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Co-authored-by: Jessica Wright <[email protected]>

Author: lidiazuin

modules/ROOT/pages/data-modeling/data-modeling-tools.adoc

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 Neo4j offers a range of no-code tools to get you started with data modeling.
-Find here the available options.
+The available options are described here.
 
 == Neo4j Data Importer
 
 image::data-importer-1.png[600,600,role="popup-link"]
 
-Besides being a tool for xref:data-import/index.adoc[data importing], you can use Neo4j Data Importer to sketch out a graph model and map your input data to its structure and properties.
+Besides being a tool for xref:data-import/index.adoc[importing data], you can use Neo4j Data Importer to sketch a graph model and map your data to it.
 You can access it:
 
-* Via the *Import* tab in link:https://neo4j.com/product/auradb/?ref=docs-nav-get-started[Neo4j Aura].
+* Via *Import* in link:https://neo4j.com/product/auradb/?ref=docs-nav-get-started[Neo4j Aura].
 * As a standalone version link:https://data-importer.neo4j.io/[with secure connection only] or link:https://data-importer.graphapp.io/[with both secure and insecure connections].
 
 For more information, refer to the link:{docs-home}/data-importer/current/modeling[Neo4j Data Importer -> Data modeling].
@@ -29,13 +29,13 @@ For more information, refer to the link:{docs-home}/data-importer/current/modeli
 image::northwind-graph-model.png[600,600,role="popup-link"]
 
 link:https://arrows.app[Arrows.app] is a no-code visualization platform which allows whiteboarding ideas into a graph model.
-It is ideal for making a sketch of a graph, especially if you want to design a domain model for your data.
+It is ideal for designing a domain model for your data.
 
 With this platform, you can:
 
 * Draft your own whiteboard from scratch or import data from JSON files and plain text.
 * Create, modify, and delete nodes and relationships with their labels and properties without writing any code.
-* Export the visualization model as Cypher statements, so you can load the same data model into a Neo4j database.
+* Export the visualization as a Cypher statement and load it into a Neo4j database.
 
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 == Cypher Workbench
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 == Other tools
 
-Here is a list of other non-Neo4j tools that can be used for data modeling:
+There are other non-Neo4j tools that can be used for data modeling:
 
 * link:https://mermaid.live/[Mermaid]: general data modeling tool (not specifically for graph databases), based on Markdown.
 Ideal for documenting modeling strategies.
 * link:https://plantuml.com/[PlantUML]: application for creating diagrams from plain text.
-Works better with version control rather than first model design.
+This is more for version control than model design.
 * link:https://hackolade.com/[Hackolade]: a tool to design, document, and communicate data models and schemas.
-Built to support data modeling of Neo4j node labels and relationship types.
+Built to support the kind of data modeling specific to Neo4j with node labels and relationship types.
 
 == Tools comparison
 
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ Built to support data modeling of Neo4j node labels and relationship types.
 
 | PlantUML
 | {check-mark}
-| PUML,JSON
+| PUML, JSON
 | PNG, SVG, LaTeX format and ASCII art diagrams
 
 | Mermaid