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            <h1>The Presentation of self<br/>on a Decentralised Web<br/>(Changelog)</h1>
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                    <p><a href="https://github.com/rhiaro/thesis/issues?utf8=%E2%9C%93&q=is%3Aissue%20label%3Aviva%20">Github issues from examiners report</a>.</p>
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                        <h2>Chapter 1</h2>
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                                <li>Number the contributions in chapter one for ease of reference.
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                                    <li>Updated <a href="chapter1.html#research-questions">chapter 1</a> (<a href="https://github.com/rhiaro/thesis/commit/89306f6fbca39f49ac04492c1d6795b0ac09c095#diff-0ee4b03dc8155453669fd743076c5371">diff</a>).</li>
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                            <p>Also added section <a href="chapter1.html#why-decentralisation">Why decentralisation</a> to comment on my starting perspective (<a href="https://github.com/rhiaro/thesis/commit/2551000def3fc1f0c76e4bd86d17e9cb6c6ae1c1#diff-0ee4b03dc8155453669fd743076c5371R61">diff</a>).</p>
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                        <h2>Chapter 2</h2>
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                                <li>Include in the literature review reference to work critical of mainstream social media - e.g. Jose van Dijck and how commercial pressures drive the mechanisms for self-expression. Can use this to make a case for decentralised solutions.
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                                        <li>Added section <a href="chapter2.html#commoditised-self">The Commoditised Self</a> (<a href="https://github.com/rhiaro/thesis/commit/2c6a61ac795ef8e11b079ee4cf30bd419267867a#diff-7063961f9e309a20cb053e85ef3ff2d1">diff</a>).</li>
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                            <p>Also updated <a href="chapter2.html#dishonesty-and-deception">Dishonesty and Deception</a> to cover all concepts mentioned in the deception studies in C2.</p>
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                        <h2>Chapter 3</h2>
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                                <li>Add clarification about the student’s contribution to collaboratively undertaken studies reported in this chapter.
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                                    <li>Expanded on last paragraph in intros for <a href="chapter3.html#the-many-dimensions-of-lying-online">Lying Online</a> and <a href="chapter3.html#computationally-mediated-pro-social-deception">Pro-social Deception</a> (<a href="https://github.com/rhiaro/thesis/commit/bda5de182d67f07c4faa23a37ac8e6cbaeb1051a#diff-6238fe1b6aa5c1a10941566b92f05d85">diff</a>)</li>
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                                <li>Where text from papers is included, the student may want to edit these to remove any less relevant sections and improve narrative flow.
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                                    <li>Fixed up the first <a href="chapter3.html#framework-relations">5Cs diagram</a>. All arcs are now labelled using a consolidated vocabulary of 4 terms (<a href="https://github.com/rhiaro/thesis/commit/ce19ba2894dd833107cdfd593e3d68743f991d1b">diff</a>).</li>
                                    <li>General narrative adjustments in all sections (see commits referencing <a href="https://github.com/rhiaro/thesis/issues/73">issue 73</a>).</li>
                                    <li>Remove deception ethics stuff from Many Dimensions and Pro-Social Deception to <a href="chapter2.html#dishonesty-and-deception">Dishonesty and Deception</a> in C2.</li>
                                    <li>Move other background from Many Dimensions and Pro-Social Deception to <a href="chapter2.html#dishonesty-and-deception">Dishonesty and Deception</a> in C2 and drop parts that are repeated or superflous (see commits referencing <a href="https://github.com/rhiaro/thesis/issues/66">issue 66</a>).</li>
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                                <li>Also to add a closing section to say explicitly how these contribute to the 5 ‘cs’ model.
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                                    <li>Add Contribution to 5Cs section to discussions of all studies: <a href="chapter3.html#profiles-5cs">What is a Profile</a>, <a href="chapter3.html#constructing-5cs">Constructing Online Identity</a>, <a href="chapter3.html#lies-5cs">Lying Online</a>, <a href="chapter3.html#liecloud-5cs">Pro-social Deception</a>, <a href="chapter3.html#smm-5cs">Social Media Makers</a>.</li>
                                    <li>Added <a href="chapter3.html#table-5cs-aspects">a table summarising the concepts covered by each study</a> (<a href="https://github.com/rhiaro/thesis/commit/788cb86f38efe0508f3f1c830ae227ee901f30f5">diff</a>).</li>
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                        <h2>Chapter 4</h2>
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                                <li>Opening section to position the chapter in the overall structure of the narrative thesis in order to set audience expectations.
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                                        <li>Updated <a href="chapter1.html#structure">Chapter 1 structure</a> (<a href="https://github.com/rhiaro/thesis/commit/15f41a22856eb56d085ac72c3784b6cc90b333e5#diff-0ee4b03dc8155453669fd743076c5371">diff</a>).</li>
                                        <li>Updated <a href="chapter4.html#introduction">Chapter 4 introduction</a> (<a href="https://github.com/rhiaro/thesis/commit/15f41a22856eb56d085ac72c3784b6cc90b333e5#diff-be7c6b2fdded87d40fe86f6ee843751c">diff</a>).</li>
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                        <h2>Chapter 5</h2>
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                        <h2>Chapter 6</h2>
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                                <li>Add diagram showing how existing studies map into the 5 cs framework and use this opportunity to reflect on the value of the framework.
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                                    <li>Added <a href="chapter6.html#c2studies">diagram</a> and text above. TODO: improve diagram.</li>
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                                <li>TODO: Based on the students investigations in this thesis suggest future scenarios for the decentralised web for digital presentation of self. </li>
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                        <h2>General</h2>
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                                <li>Proof for typos</li>
                                <li>TODO: Paginate properly</li>
                                <li>TODO: Check all figure and table numbers</li>
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