Apply suggestions from code review

Co-authored-by: Robert Krátký <robert.kratky@canonical.com>

Author: cpaelzer

docs/how-ubuntu-is-made/processes/github-ubuntu.md

@@ -7,9 +7,9 @@ In addition to code/projects on Launchpad and the Ubuntu archive, Ubuntu also ma
 
 Repositories under github.com/ubuntu are individually managed by their owners as admin.
 
-Ubuntu members that get {ref}`Ubuntu Core Developer <dmb-joining-core-dev>` permission will also be added as [members of the organization](https://docs.github.com/en/organizations/managing-peoples-access-to-your-organization-with-roles/roles-in-an-organization) with access to the whole scope of [github.com/ubuntu](https://github.com/ubuntu). Repository owners cannot revoke this access.
+Ubuntu members that get {ref}`Ubuntu Core Developer <dmb-joining-core-dev>` permission are also added as [members of the organization](https://docs.github.com/en/organizations/managing-peoples-access-to-your-organization-with-roles/roles-in-an-organization) with access to the whole scope of [github.com/ubuntu](https://github.com/ubuntu). Repository owners cannot revoke this access.
 
-This is inclusive (ubuntu core developers get access to the whole scope) and not exclusive (one does not need to be an ubuntu core developer to be allowed access to an individual project).
+This is inclusive (Ubuntu Core Developers get access to the whole scope) and not exclusive (one does not need to be an Ubuntu Core Developer to be allowed access to an individual project).
 
 ## Contributions
 

docs/who-makes-ubuntu/developers/dmb-joining-core-dev.md

@@ -7,13 +7,13 @@ Core Devs also have elevated privileges for re-triggering autopkgtests and perfo
 
 ## Coverage Ubuntu on Github
 
-To maintain all there is that makes Ubuntu a core developer also gets access to {ref}`Ubuntu on Github <github-ubuntu>`.
+To maintain all resources used to make Ubuntu, a Core Developer also gets access to {ref}`ubuntu-on-github`.
 
-Upon achieving ubuntu core developer permission - and under the condition that a github user is registered with the launchpad id (configured under 'Social accounts' on your Launchpad profile page) - the DMB will also add the applicant as [member to the organization](https://github.com/orgs/ubuntu/people).
+Upon achieving Ubuntu Core Developer permission - and under the condition that a GitHub user is registered with the Launchpad ID (configured under 'Social accounts' on your Launchpad profile page) - the DMB also add the applicant as a [member to the github.com/ubuntu organization](https://github.com/orgs/ubuntu/people).
 
-Ubuntu core developers that did not identify their associated github user before can reach out to the {ref}`DMB <dmb>` to be added.
+Ubuntu Core Developers that did not identify their associated GitHub user before can reach out to the {ref}`DMB <dmb>` to be added.
 
-Upon loss of Ubuntu core developer status, GitHub organization membership will be revoked as well.
+Upon loss of Ubuntu Core Developer status, GitHub organization membership is revoked as well.
 
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