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sharonhoward · sharonhoward · commit ba896cb70e1e · 2025-02-15T08:11:16.000Z
diff --git a/texts/00_book_of_remembrances/book_of_remembrances.xml b/texts/00_book_of_remembrances/book_of_remembrances.xml
@@ -342,12 +342,12 @@
            with <w norm="Their">theire</w> <w norm="Births" type="u">births</w><surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w norm="Other" type="u">other</w> <w norm="Remarks" type="u">remarks</w><lb/>
            as <w norm="Concerning">conserning</w> <w norm="Myself" type="u">my selfe</w> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> Family<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied><lb/>
            <w norm="Beginning">begining</w> from the <w norm="Year">yeare</w><surplus reason="superfluous">.</surplus> <date datingMethod="#JulianMar" when-custom="1625">1625</date><surplus reason="superfluous">.</surplus><anchor n="1" corresp="#p001n01" resp="ednote"/>
-           <!-- NOTE [dates] definitely OS. [add] 5 was written over something, maybe 6. -->
+           <!-- NOTE [dates] definitely OS. 5 was written over something, maybe 6. -->
          </titlePart>
          </docTitle>
          <docAuthor>  
          <persName ref="ppl:awt1" n="per1" type="monogram">
-           ATW <!-- NOTE there is also a monogram near the end of book 1 and beginning of book ?3 -->
+           ATW 
          </persName><anchor n="2" corresp="#p001n02" resp="ednote"/>
               
          </docAuthor>
@@ -479,7 +479,7 @@
 
 
       <div xml:id="div-005" type="poetry" subtype="prayer">
-        <!-- NOTE not in index? -->
+        <!-- NOTE not in index -->
             <fw type="pageNum">6</fw>
          <head>
            Prayer<surplus reason="superfluous">.</surplus>
@@ -618,8 +618,8 @@
        <div xml:id="div-009" rend="post(rule_short_right)">
          <fw>
            <fw xml:id="mnote-0001" place="left margin">
-             <!-- NOTE close resemblance to unicode dotted cross symbol -->
-             <!-- NOTE this is not strictly a signe-de-renvoi because its matching marker later (div097) is missing.  -->
+             
+             <!-- NOTE not strictly a signe-de-renvoi because its matching marker (div097) is missing. cf book 1 which has the pair.  -->
              <g ref="#u8284">⁜</g>
            </fw> <anchor n="10" corresp="#p012n01" resp="ednote"/>
             <fw type="head" rend="underline">
@@ -677,7 +677,6 @@
            <w norm="glory" type="l">Glory</w> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> praise even to my <w norm="life's">lives</w> end<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <lb/>
            <w norm="amen" type="l">Amen</w>. <w norm="And">&amp;</w> that for my <w norm="saviour's">Saviours</w> <w norm="sake" type="l">Sake</w><lb/>
            alone<pc norm=",">.</pc> the <w norm="alpha" type="l">Alpha</w> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w norm="omega" type="l">Omega</w>. Amen.
-           <!-- NOTE removed text underline under "en ." and added to div rend as a short ruled line.  -->
          </p>
          </div>
             <pb xml:id="page-014" n="14"/>
@@ -810,7 +809,7 @@
            <w norm="This" type="u">this</w> was <w norm="done">don</w> at night when my<lb/>
            <rs ref="ppl:cw1" n="per20" type="person">father</rs> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <rs ref="ppl:aow1" n="per21" type="person">mother</rs> was at court. <w norm="But" type="u">but</w><lb/>
           we were preserved in my <persName ref="ppl:xl1" n="per22">Lady<lb/>
-            <w norm="Leveson's">Levertons</w></persName> <rs type="place" n="place-supp1"><w norm="house" type="l">House</w></rs><pc norm=",">.</pc><!-- NOTE [place] uncertainty about whether this is in St Martin's Lane, dropped ref. --> <w norm="being">beeing</w> carried by<lb/>
+            <w norm="Leveson's">Levertons</w></persName> <rs type="place" n="place-supp1"><w norm="house" type="l">House</w></rs><pc norm=",">.</pc><!-- NOTE location uncertain, could be St Martin's Lane. --> <w norm="being">beeing</w> carried by<lb/>
            <persName ref="ppl:st1" n="per23"><w norm="Sarah">Sara</w></persName> thither. <w norm="This" type="u">this</w> fire did <w norm="seem">seeme</w> to<lb/>
            me as if the <quote source="#_2Peter_2:9" xml:id="q-009" type="phrase">day of <w norm="judgement">Judgment</w></quote> was<lb/>
            come <w norm="and">&amp;</w> caused great <w norm="fear">feare</w> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w norm="trembling">tremblig</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied><lb/>
@@ -6508,10 +6507,11 @@
          <l n="24">Great<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> feared; <w norm="fair">faire</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> tempted; high<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> still envied <add xml:id="ex-add-below-02" place="below">more</add><supplied reason="mod">.</supplied></l>
          <l n="25"><w norm="Would" type="u">would</w> the world then adopt me for her <w norm="heir">heire</w><pc norm="?">.</pc> </l>
          <l n="26">Would <w norm="beauty's">beauties</w> <w norm="queen">queene</w> <w norm="entitle">intitle</w> me the <w norm="fair">faire</w><pc norm="?">.</pc></l>
-         <l n="27"><w norm="Fame">Fames</w> <w norm="speak">speake</w> me <w norm="honour's"><w type="add">ho.<add place="above">nrs</add></w></w> <w norm="minion">minnion</w><supplied reason="mod">?</supplied> <w norm="And">&amp;</w> could I<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied></l>
+         <l n="27"><w norm="Fame">Fames</w> <w norm="speak">speake</w> me <w norm="honour's"><w type="add">ho.<add place="above">nrs</add></w><!-- Q what is w type=add? no memory of that. does it do anything in rendering? check, and how many. --></w> <w norm="minion">minnion</w><supplied reason="mod">?</supplied> <w norm="And">&amp;</w> could I<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied></l>
          <l n="28">With <w norm="Indian angels">Indian-Angells</w><surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus><anchor n="166" corresp="#p160n01" resp="ednote"/> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> a speaking <w norm="eye" type="l">Eye</w><pc norm=",">.</pc></l>
          <l n="29">Com<ex>m</ex>and bare heads<pc norm=",">;</pc> <w norm="bowed">bow'd</w> knees<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied>  strike <w norm="justice">Justis</w> <add place="below">dumb</add><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> </l>
-         <!-- NOTE "dumb" is only just above the word "Tongue" on the next line; has a line underneath it, but I think the intention is a boxing effect (as more obviously in "more" above) rather than underlining the word dumb. 
+         <!-- Q rendering place=below. word is displayed but with no indication that it's an insertion. how many are there?
+           "dumb" is only just above the word "Tongue" on the next line; has a line underneath it, but I think the intention is a boxing effect (as more obviously in "more" above) rather than underlining the word dumb. 
            [review] Yes, it is an insertion to maintain end-line rhyme of 'dumb' and 'tongue'-->
          <l n="30">As well as blind <w norm="and">&amp;</w> lame, <w norm="and">&amp;</w> give a <w norm="tongue">Tongue</w>
          </l>
diff --git a/texts/01_book_one/book_one.xml b/texts/01_book_one/book_one.xml
@@ -13311,7 +13311,7 @@ In the vacancy of a wise <w norm="and">&amp;</w> prudent <w norm="governor">Gove
             <p xml:id="p-0781"><persName ref="ppl:wt1" n="per1299">Mr <w norm="Thornton's">Thorntons</w></persName> <term n="997" xml:id="b1p279t01" ref="gloss:b1p279t01">motto</term> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> my <w norm="own">owne</w>.</p>
             <p xml:id="p-0782">
            <!-- Q check with ST 
-               this is a problem... I'm not sure it can be fixed. maybe could be improved.
+               this is not great... I'm not sure it can be fixed.
            -->
         <!-- NOTE the three <seg>s are arranged horizontally across the page. 
              this is not happening in rendering. 
diff --git a/texts/02_book_two/book_two.xml b/texts/02_book_two/book_two.xml
@@ -5423,8 +5423,8 @@ when <w norm="there">theire</w> was <w norm="none">non</w> to <w norm="help">hel
             us to <w norm="turn">turne</w> back to <placeName ref="place:Kirk_030" n="place114">Kirklington</placeName> by <persName ref="ppl:td1" n="per613">Mr <w norm="Danby's">Danbys</w></persName><lb/>
             kind <w norm="message">msiage</w> to us<anchor xml:id="ev93-end" n="ev93" type="event"/> <supplied reason="mod">(</supplied><milestone spanTo="#evn3-end" xml:id="evn3-start" n="evn3" unit="event" corresp="td1_1644_death_marston"/><w norm="though">tho</w> that day he was shot <w norm="after">aftr</w><anchor n="evn3" xml:id="evn3-end" type="event"/><supplied reason="mod">).</supplied></p>
           
-          <p xml:id="p-0404" rend="first-line-indent"><quote source="#BCP,_Prayer_with_Thanksgiving,_Fifth_November" xml:id="q-262" type="allusion">O Lord<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> our God<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> how has thy <w norm="miraculous">maraculous</w> <w norm="power">Pow</w>
-               <!-- Q maybe abbr? not w anyway. [sic] I.e. 'Power'. -->
+          <p xml:id="p-0404" rend="first-line-indent"><quote source="#BCP,_Prayer_with_Thanksgiving,_Fifth_November" xml:id="q-262" type="allusion">O Lord<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> our God<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> how has thy <w norm="miraculous">maraculous</w> <choice><abbr>Pow</abbr><expan>power</expan></choice>
+               
             
             <lb/>
              <w norm="been">bin</w> <w norm="showed">shewed</w> <w norm="at">att</w> all times in <w norm="delivering">delivring</w> me<supplied reason="mod">!</supplied></quote> Glory be to<lb/>
@@ -9555,7 +9555,7 @@ which words I did utterly deny<supplied reason="mod">;</supplied> for I never<lb
                <w norm="husband's">husbands</w></rs> <w norm="friends">freinds</w><supplied reason="mod">.</supplied> <persName ref="ppl:jd2" n="per1145"><w norm="My" type="u">my</w> good <w norm="brother" type="l">Brother</w> Denton</persName><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> who with<lb/>
             his prudence did mitigate <w norm="their">there</w> fury<pc norm=",">.</pc> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w norm="although">alltho</w> they<lb/>
             demanded <w norm="at">att</w> first the whole <w norm="sum">some</w> of <measure type="currency" unit="£">800<am rend="superscript italic">l</am></measure> to be<lb/>
-            <w norm="forthwith">forth with</w> paid to them <supplied reason="mod">(</supplied>for which the <choice><abbr>State<!-- Q sic or abbr. --></abbr><expan>statute</expan></choice>
+            <w norm="forthwith">forth with</w> paid to them <supplied reason="mod">(</supplied>for which the <choice><abbr>State</abbr><expan>statute</expan></choice>
                
             
             was <w norm="entered" type="tolower">Entred</w><supplied reason="mod">).</supplied><anchor n="335" corresp="#p232n01" resp="ednote"/>
diff --git a/texts/03_book_three/book_three.xml b/texts/03_book_three/book_three.xml
@@ -5051,8 +5051,7 @@ a <term n="242" xml:id="b3p058t02" ref="gloss:b3p058t02">delicate</term> <w norm
 
          <w norm="charity" type="l">Charity</w> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> affection for <rs ref="ppl:kwd1" n="per556" type="person">my <w norm="sister's">sisters</w></rs><surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> <w norm="children" type="l">Children</w> in <w norm="distress">distresse</w> <supplied reason="mod">—</supplied> <w norm="yet">yett</w><lb/>
           would she not be <w norm="so">soe</w> good a Christian<surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> to discover it by which I might<lb/>
-          have had my wronged <w norm="innocency">Innoeny</w>
-               <!-- Q [sic] Sic for 'innocency'. -->
+          have had my wronged <choice><sic>Innoeny</sic><corr>innocency</corr></choice>
 
              cleared<surplus reason="superfluous">.</surplus> at the first<pc norm=",">.</pc>
          </p>
@@ -5503,8 +5502,7 @@ had heard.<anchor xml:id="ev73-end" n="ev73" type="event"/> <milestone spanTo="#
           accusations of the <w norm="devil">Devill</w></quote><pc norm=",">.</pc> who is thy <w norm="enemy" type="tolower">Enimy</w> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <quote xml:id="q-203" type="allusion" source="#_John_8:44">the <w norm="father" type="l">Father</w> of <w norm="lies" type="tolower">Lyes</w></quote>.</p>
          
          <p xml:id="p-0345" rend="modernised(append-following-sibling)"> Oh<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> my God<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> be pleased still in mercy to take care of my<lb/>
-           <w norm="poor">poore</w> <w norm="soul" type="tolower">Soule</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> of <rs ref="ppl:atc1 ppl:ktp1 ppl:rt2" n="per591" type="group">my <w norm="poor">poore</w> <w norm="children's" type="tolower">Childrens</w></rs><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <w norm="and" type="l">And</w> <w norm="let">lett</w> us be still <quote xml:id="q-204" type="paraphrase" source="#_1Peter_1:5"><w norm="preserved">preser'd</w>
-               <!-- Q maybe abbr? [sic] Sic for 'preserved'. -->
+           <w norm="poor">poore</w> <w norm="soul" type="tolower">Soule</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> of <rs ref="ppl:atc1 ppl:ktp1 ppl:rt2" n="per591" type="group">my <w norm="poor">poore</w> <w norm="children's" type="tolower">Childrens</w></rs><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <w norm="and" type="l">And</w> <w norm="let">lett</w> us be still <quote xml:id="q-204" type="paraphrase" source="#_1Peter_1:5"><choice><abbr>preser'd</abbr><expan>preserved</expan></choice>
 
           <lb/>
            through faith to <term n="316" xml:id="b3p071t01" ref="gloss:b3p071t01"><w norm="salvation" type="l">Salvation</w></term></quote><surplus reason="superfluous">.</surplus> <w norm="to" type="l">To</w> glorify, praise, <choice><abbr>hon.<am rend="superscript">or</am></abbr><expan>honour</expan></choice> and adore<lb/>
@@ -6101,8 +6099,7 @@ had heard.<anchor xml:id="ev73-end" n="ev73" type="event"/> <milestone spanTo="#
            hopes of my <w norm="own">owne</w> life<surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> or continuance of <rs ref="ppl:wt1" n="per707" type="person">my <w norm="husband's">Husbands</w></rs><supplied reason="mod">.</supplied></p>
          <p xml:id="p-0412" rend="first-line-indent"> And then<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> if we both should be taken away from our <w norm="dear">deare</w><lb/>
           <w norm="children" type="l">Children</w>, what a <w norm="condition" type="tolower">Condittion</w> then might we leave our <w norm="children" type="l">Children</w><lb/>
-          and <w norm="estate" type="l">Estate</w> in<pc norm=",">.</pc> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> what a <w norm="confusion">confussion</w> might <w norm="rationally">rationably</w>
-               <!-- Q interesting one. [sic] Sic. -->
+          and <w norm="estate" type="l">Estate</w> in<pc norm=",">.</pc> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> what a <w norm="confusion">confussion</w> might <choice><sic>rationably</sic><corr>rationally</corr></choice>
 
              be thought
          <lb/>
