!--</div>-->
-        <!--<div xml:id="div-132" type="poetry" rend="pre(rule)">-->
+            </lg>
+            <!-- ruled line here -->
+<!--        <div xml:id="div-132" type="poetry" rend="pre(rule) post(rule)">-->
             <lg type="sestet">
             <l n="9"><w norm="Oh">O</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> take fast hold, <w norm="let">lett</w> that light by thy guide<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied></l>
             <l n="10">In this <w norm="small">smale</w> course, which birth <w norm="draws">drawes</w> out to death<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied></l>
@@ -13435,6 +13441,8 @@ In the vacancy of a wise <w norm="and">&amp;</w> prudent <w norm="governor">Gove
             <l n="13">Then<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <w norm="farewell">fairewell</w> world, thy uttermost I <w norm="see" type="l">See</w><pc norm=";">.</pc></l>
             <l n="14"><w norm="Eternal">Eternall</w> love<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <w norm="maintain">maintaine</w> thy life in <w norm="me">mee</w>. <milestone unit="marker" rend="delim(diagonal2)"/></l>
            </lg> 
+            <!-- ruled line here -->
+        <!--</div>-->
       </div>
 
         <div xml:id="div-133" type="poetry">
@@ -13782,8 +13790,7 @@ In the vacancy of a wise <w norm="and">&amp;</w> prudent <w norm="governor">Gove
 
                 <fw type="pageNum">289</fw> <lb/>
 
-                <persName ref="ppl:jb3" n="per1312">Joseph Browning</persName><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <w norm="being">beeing</w> the <w norm="coachman">coach man</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> a <w norm="very">vey</w>
-                    <!-- Q sic rather than norm? [endnote] Sic - for very.-->
+                <persName ref="ppl:jb3" n="per1312">Joseph Browning</persName><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <w norm="being">beeing</w> the <w norm="coachman">coach man</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> a <choice><sic>vey</sic><corr>very</corr></choice>
 
                 <lb/>
                 <w norm="careful">cairefull</w> man<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <w norm="yet">yett</w> could not <choice><sic>avoy</sic><corr>avoid</corr></choice> that way being<lb/>
@@ -14150,7 +14157,7 @@ In the vacancy of a wise <w norm="and">&amp;</w> prudent <w norm="governor">Gove
                 drive them <w norm="away">a way</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> he looked up <w norm="and">&amp;</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> thought it had <w norm="been">bine</w><lb/>
                 <rs ref="ppl:aow1" type="person">my <choice><abbr>d.</abbr><expan>dear</expan></choice> <choice><abbr>m.</abbr><expan>mother</expan></choice></rs><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <w norm="cursed" type="l">Cursed</w> me bitterly <w norm="and">&amp;</w> wished the <term n="1034" xml:id="b1p295t01" ref="gloss:b1p295t01"><w norm="deil">Deale</w></term> <w norm="blow">bloew</w><lb/>
                  me blind <w norm="and">&amp;</w> into the <w norm="air">Ayre</w>. <w norm="And">&amp;</w> I had <w norm="been">bin</w> a <w norm="thorn">thorne</w> in his<lb/>
-                <w norm="heel">heele</w><pc norm=",">.</pc> but he would be a <w norm="thorn">Thorne</w> in my side<surplus reason="superfluous">.</surplus> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w type="query">drved</w><!-- Q CHECK SD and make a decision about this. --> the<lb/>
+                <w norm="heel">heele</w><pc norm=",">.</pc> but he would be a <w norm="thorn">Thorne</w> in my side<surplus reason="superfluous">.</surplus> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w type="query">drved</w><!-- Q sic CHECK SD and make a decision about this. --> the<lb/>
                  <w norm="cattle">Cattell</w> <w norm="away">a way</w> to <placeName ref="place:Rich_043" n="place409"><choice><abbr>Richmd</abbr><expan>Richmond</expan></choice></placeName> where <persName ref="ppl:xl2" n="per1359"><w norm="General">Generall</w> <w norm="Leslie">Lecsley</w></persName> was.</p>
             <p xml:id="p-0812">So<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <rs ref="ppl:aow1" n="per1360" type="person">my <w norm="dear">deare</w> <w norm="mother">mothr</w></rs> was <w norm="forced">forcd</w> to <w norm="take" type="l">Take</w> the <w norm="pay" type="l">Pay</w> he<lb/>
                  was to <w norm="have">heve</w> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w norm="carried">carrid</w> it to <rs ref="ppl:xl2" n="per1361" type="person">the <w norm="general">Generall</w></rs> that laid at my<lb/>

texts/02_book_two/book_two.xml

@@ -4508,7 +4508,7 @@
 
             <fw rend="italic" type="pageNum">106
 
-               <!-- Q CHECK with ST? [endnote] Check MS - hand?-->
+               <!-- Q CHECK with ST? check SD to see if there's still any query about this. [endnote] Check MS - hand?-->
             </fw>
             <lb/> 
 
@@ -7322,8 +7322,11 @@ desires <w norm="thereto">there to</w><supplied reason="mod">)</supplied><anchor
             <anchor n="evn5" xml:id="evn5-end" type="event"/>
             <milestone spanTo="#ev142-end" xml:id="ev142-start" n="ev142" unit="event"/>she did send me <supplied reason="mod">(</supplied>by <persName ref="ppl:dcl1" n="per858"><w norm="Daphne">Dafeny</w></persName><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> her <w norm="servant">servt</w><supplied reason="mod">)</supplied><lb/>
             in <w norm="money">monny</w> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> gold <supplied reason="mod">(</supplied>which she charged her not to tell<lb/>
-            me of <w norm="until">till</w> after her decease<supplied reason="mod">)</supplied> <w norm="above" type="l">Above</w> <measure quantity="100" unit="£" type="currency">one hundred</measure><lb/>
-         <!-- Q well this is fun... pounds in money *goes over a page break*. measure markup does not do anything at all! try marking up the first bit with measure and the second bit with surplus? -->
+            me of <w norm="until">till</w> after her decease<supplied reason="mod">)</supplied> <w norm="above" type="l">Above</w> <surplus reason="superfluous">one hundred</surplus><lb/>
+         <!-- Q well this is fun... pounds in money *goes over a page break*. measure markup does not do anything at all! try marking up the first bit with measure and the second bit with surplus? 
+         well, almost, except I overlooked that there's added mod punctuation and a footnote. try again.
+         it's ugh though.
+         -->
 
       <pb xml:id="page-175" n="175"/>
 
@@ -7333,7 +7336,7 @@ desires <w norm="thereto">there to</w><supplied reason="mod">)</supplied><anchor
 
          <!-- unpaginated: 173 -->
 
-<surplus reason="superfluous">and 60 <w norm="pounds" type="l">Pounds</w></surplus><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied><anchor n="260" corresp="#p175n01" resp="ednote"/> <w norm="put">putt</w> into my <w norm="trunk" type="tolower">Trunke</w> one night<lb/>
+<measure quantity="160" unit="£" type="currency">and 60 <unit>Pounds</unit></measure><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied><anchor n="260" corresp="#p175n01" resp="ednote"/> <w norm="put">putt</w> into my <w norm="trunk" type="tolower">Trunke</w> one night<lb/>
             when <rs ref="ppl:wt1" n="per859" type="person">my husband</rs> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> I was in bed<pc norm=".">,</pc> <w norm="At" type="u">at</w> our <w norm="bed-feet">bed feete</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied><lb/>
             <w norm="the" type="l">The</w> said <w norm="trunk" type="tolower">Trunke</w> stood which I<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <w norm="afterwards">affterwards</w>, <w norm="took" type="tolower">Tooke</w> <w norm="and">&amp;</w><lb/>
             disposed of much of it for to furnish <persName ref="ppl:wt1" n="per860">Mr <choice><abbr>Th</abbr><expan>Thornton's</expan></choice></persName> <w norm="house">hous</w><lb/>

texts/03_book_three/book_three.xml

@@ -1325,8 +1325,7 @@ tell me of it for the <term n="27" xml:id="b3p026t05" ref="gloss:b3p026t05"><w n
            <anchor n="35" corresp="#p028n01" resp="ednote"/>But thou<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> O Lord<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> my God, <w norm="who">whoe</w> <w type="archaism" norm="seest">see'st</w> my <w norm="sorrows" type="tolower">Sorrowes</w> and<lb/>
               <w norm="my" type="l">My</w> sufferings of all <w norm="kinds">kindes</w><pc norm=",">.</pc> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w type="archaism">knowest</w> the cause of thy<lb/>
               <w norm="handmaid">hand maide</w><pc norm=",">;</pc> I humbly cast <w norm="down">downe</w> <w norm="myself">my selfe</w> <w norm="at">att</w> the <quote xml:id="q-068" type="paraphrase" source="#_Hebrews_4:16"><w norm="throne" type="l">Throne</w><lb/>
-              of thy grace</quote> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> mercy, <w norm="beseeching">Beecheing</w>
-               <!-- Q [sic] Sic for 'Besecheing'. -->
+              of thy grace</quote> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> mercy, <choice><sic>Beecheing</sic><corr>beseeching</corr></choice>
              thee<surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> to <w norm="pity" type="tolower">Pitty</w> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w norm="pardon" type="l">Pardon</w> all<lb/>
            things amiss <supplied reason="mod">—</supplied> in <w norm="myself">my selfe</w><surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> or <rs ref="ppl:wt1" n="per59" type="person">husband</rs><surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> in thy <w norm="pure" type="l">Pure</w> eyes<surplus reason="superfluous">.</surplus> <supplied reason="mod">—</supplied> which did<lb/>
           provoke thy displeasure against us<surplus reason="superfluous">;</surplus> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> has <w norm="cut">cutt</w> <w norm="off">of</w> the thread<lb/>
@@ -2192,8 +2191,7 @@ to that living<surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> and gave him <w norm="a"
       </note>
 
            <anchor n="94" corresp="#p037n04" resp="ednote"/>He<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <w norm="having">haveing</w> under the notion of <w norm="friendship">freindship</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <w norm="got">gott</w> some <w norm="footsteps">foot steps</w><lb/>
-          in his <w norm="discourse">discorce</w><surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> how to bend his way<pc norm=",">;</pc> <w norm="took">tooke</w> <w norm="advice">advie</w>
-               <!-- Q [sic] I.e. 'aduice'. -->
+          in his <w norm="discourse">discorce</w><surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> how to bend his way<pc norm=",">;</pc> <w norm="took">tooke</w> <choice><sic>advie</sic><corr>advice</corr></choice>
            of his <w norm="friends">freinds</w><surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> <w norm="and">&amp;</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied><lb/>
           <w norm="perceiving">perceaving</w><surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> that <persName ref="ppl:ms1" n="per187">Mr <w norm="Syddall">Siddall</w></persName><surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> we all were of the Church of England<lb/>
            <surplus reason="superfluous">(</surplus>which he mortally hated<pc norm=",">).</pc> knew by that <term n="99" xml:id="b3p037t06" ref="gloss:b3p037t06">clew</term> how to wind up his<lb/>
@@ -2203,8 +2201,7 @@ to that living<surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> and gave him <w norm="a"
 
          <p xml:id="p-0115" rend="first-line-indent">
            Which was a <w norm="piece">peice</w> of the greatest <w norm="treachery" type="l">Treachery</w>, <w norm="being">beeing</w> acted against<lb/>
-          a <term n="101" xml:id="b3p037t08" ref="gloss:b3p037t08"><w norm="poor">poore</w></term> family, that cannot be <w norm="paralleled">Paralled</w><surplus reason="superfluous">;</surplus>
-               <!-- Q [sic] i.e. 'Paralleled'. -->
+          a <term n="101" xml:id="b3p037t08" ref="gloss:b3p037t08"><w norm="poor">poore</w></term> family, that cannot be <choice><sic>Paralled</sic><corr>paralleled</corr></choice><surplus reason="superfluous">;</surplus>
            but by his <w norm="own">owne</w> <w norm="nation" type="l">Nation</w><supplied reason="mod">:</supplied><lb/>
            who<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> first betrayed his <w norm="sacred" type="l">Sacred</w> majesty, <persName ref="ppl:cs1" n="per188">King Charles <choice><sic>the first</sic><corr>I</corr></choice></persName>, <w norm="and">&amp;</w> then<lb/>
            sold him<surplus reason="superfluous">;</surplus> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <term n="102" xml:id="b3p037t09" ref="gloss:b3p037t09">imbrued</term> <w norm="their">thire</w> hand<surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> in his innocent <w norm="blood" type="l">Blood</w>.<anchor n="96" corresp="#p037n06" resp="ednote"/><anchor xml:id="ev28-end" n="ev28" type="event"/>