Edits for clarity, fixed related term

Author: splorp

content/02_terms/newtonquake/newtonquake.txt

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 A rather elaborate and detailed April Fool’s joke perpetrated on the Newton community in 1998. NewtonQuake consisted of a (link: /terms/package text: package) that supposedly ran on a Newton device allowing the user to “play” the infamous [Quake](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Quake_(video_game)) video game. It also came with a Windows application that allegedly could convert Quake .pak archives into Newton packages.
 
-In reality, the NewtonQuake package was nothing more than a large file containing mostly random blocks of characters, except for two phrases. _“Newton Quake by Ravenous and KrystalMeph”_ appears at the beginning of the file. _“April Fools!”_ appears at the end of the file.
+In reality, the NewtonQuake package was nothing more than a large file containing mostly random blocks of characters and could not actually be installed on a Newton device.
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+Notably, two clear phrases appear within the content of the file.
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+_“Newton Quake by Ravenous and KrystalMeph”_ and _“April Fools!”_
 
 Also referred to as (link: /terms/newtquake text: NewtQuake).
 
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 Related:
 
-- /terms/easteregg
+- /terms/easter-egg
 - /terms/newtquake
 
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