Edits for clarity and detail

Author: splorp

content/02_terms/getting-started-card/getting-started-card.txt

@@ -8,17 +8,17 @@ Date: 08 August 2025
 
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-A (link: /terms/pcmcia text: PCMCIA) card that shipped with the (link: /terms/messagepad-100 text: MessagePad 100) along with a printed (link: /sources/messagepad-setup-guide text: setup guide).
+A (link: /terms/pcmcia text: PCMCIA) card that shipped with the (link: /terms/messagepad-100 text: MessagePad 100), containing three (link: /terms/application text: applications) to help the user learn about the device and features of (link: /terms/newton-os text: Newton OS).
 
-The (link: /terms/card text: card) contains three (link: /terms/application text: applications) to help the user learn about the Newton device and features of (link: /terms/newton-os text: Newton OS).
+The (link: /terms/instructor text: Instructor) application provides tips for using the (link: /terms/handwriting-recognition text: handwriting recognition).
 
-(link: /terms/instructor text: Instructor) provides tips and techniques for using the (link: /terms/handwriting-recognition text: handwriting recognition).
+The (link: /terms/tour text: Tour) application walks the user through various capabilities of the device.
 
-(link: /terms/tour text: Tour) walks the user through various capabilities of the device.
+The (link: /terms/game text: Game) application encourages the user to practice their handwriting through an arcade style game, gathering information while playing to help improve the accuracy of the handwriting recognition.
 
-(link: /terms/game text: Game) encourages the user to practice their handwriting through an arcade style game, gathering information while playing to help improve the accuracy of the handwriting recognition.
+This particular (link: /terms/card text: card) is required to activate an (link: /terms/easter-egg text: easter egg) known as (link: /terms/happy-hour text: Happy Hour).
 
-While the Getting Started card is inserted, contact information for (link: /terms/apple-assurance text: Apple Assurance) and Canadian Support and Service are added to the (link: /terms/name-file text: Name File).
+Related to this easter egg, while the card is inserted, contact information for (link: /terms/apple-assurance text: Apple Assurance) and Canadian Support and Service are added to the (link: /terms/name-file text: Name File).
 
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content/02_terms/happy-hour/happy-hour.txt

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 An (link: /terms/easter-egg text: easter egg) hidden in (link: /terms/newton-os text: Newton OS) that schedules a (link: /terms/meeting text: meeting) in the (link: /terms/date-book text: Date Book) titled “(link: /terms/apple-assurance text: Apple Assurance)" on the closest upcoming Friday.
 
-To activate this easter egg, the (link: /terms/getting-started-card text: Getting Started card) must be inserted into a (link: /terms/messagepad text: MessagePad) device running Newton OS . In the (link: /terms/notepad text: Notepad) application, write “schedule Happy Hour Fri”, then (link: /terms/tap text: tap) the (link: /terms/assist text: Assist) button.
+To activate this easter egg, the (link: /terms/getting-started-card text: Getting Started card) must be inserted into a (link: /terms/messagepad text: MessagePad) device running a particular version of Newton OS. Once the card is inserted, write “schedule Happy Hour Fri” in the (link: /terms/notepad text: Notepad) application, then (link: /terms/tap text: tap) the (link: /terms/assist text: Assist) button. Fun ensues.
 
 Back in the day, [Apple](https://www.apple.com/) was apparently known for its Friday afternoon “bashes”.
 
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 Resource:
 
-- [Oliver’s List of Newton Easter Eggs](https://web.archive.org/web/20090215012820/http://oof.org/newton/)
 - [MacKiDo: Apple Easter Eggs](https://www.mackido.com/EasterEggs/Newton.html)
+- [Oliver’s List of Newton Easter Eggs](https://web.archive.org/web/20090215012820/http://oof.org/newton/)
 
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