Section 2.8 (comment 10)

[LPardue]

Section 2.8: We suggest rephrasing this sentence for easy comprehension or limiting the number of adverbs in this sentence. Overuse of adverbs in this context may confuse readers.

Original:

   Reliance on the version number
   field for the purposes of admission control is similarly likely to
   rapidly lead to unintended failure modes. 

Perhaps:
Similarly, reliance on the version number
field for the purpose of admission control is likely to rapidly lead
to unintended failure modes.

[mirjak]

Alternatively we could replace "similarly" which "also". I think having this advert is actually important. If we want to remove one, I might rather remove "rapidly".

[britram]

so, NEW:

Reliance on the version number field for the purpose of
admission control is also likely to lead to unintended failure modes.