comments review

Author: sharonhoward

texts/01_book_one/book_one.xml

@@ -1551,7 +1551,7 @@
                  turned away with a great <w norm="groan">grone</w><pc norm=",">.</pc></p>
           <p xml:id="p-0079"> <w norm="which">Which</w> expressions <w norm="stuck">stucke</w> <w norm="so">soe</w> <w norm="deep">deepe</w><surplus reason="superfluous">.</surplus> that I never <w type="break" norm="forgot">for<lb break="no"/>
                  -gate</w> them<surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> but has sadly <w norm="experienced">experienied</w>
-                   <!-- Q sic? CHECK SD? what is happening with the i/c? [endnote] [word] I.e., experienced. >-->
+                   <!-- Q check with ST? this is still transcribed with i. but cf book 3 "mercy" - changed to c. [endnote] [word] I.e., experienced. >-->
                  those<lb/>
                 miseries which he prophetically foresaw.<anchor xml:id="ev20b-end" n="ev20b" type="event"/></p>
 
@@ -2981,7 +2981,7 @@ In the vacancy of a wise <w norm="and">&amp;</w> prudent <w norm="governor">Gove
                 thee with all my might<surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w norm="laying">laing</w> out my endeavours for <lb/>
                 thee <w norm="here">heere</w><surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> that<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> at the last<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> I may live with thee <w norm="forever">for ever</w> in<lb/>
                  heaven<surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> to <quote xml:id="q-174" type="paraphrase" source="#_Psalms_86:12"><w norm="glorify">glorifie</w> the Lord to all eternity</quote>. And this<lb/>
-                I humbly crave <quote type="phrase" source="#_Romans_15:30"><!-- Q ST empty quote tag? --></quote> for Jesus <w norm="Christ's">Christs</w> sake<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> our only saviour<supplied reason="mod">.</supplied></p>
+                I humbly crave <quote type="phrase" source="#_Romans_15:30"><!-- Q check with ST empty quote tag? --></quote> for Jesus <w norm="Christ's">Christs</w> sake<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> our only saviour<supplied reason="mod">.</supplied></p>
             <p xml:id="p-0182">Amen. Amen.</p>
             </div>
         <div xml:id="div-025">
@@ -13311,12 +13311,13 @@ In the vacancy of a wise <w norm="and">&amp;</w> prudent <w norm="governor">Gove
             <p xml:id="p-0780"> <quote xml:id="q-940" type="phrase" source="#_Romans_1:17 #_Galatians_3:11 #_Hebrews_10:38">The <w norm="just" type="l">Just</w> shall live by faith</quote>. <milestone unit="marker" rend="delim(diagonal2)"/></p>
             <p xml:id="p-0781"><persName ref="ppl:wt1" n="per1299">Mr <w norm="Thornton's">Thorntons</w></persName> <term n="997" xml:id="b1p279t01" ref="gloss:b1p279t01">motto</term> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> my <w norm="own">owne</w>.</p>
             <p xml:id="p-0782">
-           <!-- Q check with ST [curlybraces]
+           <!-- Q check with ST 
                this is a problem... I'm not sure it can be fixed. But maybe could be improved.
                NB I've slightly changed the order of the text as transcribed 
            -->
         <!-- NOTE the three <seg>s are arranged horizontally across the page. 
-             this is not happening in rendering. curlybraces markup is not happening either, not sure why not given that it works elsewhere.
+             this is not happening in rendering. 
+             curlybraces markup is not happening either, not sure why not given that it works elsewhere.
         -->
         <seg type="epigraph" rend="place(left) braced(})">
           <hi rend="italic-mod-only">Nisi Christus Nemo:</hi><anchor n="408" corresp="#p279n02" resp="ednote"/><lb/>
@@ -14157,7 +14158,7 @@ In the vacancy of a wise <w norm="and">&amp;</w> prudent <w norm="governor">Gove
                 drive them <w norm="away">a way</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> he looked up <w norm="and">&amp;</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> thought it had <w norm="been">bine</w><lb/>
                 <rs ref="ppl:aow1" type="person">my <choice><abbr>d.</abbr><expan>dear</expan></choice> <choice><abbr>m.</abbr><expan>mother</expan></choice></rs><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <w norm="cursed" type="l">Cursed</w> me bitterly <w norm="and">&amp;</w> wished the <term n="1034" xml:id="b1p295t01" ref="gloss:b1p295t01"><w norm="deil">Deale</w></term> <w norm="blow">bloew</w><lb/>
                  me blind <w norm="and">&amp;</w> into the <w norm="air">Ayre</w>. <w norm="And">&amp;</w> I had <w norm="been">bin</w> a <w norm="thorn">thorne</w> in his<lb/>
-                <w norm="heel">heele</w><pc norm=",">.</pc> but he would be a <w norm="thorn">Thorne</w> in my side<surplus reason="superfluous">.</surplus> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w type="query">drved</w><!-- Q sic CHECK SD and make a decision about this. --> the<lb/>
+                <w norm="heel">heele</w><pc norm=",">.</pc> but he would be a <w norm="thorn">Thorne</w> in my side<surplus reason="superfluous">.</surplus> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <choice><sic>drved</sic><corr>drived</corr></choice> the<lb/>
                  <w norm="cattle">Cattell</w> <w norm="away">a way</w> to <placeName ref="place:Rich_043" n="place409"><choice><abbr>Richmd</abbr><expan>Richmond</expan></choice></placeName> where <persName ref="ppl:xl2" n="per1359"><w norm="General">Generall</w> <w norm="Leslie">Lecsley</w></persName> was.</p>
             <p xml:id="p-0812">So<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <rs ref="ppl:aow1" n="per1360" type="person">my <w norm="dear">deare</w> <w norm="mother">mothr</w></rs> was <w norm="forced">forcd</w> to <w norm="take" type="l">Take</w> the <w norm="pay" type="l">Pay</w> he<lb/>
                  was to <w norm="have">heve</w> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w norm="carried">carrid</w> it to <rs ref="ppl:xl2" n="per1361" type="person">the <w norm="general">Generall</w></rs> that laid at my<lb/>

texts/02_book_two/book_two.xml

@@ -2053,7 +2053,7 @@
             very well<surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> that we had <w norm="something">somthing</w> of him<pc norm=",">.</pc><lb/>
             <w norm="though">tho</w> it be not <w norm="so">soe</w> perfectly <w norm="writ">writt</w> as by day one<lb/>
             might correct the<surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> mistakes that <w type="query">ner</w>
-               <!-- Q CHECK with ST this is in final checks as a query for ST... it's a weird one.  N'er?  near? -->
+               <!-- Q CHECK with ST this is in final checks as a query; i think needs ST decision... it's a weird one.  N'er?  near? -->
              a <w norm="scholar">scoller</w><lb/>
                where it is not true spelled<supplied reason="mod">'</supplied>.</p>
          <p xml:id="p-0106" rend="first-line-indent">
@@ -4507,8 +4507,7 @@
 
 
             <fw rend="italic" type="pageNum">106
-            
-               <!-- Q CHECK with ST? check SD to see if there's still any query about this. [endnote] Check MS - hand?-->
+               <!-- Q CHECK with ST - in semidip this page num has a note that it's in pencil and (probably) not in AT's hand so should it be included here? -->
             </fw>
             <lb/> 
 
@@ -4993,7 +4992,7 @@ as in <w norm="public" type="tolower">Publicke</w>, because thou <w norm="see'st
 
             <fw rend="italic" type="pageNum">
                <add xml:id="ex-add-inline-02" place="inline">118</add>
-                  <!-- Q CHECK with ST is this being retained if it's not in AT's hand? [endnote] Written in pencil in a different hand.-->
+                  <!-- Q CHECK with ST another one with an endnote in semidip that it's in pencil in a different hand, so should it be included here? -->
             </fw>
 
          <p xml:id="p-0361">
@@ -7355,7 +7354,7 @@ desires <w norm="thereto">there to</w><supplied reason="mod">)</supplied><anchor
             her <w norm="land" type="l">Land</w> <w norm="at">att</w> <placeName ref="place:Midd_038" n="place160"><w norm="Middleham">midlam</w></placeName> for <w norm="so">soe</w> many <w norm="years">yeares</w> since<lb/>
             she died<surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> be computed, <w norm="after">affter</w> <measure type="currency" unit="£">28<am rend="superscript italic">l</am></measure> per <w norm="annum" type="l">An<ex>num</ex></w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied><lb/>
             <w norm="allowing" type="l">Allowing</w> the <measure type="currency" unit="£">2<am rend="superscript italic">l</am></measure> a <w norm="year">yeare</w> for <term n="429" xml:id="b2p175t02" ref="gloss:b2p175t02">abatements</term> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w norm="public" type="l">Public</w><lb/>
-            <w norm="charges" type="l">Charges</w><surplus reason="superfluous">.</surplus> out of that <w norm="particular">perticuler</w> <w norm="land" type="l">Land</w><pc norm=",">:</pc> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w norm="let">lett</w> at <measure type="currency" unit="£">28<am rend="superscript italic">l</am></measure> <w norm="year">yer</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied><!-- Q sic year? i think this is norm elsewhere. -->
+            <w norm="charges" type="l">Charges</w><surplus reason="superfluous">.</surplus> out of that <w norm="particular">perticuler</w> <w norm="land" type="l">Land</w><pc norm=",">:</pc> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w norm="let">lett</w> at <measure type="currency" unit="£">28<am rend="superscript italic">l</am></measure> <w norm="year">yer</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied>
          </p>
          <p xml:id="p-0548" rend="first-line-indent"> <w norm="it" type="l">It</w> will <w norm="amount">amout</w>
             to <supplied reason="mod">(</supplied>in 30 <w norm="years'">yeares</w> time<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> she <w norm="dying">diing</w><lb/>
@@ -11770,7 +11769,7 @@ which I <w norm="told">tould</w> her of<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <w no
             21<w norm="-"> &amp; </w>22. <quote xml:id="q-424" type="direct" source="#KJV_Matthew_9:21">If I may but touch his garment I <w norm="shall">shal</w><lb/>
             be <w norm="made">mad</w> whole</quote><supplied reason="mod">)</supplied> <w norm="and">&amp;</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> so<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> I was<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> from that same <w norm="hour">houer</w><pc norm=",">.</pc><lb/>
             which <w norm="infinite">infinitt</w> mercy I have <w norm="and">&amp;</w> must <w norm="acknowledge">accknowledge</w><lb/>
-            to his great glory<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> all the <w norm="days">daies</w> of my <w norm="life" type="l">Life</w><supplied reason="mod">.</supplied> <w norm="Amen" type="tolower">Amn</w><supplied reason="mod">.</supplied><!-- Q w? sic?  -->
+            to his great glory<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> all the <w norm="days">daies</w> of my <w norm="life" type="l">Life</w><supplied reason="mod">.</supplied> <w norm="Amen" type="tolower">Amn</w><supplied reason="mod">.</supplied><!-- Q w? sic? check what you've done elsewhere -->
          <anchor xml:id="ev204a-end" n="ev204a" type="event"/><lb/>
       <milestone spanTo="#evn13-end" xml:id="evn13-start" n="evn13" unit="event" corresp="awt1_1668_settlement_hb1"/>
             I say <w norm="that" type="l">That</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <w norm="after">affter</w> I was <term n="794" xml:id="b2p281t02" ref="gloss:b2p281t02"><w norm="recruited">recruted</w></term> in strength<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied><lb/>

texts/03_book_three/book_three.xml

@@ -9316,7 +9316,7 @@ had heard.<anchor xml:id="ev73-end" n="ev73" type="event"/> <milestone spanTo="#
              <w norm="child">childe</w></rs><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> who <w norm="Satan" type="u">satan</w> <w norm="set">sett</w> all his <w norm="tools" type="tolower">Tooles</w> on <w norm="work">worke</w> to undermine my<lb/>
           comfort in the <w norm="disposal">disposall</w> of a <w norm="comfortable" type="l">Comfortable</w> husband for <persName ref="ppl:atc1">my <w norm="child" type="l">Child</w></persName><pc norm=",">.</pc><lb/>
            <w norm="and">&amp;</w> for the happy <w norm="education">Eduiation</w>
-               <!-- Q sic? hmm. [endnote] Here, as she does elsewhere, Thornton's 'c' is dotted like an i. -->
+               <!-- Q check with ST? - another i/c... how is it now transcribed? sic? hmm. [endnote] Here, as she does elsewhere, Thornton's 'c' is dotted like an i. -->
              <w norm="and">&amp;</w> instruction of <rs ref="ppl:atc1 ppl:ktp1 ppl:rt2" n="per1284" type="group">all my <w norm="children" type="l">Children</w></rs><surplus reason="superfluous">.</surplus><lb/>
            in the true faith of our <w norm="church" type="l">Church</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> which had <w norm="been">bin</w> my great <w norm="endeavour" type="break">ind<lb break="no"/>
              deavour</w> to <w norm="establish" type="l">Establish</w> ever since I came into this <w norm="family" type="l">Family</w><supplied reason="mod">.</supplied></p>
@@ -10036,7 +10036,7 @@ had heard.<anchor xml:id="ev73-end" n="ev73" type="event"/> <milestone spanTo="#
            glory and <w norm="praise" type="l">Praise</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> I begged some comfort in <w norm="them">thm</w> to <w norm="support">suport</w><lb/>
           my <w norm="sad" type="l">Sad</w> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w norm="sorrowful">sorrwfull</w> <w norm="widowed">widdowed</w> <w norm="condition" type="tolower">Condittion</w>. Glory be to the good<lb/>
            <quote xml:id="q-362" type="phrase" source="#_Psalms_27:9 #BCP_Psalter_Psalm27:11">God of my <term n="671" xml:id="b3p152t02" ref="gloss:b3p152t02">salvation</term></quote> who has performed this mercy
-               <!-- Q check with ST? this is now transcribed "mercy" in semidip so I've changed accordingly, but it's highlighted and still has the endnote. Have these dotted "i/c"s been changed elsewhere? there are other cases.  [endnote] Another example of a 'c' that has been dotted like an 'I'. -->
+               <!-- Q check with ST? this is now transcribed "mercy" in semidip, but it's highlighted and still has the endnote. cf. book 1 "experienied" unchanged.  [endnote] Another example of a 'c' that has been dotted like an 'I'. -->
 
              to us<pc norm=",">.</pc>
          </p>
@@ -14230,7 +14230,6 @@ I began <w norm="upon">uppon</w> your <w norm="advice">advise</w> <w norm="and">
            before marriage.<supplied reason="mod">)</supplied><anchor n="603" corresp="#p209n01" resp="ednote"/>
       <anchor n="lev69" type="letter"/></p>
 
-         <!-- Q from dafeny: what is quoting the letter and what is alice! -->
          <p xml:id="p-1119" rend="first-line-indent">
      <anchor n="604" corresp="#p209n02" resp="ednote"/><!-- NOTE anchor for Besse margin note. -->    
     <milestone n="lev70" unit="letter"/>
@@ -14246,6 +14245,7 @@ I began <w norm="upon">uppon</w> your <w norm="advice">advise</w> <w norm="and">
 
            <seg rend="underline"><persName ref="ppl:ep1" n="per2127"><w norm="maid">maide</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <w norm="Bess">Besse</w></persName></seg><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> who lived with my <persName ref="ppl:xw5" n="per2128">Lady <w norm="Wyvill">vivell</w></persName> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> to tell me of my sad<lb/>
            <w norm="abuses">abuces</w> <supplied reason="mod">(</supplied><persName ref="ppl:acd1" n="per2129">Mrs <w norm="Danby's">Danbys</w></persName> <w norm="abuses">abuces</w> by her <w norm="tongue" type="l">Tongue</w> she had put <w norm="upon">uppon</w> me<supplied reason="mod">).</supplied>
+           <anchor n="lev70" type="letter"/>
           </p>
 
          <p xml:id="p-1120">
@@ -14464,7 +14464,7 @@ I began <w norm="upon">uppon</w> your <w norm="advice">advise</w> <w norm="and">
            and to <persName ref="ppl:xd7" n="per2187">my Lady Dalton</persName> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> all others where I was abused<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> for it<surplus reason="superfluous">.</surplus><lb/>
           did wound her<surplus reason="superfluous">.</surplus> <g ref="#heart">♡</g>
         to <w norm="hear">heare</w> such a child of God to be <w norm="so">soe</w> wounded<lb/>
-           for <w norm="God's">gods</w> <w norm="cause" type="l">Cause</w> and the providing for <rs ref="ppl:atc1 ppl:ktp1 ppl:rt2" n="per2188" type="group">the <w norm="children" type="l">Children</w> of my <w norm="body" type="l">Body</w></rs>.<anchor n="lev70" type="letter"/></p>
+           for <w norm="God's">gods</w> <w norm="cause" type="l">Cause</w> and the providing for <rs ref="ppl:atc1 ppl:ktp1 ppl:rt2" n="per2188" type="group">the <w norm="children" type="l">Children</w> of my <w norm="body" type="l">Body</w></rs>.</p>
 
 
         <pb xml:id="page-213" n="213"/>