comment cleanup

Author: sharonhoward

texts/00_book_of_remembrances/book_of_remembrances.xml

@@ -2917,7 +2917,7 @@
           whose <w norm="portion" type="l">Portion</w> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> inheritance I trust<lb/>
           the Lord will be forever. 
           <seg type="insertion" rend="italic differentInk"><supplied reason="mod">(</supplied><choice><abbr>Remem<am rend="superscript">br</am></abbr><expan>Remember</expan></choice><lb/>
-            <!-- NOTE [event]. v brief but adding similar xrefs in other books -->
+            <!-- NOTE a brief x-ref -->
             <milestone spanTo="#ev53d-end" xml:id="ev53d-start" unit="event" n="ev53d"/>
           my <w norm="dream">Dreame</w><anchor n="79" corresp="#p068n01" resp="ednote"/> of <persName ref="ppl:rn1" n="per170"><w norm="Nettleton's">Nettletens</w></persName> <term n="84" xml:id="bremp068t02" ref="gloss:bremp068t02"><w norm="bailiff">Baylie</w></term> this morning before<lb/>
           they came<pc norm=",">.</pc><anchor xml:id="ev53d-end" type="event" n="ev53d"/> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <milestone spanTo="#ev53e-end" xml:id="ev53e-start" unit="event" n="ev53e"/>my fall <w norm="down">downe</w> the <w norm="stairs">staires</w> when <persName ref="ppl:cd1" n="per171">Celia<lb/>

texts/01_book_one/book_one.xml

@@ -1482,7 +1482,7 @@
                  justly proved, should be paid; <w norm="again">againe</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> charged<lb/>
                 them to be <w norm="careful">cairefull</w> of <rs ref="ppl:aow1" type="person">his wife</rs><surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <rs type="group">children</rs>.
                 <anchor xml:id="ev19-end" n="ev19" type="event"/><lb/>
-                <milestone spanTo="#ev20-end" xml:id="ev20-start" n="ev20" unit="event"/><!-- NOTE [event] (pigeon slippers) -->
+                <milestone spanTo="#ev20-end" xml:id="ev20-start" n="ev20" unit="event"/><!-- NOTE (pigeon slippers!) -->
                  <date when-custom="1640-12-02">About <w norm="Wednesday" type="u">wednesday</w></date>, <rs ref="ppl:aow1" n="per100" type="person">my mo<ex>ther</ex></rs> desired the <w norm="physicians">Phisicians</w><lb/>
                  to give her a true state of his <w norm="condition">condittion</w>, whom<lb/>
                  she <w norm="perceived">perceaved</w> grew weaker<pc norm=",">.</pc> but they would<lb/>
@@ -1652,7 +1652,7 @@
 <!-- transcription: Page 37 -->
 
             <fw type="pageNum"> 37</fw>
-          <!-- NOTE [event] (restart ev22) -->
+          
           <p xml:id="p-0089">
     <milestone spanTo="#ev24-end" xml:id="ev24-start" n="ev24" unit="event"/>
             The <w norm="corpse">Corpes</w> of <rs ref="ppl:cw1" n="per113" type="person">my <choice><abbr>Hon.<am rend="superscript">red</am></abbr><expan>honoured</expan></choice> <w norm="father" type="l">Father</w></rs> was carried from<lb/>
@@ -3365,7 +3365,7 @@ In the vacancy of a wise <w norm="and">&amp;</w> prudent <w norm="governor">Gove
 
             <p xml:id="p-0201">
                 <milestone spanTo="#ev40-end" xml:id="ev40-start" n="ev40" unit="event"/>
-                <!-- NOTE [event] chester to warrington c.20 miles. -->
+                <!-- NOTE chester to warrington c.20 miles. -->
                 <note xml:id="mnote-0016" place="left margin" resp="#awt1" rend="pre(rule) post(rule)">
                    <date when-custom="1643-08-28"><choice><abbr>Aug.</abbr><expan>August</expan></choice><lb/>
                      28<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied><lb/>
@@ -3399,7 +3399,7 @@ In the vacancy of a wise <w norm="and">&amp;</w> prudent <w norm="governor">Gove
                 <w norm="itself">it selfe</w> from its <w norm="enemies">Enimies</w>.<anchor n="85" corresp="#p078n01" resp="ednote"/> <!--<anchor xml:id="ev40-end" n="ev40" type="event"/>--></p>
            <p xml:id="p-0203">
     <!--<milestone spanTo="#ev41-end" xml:id="ev41-start" n="ev41" unit="event"/>--> 
-           <!-- NOTE [event] warrington to wigan, "the next day"= 28 + 1. -->
+           <!-- NOTE warrington to wigan, "the next day"= 28 + 1. -->
             From <placeName ref="place:Warr_057" n="place103"><w norm="Warrington" type="u">warrington</w></placeName>, we went to <placeName ref="place:Wiga_059" n="place104"><w norm="Wigan">Wiggen</w></placeName> <date when-custom="1643-08-29">the next day</date>,<lb/>
                 <w norm="being">beeing</w> a <w norm="town">Towne</w> <w norm="zealous" type="l">Zealous</w> for <w norm="their">theire</w> <rs ref="ppl:cs1" type="person"><w norm="king" type="l">King</w></rs><surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w norm="church" type="l">Church</w>. <w norm="We">wee</w><lb/>
              found it sorely demolished, <w norm="and">&amp;</w> all the <w norm="windows">windowes</w> <w norm="broken">broaken</w><supplied reason="mod">,</supplied><lb/>
@@ -3434,7 +3434,7 @@ In the vacancy of a wise <w norm="and">&amp;</w> prudent <w norm="governor">Gove
                  the morning <w norm="and">&amp;</w> <w norm="four">4</w> in the <w norm="afternoon">affternoone</w>. <!--<anchor xml:id="ev41-end" n="ev41" type="event"/>--></p>
             <p xml:id="p-0205">
     <!--<milestone spanTo="#ev42-end" xml:id="ev42-start" n="ev42" unit="event"/>-->
-            <!-- NOTE [event] wigan to downham, lancs (35ish miles). "the next day" 29 +1  -->
+            <!-- NOTE wigan to downham, lancs (35ish miles). "the next day" 29 +1  -->
             <date when-custom="1643-08-30">The next day</date>, we passed from thence towards <placeName ref="place:York_079" n="place-supp42"><w norm="Yorkshire">yorkeshire</w></placeName><lb/>
                  with many <w norm="prayers">praiers</w> from this <w norm="people" type="l">People</w>. And when we came<lb/>
                  to the borders of <placeName ref="place:Lanc_078" n="place105">Lancashire</placeName>, at a place called <placeName ref="place:Down_016" n="place106"><w norm="Downham" type="u">downham</w></placeName>,<lb/>
@@ -3709,7 +3709,7 @@ In the vacancy of a wise <w norm="and">&amp;</w> prudent <w norm="governor">Gove
                 <p xml:id="p-0216">
 
            <milestone spanTo="#ev53-end" xml:id="ev53-start" n="ev53" unit="event"/>
-          <!-- NOTE [event] (jump back to) richmond 1643 lobster. -->
+          <!-- NOTE (jump back to) richmond 1643 lobster. -->
 
                     <note xml:id="mnote-0023" place="left margin" resp="#awt1" rend="post(rule)">
                         <date when-custom="1643-09-15"><choice><abbr>Sept.</abbr><expan>September</expan></choice><lb/>
@@ -3764,8 +3764,8 @@ In the vacancy of a wise <w norm="and">&amp;</w> prudent <w norm="governor">Gove
             </div>
             <div xml:id="div-031" rend="pre(rule)">
             <!-- NOTE [div] new div: no title or index entry, but there is a divider line and it does mark a change in narrative -->
-            <!-- NOTE [tagging] [layout] "In the yeare... 29" in fact starts *above* the ruled line, immediately after Amen on the same line with just a | divider. But it must refer/belong to the text that follows, so I've marked it up for meaning rather than appearance again. Another tricky one. *convert to head* -->
-                <!-- NOTE [event] to hipswell. again confusing, implies this is shortly after the lobster incident in Richmond, but it can't be... -->
+            <!-- NOTE [tagging] [layout] "In the yeare... 29" in fact starts *above* the ruled line, immediately after Amen on the same line with just a | divider. But it must refer/belong to the text that follows, so I've marked it up for meaning. -->
+                <!-- NOTE to hipswell. again confusing, implies this is shortly after the lobster incident in Richmond, but it can't be... -->
                 <head>
                     <!-- NOTE moved into head from first line of p-0218. -->
                     In the <w norm="year">yeare</w> <date when-custom="1644-11-29">1644<supplied reason="mod">,</supplied> <choice><abbr>no.<am rend="superscript">ber</am></abbr><expan>November</expan></choice> 29</date><surplus reason="superfluous">.</surplus>
@@ -4670,7 +4670,7 @@ In the vacancy of a wise <w norm="and">&amp;</w> prudent <w norm="governor">Gove
                     <w norm="Lord's">Lords</w> holy name<surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> be praised even <w norm="forever">for ever</w></quote> for my eminen<add place="above">t</add><lb/>
                 deliverance from perishing in <w norm="and">&amp;</w> by these floods of waters<supplied reason="mod">.</supplied><anchor xml:id="ev67-end" n="ev67" type="event"/></p>
             <p xml:id="p-0271">
-    <milestone spanTo="#ev68-end" xml:id="ev68-start" n="ev68" unit="event"/><!-- NOTE [event] back to gw drowning, search -->
+    <milestone spanTo="#ev68-end" xml:id="ev68-start" n="ev68" unit="event"/>
             But to <w norm="return">returne</w><surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> to the sad relation of <rs ref="ppl:gw1" n="per405" type="person">my brother</rs>, which we <add place="above">was</add><lb/>
                 informed of<surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> by <w norm="two">2</w> men which walked beyond <rs ref="place:Swal_123" n="geog12" type="geog">the <w norm="river" type="l">River</w></rs>.<lb/>
                  <w norm="They" type="l">they</w> <w norm="perceiving">perceaving</w> <w norm="a" type="l">A</w> gentleman <w norm="going">goeing</w> <w norm="down">downe</w> to the water, <lb/>
@@ -7262,7 +7262,7 @@ In the vacancy of a wise <w norm="and">&amp;</w> prudent <w norm="governor">Gove
                  <w norm="as" type="l">As</w> she did <w norm="approve">aprove</w> <w norm="herself">her selfe</w> in all her time<supplied reason="mod">)</supplied>.<anchor xml:id="ev115-end" n="ev115" type="event"/></p>
 
             <p xml:id="p-0416">
-    <milestone spanTo="#ev116-end" xml:id="ev116-start" n="ev116" unit="event"/><!-- NOTE [event] marriage awt's parents. date from external source=1614-09-22? -->
+    <milestone spanTo="#ev116-end" xml:id="ev116-start" n="ev116" unit="event"/>
             At the <w norm="age" type="l">Age</w> of 21 <w norm="years">yeares</w>, she was married by the consent<lb/>
                 of <rs ref="ppl:jfo1" n="per658" type="person">her <w norm="mother" type="l">Mother</w></rs><surplus reason="superfluous">,</surplus> <supplied reason="mod">(</supplied><w norm="being">beeing</w> then <w norm="herself">her selfe</w> married to <persName ref="ppl:pf1" n="per659">Sir<lb/>
                  <w norm="Peter">Petter</w> <w norm="Frescheville">Frechvile</w></persName>, <w norm="having">haveing</w> lived <w norm="seven">seaven</w> <w norm="years">yeares</w> a <w norm="widow">widdow</w><lb/>