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Author: sharonhoward

texts/01_book_one/book_one.xml

@@ -1107,7 +1107,7 @@
                     -joyed</w> <w norm="seven">7</w> <w norm="years">yeares</w> of peace <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w norm="plenty" type="l">Plenty</w><pc norm=":">.</pc><anchor n="22" corresp="#p022n02" resp="ednote"/> <w norm="all" type="l">All</w> his<lb/>
                  endeavours ever tending for <w norm="their">theire</w> good<pc norm=";">,</pc> the<lb/>
                  <w norm="true" type="l">True</w> <w norm="establishment" type="l">Establishment</w> of <w norm="his" type="l">His</w> <w norm="king" type="l">King</w><surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w norm="religion" type="l">Religion</w><supplied reason="mod">;</supplied><lb/>
-                <w norm="the" type="l">The</w> <w norm="honour">Hon.<am rend="superscript">or</am><!-- Q abbr --></w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> peace <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w norm="welfare">wellfaire</w> of the English <w norm="nation" type="l">Nation</w><supplied reason="mod">;</supplied><lb/>
+                <w norm="the" type="l">The</w> <w norm="honour">Hon.<am rend="superscript">or</am></w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> peace <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w norm="welfare">wellfaire</w> of the English <w norm="nation" type="l">Nation</w><supplied reason="mod">;</supplied><lb/>
                  <w norm="and" type="l">And</w> the due ordering of that <w norm="barbarous" type="l">Barbarous</w> <w norm="people" type="l">People</w><lb/>
                  <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w norm="their">theire</w> <w norm="civilising">Civilizeng</w> them to our good <w norm="laws">Lawes</w> <w norm="and">&amp;</w><lb/>
                  government. <w norm="But" type="u">but</w> this was against all <w norm="their">theire</w><lb/>
@@ -1503,7 +1503,7 @@
                  diligent in the service of God, obedient to his <w norm="commandment">comm-<add place="above">andent</add></w><supplied reason="mod">;</supplied><lb/>
                 <w norm="obedient">obedeint</w><surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus>  <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w norm="dutiful">dutifull</w><surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> to <rs ref="ppl:aow1" n="per104" type="person">his <w norm="dear">deare</w> mother</rs><pc norm=",">.</pc> who had<lb/>
                  <w norm="been">bin</w> a <w norm="faithful">faithfull</w>, tender, loving wife to him <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <rs type="group">his<lb/>
-                     <w norm="children" type="l">Children</w></rs><pc norm=";">,</pc> he commanded him to love<pc norm=",">;</pc> <w norm="honour">Hon.<am rend="superscript">or</am><!-- Q abbr --></w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> obey her<lb/>
+                     <w norm="children" type="l">Children</w></rs><pc norm=";">,</pc> he commanded him to love<pc norm=",">;</pc> <w norm="honour">Hon.<am rend="superscript">or</am></w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> obey her<lb/>
                  in all things, all his <w norm="days">daies</w>, due to her for her <w norm="wisdom">wisdome</w><lb/>
                  <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w norm="virtue">vertue</w><pc norm=",">.</pc> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w norm="doing">doeing</w> this<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> God would <w norm="bless">blesse</w> him the <w norm="better">beter</w><supplied reason="mod">;</supplied><lb/>
                  charged him to suffer his will to be performed<surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> which<lb/>
@@ -9484,7 +9484,7 @@ In the vacancy of a wise <w norm="and">&amp;</w> prudent <w norm="governor">Gove
                  How can I <w norm="sufficiently">suficiently</w> <quote xml:id="q-583" type="phrase" source="#BB_Psalms_51:15"><w norm="set">sett</w> forth thy noble <w norm="praise" type="l">Praise</w></quote><surplus reason="superfluous">.</surplus> which<lb/>
                  cannot <w norm="express">expresse</w> the <w norm="mercies">mercys</w><surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> nor <w norm="goodness">goodnesse</w> I have <w norm="received">Receaved</w><pc norm="?">.</pc><lb/>
                  O Lord<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <w norm="let">lett</w> thy Holy <w norm="Spirit">Spiritt</w> inspire my heart<surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w norm="enliven">inliven</w><lb/>
-                my dull <w norm="soul">Soule</w> to utter forth thy <w norm="honour">Hon.<am rend="superscript">or</am><!-- Q abbr --></w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <w norm="holiness">holinesse</w>, <w norm="goodness">goodnes</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied><lb/>
+                my dull <w norm="soul">Soule</w> to utter forth thy <w norm="honour">Hon.<am rend="superscript">or</am></w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <w norm="holiness">holinesse</w>, <w norm="goodness">goodnes</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied><lb/>
                  <quote xml:id="q-584" type="phrase" source="#BCP_Psalter_Psalm89:1"><w norm="loving">loveing</w> <w norm="kindness">kindnesse</w> of the Lord</quote> to me his <w norm="poor">poore</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> unworthy ser<lb break="no"/>
                 <pc>-</pc>vant <w norm="and">&amp;</w> to the <quote xml:id="q-585" type="phrase" source="#KJV_Mark_3:28"><w norm="sons" type="l">Sons</w> of men</quote><surplus reason="superfluous">.</surplus> and that forever.</p>
             <p xml:id="p-0572"><w norm="Do">Doe</w> not <w norm="forget">forgett</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> O my <w norm="sad" type="l">Sad</w> <w norm="soul">Soule</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <quote xml:id="q-586" type="allusion" source="#_Job_5:9">what the Lord hath <w norm="done">don</w> for<lb/>
@@ -11450,7 +11450,7 @@ In the vacancy of a wise <w norm="and">&amp;</w> prudent <w norm="governor">Gove
                  from him for her <w norm="soul">soule</w><pc norm=",">.</pc> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> she would have <w norm="done">don</w> well to have<lb/>
                 <w norm="showed">shewed</w> her dislike before. <w norm="And">&amp;</w> to that purpose<pc norm=",">.</pc> thanking her for<lb/>
                  propounding one of her <w norm="own">owne</w> relations to her<pc norm=";">.</pc> for she was <lb/>
-                not worthy of such a person of <w norm="honour">hon.<am rend="superscript">or</am><!-- Q abbr --></w><pc norm=";">.</pc> <w norm="and" type="l">And</w> that she hoped to God<lb/>
+                not worthy of such a person of <w norm="honour">hon.<am rend="superscript">or</am></w><pc norm=";">.</pc> <w norm="and" type="l">And</w> that she hoped to God<lb/>
 
 
             <pb xml:id="page-242" n="242"/>
@@ -11879,7 +11879,7 @@ In the vacancy of a wise <w norm="and">&amp;</w> prudent <w norm="governor">Gove
                  as wrong both me <w norm="and">&amp;</w> her<pc norm=".">;</pc> <w norm="But" type="u">but</w> <persName ref="ppl:bt1" n="per1190">Barbara</persName> carried her <term n="902" xml:id="b1p251t01" ref="gloss:b1p251t01"><w norm="spleen">spleene</w></term><lb/>
                  on <w norm="so">soe</w> <w norm="unhandsomely">unhansomly</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> with such loud <w norm="clamours">clamors</w> against me <w norm="and">&amp;</w><lb/>
                  her<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> unc<add place="above">h</add>ristianly <w norm="aggravating">agravating</w>, accusing<surplus reason="superfluous">.</surplus> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> laughing in<lb/>
-                <w norm="scorn">scorne</w> against my <w norm="person" type="l">Person</w><surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> the <w norm="honour">Hon.<am rend="superscript">or</am><!-- Q abbr --></w> of my <w norm="family" type="l">Family</w>.</p>
+                <w norm="scorn">scorne</w> against my <w norm="person" type="l">Person</w><surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> the <w norm="honour">Hon.<am rend="superscript">or</am></w> of my <w norm="family" type="l">Family</w>.</p>
             <p xml:id="p-0702"><w norm="Namely">Namly</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> in these words<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <quote xml:id="q-704" type="phrase" source="#_Revelation_12:10">like the <surplus reason="superfluous">(</surplus>old accuser of the <w norm="brethren">breathren</w></quote><surplus reason="superfluous">)</surplus><lb/>
                 that I was <w norm="nought">naught</w><pc norm=" —">,</pc> <rs ref="ppl:aow1" n="per1191" type="person">my mother</rs>, <rs ref="ppl:kwd1" n="per1192" type="person">my sister</rs><surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> all I came on<pc norm=" —">,</pc><lb/>
                  <w norm="and">&amp;</w> this <w norm="so">soe</w> imprudently before <rs ref="ppl:acd1" n="per1193" type="person">her <w norm="mistress">mistresse</w></rs><surplus reason="superfluous">.</surplus> <w norm="that" type="l">That</w> I <w norm="bust">busst</w><lb/>
@@ -13136,7 +13136,7 @@ In the vacancy of a wise <w norm="and">&amp;</w> prudent <w norm="governor">Gove
                  <w norm="fatherless">Fatherlesse</w></quote> <w norm="children" type="l">Children</w><surplus reason="superfluous">;</surplus> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <quote xml:id="q-900" type="paraphrase" source="#KJV_1Timothy_5:5">desolate</quote>.</p>
             <p xml:id="p-0770"><w norm="Make">make</w> me <w norm="thankful">thankfull</w> for <w norm="so">soe</w> long <w norm="enjoyment">injoyment</w>, as <w norm="also">allso</w><lb/>
                 for those eminent gifts <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w norm="graces">Graces</w>, which thou in mercy had<lb/>
-                <w norm="endowed">indowed</w> him with<pc norm=".">;</pc> To thee be the <w norm="honour">Hon.<am rend="superscript">or</am><!-- Q abbr --></w> given, due unto thy<lb/>
+                <w norm="endowed">indowed</w> him with<pc norm=".">;</pc> To thee be the <w norm="honour">Hon.<am rend="superscript">or</am></w> given, due unto thy<lb/>
                  <w norm="name" type="l">Name</w><surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> <w norm="and">&amp;</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <w norm="O" type="u">o</w> Lord<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> give me the power of thy grace<surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> strength<lb/>
                  to <w norm="imitate">immitate</w> his virtues, which was called to thy service in<lb/>
                  our youths, <w norm="and">&amp;</w> from our youths<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> by thy miraculous <term n="987" xml:id="b1p276t01" ref="gloss:b1p276t01"><w norm="providence" type="l">Provid<lb break="no"/>
@@ -13252,7 +13252,7 @@ In the vacancy of a wise <w norm="and">&amp;</w> prudent <w norm="governor">Gove
                 <w norm="Christ's">Christs</w> his sake</quote>, <quote xml:id="q-933" type="phrase" source="#_1John_2:1">the <w norm="righteous" type="l">Righteous</w></quote><pc norm=",">.</pc> <w norm="to" type="l">To</w> whom<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> with the<lb/>
                  <w norm="Holy" type="u">holy</w> <w norm="Spirit">Spirritt</w>, <w norm="the" type="l">The</w> <w norm="eternal">Etternall</w> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w norm="glorious" type="l">Glorious</w><surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> <w norm="and" type="l">And</w> <w type="break" norm="incomprehensible">Incom-<lb break="no"/>
                  prehensable</w> Father, and <w norm="forever">for ever</w> <w norm="blessed" type="l">Blessed</w> <term n="996" xml:id="b1p278t02" ref="gloss:b1p278t02">Trinity</term><lb/>
-                be ascribed all <w norm="honour">Hon.<am rend="superscript">or</am><!-- Q abbr --></w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <w norm="glory" type="l">Glory</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <w norm="power" type="l">Power</w>, might<pc norm=",">.</pc> <w norm="majesty">Majestie</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied><lb/></p>
+                be ascribed all <w norm="honour">Hon.<am rend="superscript">or</am></w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <w norm="glory" type="l">Glory</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <w norm="power" type="l">Power</w>, might<pc norm=",">.</pc> <w norm="majesty">Majestie</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied><lb/></p>
 
 
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@@ -13394,9 +13394,9 @@ In the vacancy of a wise <w norm="and">&amp;</w> prudent <w norm="governor">Gove
                 <fw type="pageNum">282</fw>
         <div xml:id="div-130" type="poetry" subtype="sonnet">
             <head place="centre" rend="post(rule)">An <w norm="Inducement" type="u">inducement</w> to Love Heaven<anchor n="416" corresp="#p281n01" resp="ednote"/> <milestone unit="marker" rend="delim(diagonal2)"/></head>
-            <!-- Q layout on page is now !!!! not entirely sure why it's happened. PC describes it as "gnarly"...
-                lg -> removed divs, and still need ruled lines.
-                final decision on Monday but probably will have to get rid of lg and reinstate divs.
+            <!-- Q layout on page is better; final decision monday?
+                
+                removed lg and reinstated divs. perhaps not ideal but it's an odd case.
             -->
             <!--<lg type="octave">-->
         <div xml:id="div-131" rend="post(rule)"> <!--can't have div inside lg-->
@@ -13444,7 +13444,7 @@ In the vacancy of a wise <w norm="and">&amp;</w> prudent <w norm="governor">Gove
             <l n="8">And goodly <w norm="pageants" type="l">Pageants</w>, proudly <w norm="swelling" type="l">Swelling</w> <w norm="veins">veines</w><supplied reason="mod">;</supplied></l>
             <l n="9">And blood<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <w norm="allied">alied</w> to <w norm="greatness">Greatnesse</w>, is but lone<surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus></l>
             <l n="10"><w norm="Inherited">Inheritted</w>, not <w norm="purchased">purchast</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> not our <w norm="own">owne</w>.</l>
-            <l n="11">Fame, <w norm="riches" type="l">Riches</w>, <w norm="honour">Hon.<am rend="superscript">or</am><!-- Q abbr --></w>, <w norm="beauty" type="l">Beauty</w>, <w norm="state" type="l">State</w>, <w norm="trains">Traines</w>, <w norm="birth" type="l">Birth</w></l>
+            <l n="11">Fame, <w norm="riches" type="l">Riches</w>, <w norm="honour">Hon.<am rend="superscript">or</am></w>, <w norm="beauty" type="l">Beauty</w>, <w norm="state" type="l">State</w>, <w norm="trains">Traines</w>, <w norm="birth" type="l">Birth</w></l>
             <l n="12">Are but the <w norm="fading">faiding</w> <w norm="pleasures" type="l">Pleasures</w> of the <w norm="earth" type="l">Earth</w>.</l>
             <l n="13">I would be <w norm="rich" type="l">Rich</w>, but see man<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> too unkind,</l>
             <l n="14"><w norm="Digs">Diggs</w> in the <w norm="bowels" type="l">Bowels</w> of the <w norm="richest" type="l">Richest</w> <w norm="mine" type="l">Mine</w><pc norm=";">.</pc></l>

texts/02_book_two/book_two.xml

@@ -4478,10 +4478,9 @@
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-            <fw rend="italic" type="pageNum">106
                <!-- Q CHECK with ST - in semidip this page num has a note that it's in pencil and (probably) not in AT's hand so should it be included here?  I would identify this as unpaginated-->
-            </fw>
-            <lb/> 
+            <!--<fw rend="italic" type="pageNum">106</fw>
+            <lb/>--> 
 
          out of all <w norm="evil">evill</w>, accidents<surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> destructions<supplied reason="mod">)</supplied><lb/>
             may not rise up in judgement<surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> against<lb/>
@@ -4960,10 +4959,10 @@ as in <w norm="public" type="tolower">Publicke</w>, because thou <w norm="see'st
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-            <fw rend="italic" type="pageNum">
-               <add xml:id="ex-add-inline-02" place="inline">118</add>
                   <!-- Q CHECK with ST - another one with an endnote in semidip that it's in pencil in a different hand, so should it be included here? As above, I would treat this as unpaginated -->
-            </fw>
+           <!-- <fw rend="italic" type="pageNum">
+               <add xml:id="ex-add-inline-02" place="inline">118</add>
+            </fw>-->
 
          <p xml:id="p-0361">
             <w norm="We">Wee</w> only <supplied reason="mod">(</supplied>in the <w norm="city" type="l">City</w> of <placeName ref="place:Dubl_088" n="place91">Dublin</placeName><supplied reason="mod">)</supplied> did <w norm="escape" type="l">Escape</w><lb/>
@@ -5645,7 +5644,7 @@ when <w norm="there">theire</w> was <w norm="none">non</w> to <w norm="help">hel
             if thou <term n="283" xml:id="b2p135t02" ref="gloss:b2p135t02">vouchsafe</term> <quote xml:id="q-275" type="allusion" source="#_Genesis_3:16">thy servant to bring forth<lb/>
             <w norm="children" type="l">Children</w></quote> that may be <quote xml:id="q-276" type="phrase" source="#_James_2:5"><w norm="heirs" type="tolower">Heires</w> of thy <w norm="kingdom" type="l">Kingdom</w></quote><surplus reason="superfluous">.</surplus><lb/>
              for the Lord Jesus Christ<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> his sake<pc norm=",">.</pc> to whom<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> with<lb/>
-             the Father <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w norm="Holy" type="u">holy</w> <w norm="Spirit">Spirrit</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <quote xml:id="q-277" type="paraphrase" source="#_Jude_1:25">be all <w norm="glory" type="l">Glory</w><pc norm=",">.</pc> <w norm="honour">Hon.<am rend="superscript">or</am><!-- Q abbr --></w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <w norm="power" type="l">Power</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied><lb/>
+             the Father <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w norm="Holy" type="u">holy</w> <w norm="Spirit">Spirrit</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <quote xml:id="q-277" type="paraphrase" source="#_Jude_1:25">be all <w norm="glory" type="l">Glory</w><pc norm=",">.</pc> <w norm="honour">Hon.<am rend="superscript">or</am></w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <w norm="power" type="l">Power</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied><lb/>
              <w norm="praise" type="l">Praise</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> might<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> majesty <w norm="and">&amp;</w> dominion for <w norm="evermore">Evermore</w></quote><supplied reason="mod">.</supplied></p>
 
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              per <choice><abbr>Anm</abbr><expan>annum</expan></choice>.<anchor n="393" corresp="#p252n02" resp="ednote"/>
          </p>
          <p xml:id="p-0783" rend="first-line-indent">
-            <w norm="Upon">Uppon</w> which <w norm="consideration" type="l">Consideration</w> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w norm="faithful">faithfull</w> <choice><abbr>prom</abbr><expan>promise</expan><!-- Q sic or abbr? [sic] Sic for promise. --></choice>
+            <w norm="Upon">Uppon</w> which <w norm="consideration" type="l">Consideration</w> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w norm="faithful">faithfull</w> <choice><abbr>prom</abbr><expan>promise</expan><!-- Q sic or abbr? if this is abbr a lot of things should be abbr... --></choice>
 
 
             <lb/>

texts/03_book_three/book_three.xml

@@ -12709,7 +12709,7 @@ had settled for my use and my <w norm="children" type="l">Children</w><surplus r
       -->
       <p xml:id="p-1018a">
          <milestone n="lev39" unit="letter"/>
-        <!-- Q TEST hiding date; changed fw to note. didn't solve issue: put it back in?. -->
+        <!-- Q TEST hiding date; changed fw to note. didn't solve issue: put it back in? check with ST/CB -->
            <note xml:id="mnote-0155" place="left margin">
             <date when-custom="1667-05-25">May<lb/>
             25 67</date>.<lb/>