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* grammer and typos * Update draft-ietf-quic-reliable-stream-reset.md Co-authored-by: Marten Seemann <martenseemann@gmail.com> * just add "event" --------- Co-authored-by: Marten Seemann <martenseemann@gmail.com>
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QUIC defines a RESET_STREAM frame to abort sending on a stream. When a sender
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resets a stream, it also stops retransmitting STREAM frames for this stream in
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the of packet loss. On the receiving side, there is no guarantee that any data
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sent on that stream is delivered.
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the event of packet loss. On the receiving side, there is no guarantee that any
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data sent on that stream is delivered.
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This document defines a new QUIC frame, the RESET_STREAM_AT frame, that allows
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resetting a stream, while guaranteeing delivery of stream data up to a certain
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Since QUIC does not provide guaranteed delivery of steam data for reset streams,
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it is possible that a receiver is unable to read critical information. In the
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example above, a reset stream can cause the receiver to a fail to associate
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example above, a reset stream can cause the receiver to fail to associate
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incoming streams with their respective subcomponent of the application.
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Therefore, it is desirable that the receiver can rely on the delivery of
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critical information to applications, even if the QUIC stream is reset before
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As described in {{Section 3.2 of RFC9000}}, a stream reset signal might be
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suppressed or withheld, and the same applies to a stream reset signal carried in
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a RESET_STREAM_AT frame. Similary, the Reliable Size of the RESET_STREAM_AT
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a RESET_STREAM_AT frame. Similarly, the Reliable Size of the RESET_STREAM_AT
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frame does not prevent a QUIC stack from delivering data beyond the specified
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offset to the receiving application.
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QUIC version 1, the security considerations of {{RFC9000}} apply accordingly.
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Specifically, given that RESET_STREAM_AT frames indicate the offset up to which
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data is reliably transmitted, endpoints SHOULD remain vigilant against resource
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commitment and exhaustion attacks have to be taken even after sending or
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receiving RESET_STREAM_AT frames, until the stream states reach the terminal
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state.
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commitment and exhaustion attacks even after sending or receiving RESET_STREAM_AT
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frames, until the stream reaches the terminal state.
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# IANA Considerations

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