docs: polish osp intro

Author: brillout

docs/pages/pricing/+Page.mdx

@@ -7,16 +7,16 @@ import { TeamQuote } from '../../components'
 The Open Source Pricing isn't implemented yet (everyone can use Vike for free in the meantime). Questions welcome at [#1932](https://github.com/vikejs/vike/discussions/1932).
 </Construction>
 
-The *Open Source Pricing* is a novel business model we designed to make Vike:
+The *Open Source Pricing* is a novel business model that makes Vike:
 
 - ✅ **Open source**: 100% MIT licensed
 - ✅ **Accessible**: everyone can use Vike (for free if limited financial resources)
-- ✅ **Community-oriented**: Vike's priorities are and *remain* aligned with users' interests
-- ✅ **Transparent**: Clear incentives
-- ✅ **Innovative**: Shaping JavaScript's future with a relentless first-principle approach
+- ✅ **Community-driven**: priorities are and *remain* aligned with users' interests
+- ✅ **Transparent**: clear incentives
+- ✅ **Innovative**: shaping JavaScript's future with a relentless first-principle approach
 
 <TeamQuote style={{marginTop: 42}} maxWidth={null}>
-The Open Source Pricing is a fundamental pillar, making Vike a tool you can trust and build upon with confidence, carefully designed to <Link href="#is-vike-still-free-software">preserve Open Source values</Link>.
+It's a fundamental pillar for stability — it makes Vike a tool you can trust and build upon with confidence. We carefully designed it to <Link href="#is-vike-still-free-software">preserve Open Source values</Link>.
 </TeamQuote>
 
 ## Pricing