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66 changes: 34 additions & 32 deletions debugging/book-library/index.html
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@@ -1,19 +1,22 @@
<!DOCTYPE html>
<html>
<html lang="en">
<head>
<title> </title>
<meta charset="utf-8" />
<meta
charset="utf-8"
name="viewport"
content="width=device-width, initial-scale=1.0"
/>
<title>My Library</title>

<!-- jQuery, Popper, Bootstrap -->
<script src="https://ajax.googleapis.com/ajax/libs/jquery/3.4.1/jquery.min.js"></script>
<script src="https://cdnjs.cloudflare.com/ajax/libs/popper.js/1.16.0/umd/popper.min.js"></script>
<script src="https://maxcdn.bootstrapcdn.com/bootstrap/4.4.1/js/bootstrap.min.js"></script>
<link
rel="stylesheet"
href="https://maxcdn.bootstrapcdn.com/bootstrap/4.4.1/css/bootstrap.min.css"
/>

<link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="style.css" />
</head>

Expand All @@ -23,71 +26,70 @@ <h1>Library</h1>
<p>Add books to your virtual library</p>
</div>

<button data-toggle="collapse" data-target="#demo" class="btn btn-info">
<button data-toggle="collapse" data-target="#demo" class="btn btn-info mb-3">
Add new book
</button>

<div id="demo" class="collapse">
<div class="form-group">
<label for="title">Title:</label>
<form id="bookForm" class="form-group">
<label for="book-title">Book title:</label>
<input
type="title"
type="text"
class="form-control"
id="title"
name="title"
id="book-title"
name="book-title"
required
/>
<label for="author">Author: </label>

<label for="author" class="mt-2">Author:</label>
<input
type="author"
type="text"
class="form-control"
id="author"
name="author"
required
/>
<label for="pages">Pages:</label>

<label for="pages" class="mt-2">Pages:</label>
<input
type="number"
class="form-control"
id="pages"
name="pages"
required
/>
<label class="form-check-label">

<div class="form-check mt-2">
<input
type="checkbox"
class="form-check-input"
id="check"
value=""
/>Read
</label>
<input
type="submit"
value="Submit"
class="btn btn-primary"
onclick="submit();"
/>
</div>
/>
<label class="form-check-label" for="check">Read</label>
</div>

<button
type="button"
class="btn btn-primary mt-3"
onclick="addBook()"
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It's a better practice to "attach event listener via JS" than "mixing JS code in HTML".

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added event listener via JS.

>
Submit
</button>
</form>
</div>

<table class="table" id="display">
<table class="table mt-4" id="display">
<thead class="thead-dark">
<tr>
<th>Title</th>
<th>Author</th>
<th>Number of Pages</th>
<th>Pages</th>
<th>Read</th>
<th></th>
</tr>
</thead>
<tbody>
<tr>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
</tr>
<!-- rows inserted by JS -->
</tbody>
</table>

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12 changes: 6 additions & 6 deletions debugging/book-library/readme.md
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Expand Up @@ -12,12 +12,12 @@ My website should be able to:

## Bugs to be fixed

1. Website loads but doesn't show any books
2. Error in console when you try to add a book
3. It uses the title name as the author name
4. Delete button is broken
5. When I add a book that I say I've read - it saves the wrong answer
1. Website loads but doesn't show any books. Done
2. Error in console when you try to add a book. Done
3. It uses the title name as the author name. Done
4. Delete button is broken. Done
5. When I add a book that I say I've read - it saves the wrong answer. Done

I think there are other some other small bugs in my code...but I'm lazy so I can't fix them all.
I think there are some other small bugs in my code...but I'm lazy so I can't fix them all.

I wish somebody would help me!
114 changes: 50 additions & 64 deletions debugging/book-library/script.js
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let myLibrary = [];

window.addEventListener("load", function (e) {
window.addEventListener("load", function () {
populateStorage();
render();
});

function populateStorage() {
if (myLibrary.length == 0) {
let book1 = new Book("Robison Crusoe", "Daniel Defoe", "252", true);
let book2 = new Book(
"The Old Man and the Sea",
"Ernest Hemingway",
"127",
true
);
myLibrary.push(book1);
myLibrary.push(book2);
render();
if (myLibrary.length === 0) {
myLibrary.push(new Book("Robinson Crusoe", "Daniel Defoe", 252, true));
myLibrary.push(new Book("The Old Man and the Sea", "Ernest Hemingway", 127, true));
}
}

const title = document.getElementById("title");
const bookTitle = document.getElementById("book-title");
const author = document.getElementById("author");
const pages = document.getElementById("pages");
const check = document.getElementById("check");

//check the right input from forms and if its ok -> add the new book (object in array)
//via Book function and start render function
function submit() {
// renamed so we don’t conflict with form.submit()
function addBook() {
if (
title.value == null ||
title.value == "" ||
pages.value == null ||
pages.value == ""
!bookTitle.value.trim() ||
!author.value.trim() ||
!pages.value.trim()
) {
alert("Please fill all fields!");
return false;
} else {
let book = new Book(title.value, title.value, pages.value, check.checked);
library.push(book);
render();
return;
}

const book = new Book(
bookTitle.value.trim(),
author.value.trim(),
pages.value.trim(),
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  • It is a good practice to save sanitized or pre-processed values in some variables first

    • to avoid calling .trim() repeatedly, and
    • to reduce the chance of accidently using the raw value.
  • The book's page property can still be assigned some invalid page count.

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we can clean the values once and store them in variables: instead of the above code we could do
const titleValue = bookTitle.value.trim();
const authorValue = author.value.trim();
const pagesValue = pages.value.trim();

and we can over come the page being assigned invalid count we can do this

const pagesNumber = Number(pagesValue);
if (!Number.isInteger(pagesNumber) || pagesNumber <= 0) {
alert("Please enter a valid positive page count!");
return;
}

check.checked
);

myLibrary.push(book);
render();
}

function Book(title, author, pages, check) {
this.title = title;
function Book(bookTitle, author, pages, check) {
this.bookTitle = bookTitle;
this.author = author;
this.pages = pages;
this.check = check;
}

function render() {
let table = document.getElementById("display");
let rowsNumber = table.rows.length;
//delete old table
for (let n = rowsNumber - 1; n > 0; n-- {
table.deleteRow(n);
const table = document.getElementById("display");

// remove all rows except the header
while (table.rows.length > 1) {
table.deleteRow(1);
}
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To clear the table before repopulating it, instead of deleting the table rows one by one, can you think of a more efficient way to remove all rows (except the <th>...</th>) in the table?

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we can use tbody.innerHTML = ''; to clear all rows efficiently.

however we have to use const row = tbody.insertRow(); to insert rows into tbody.

//insert updated row and cells
let length = myLibrary.length;
for (let i = 0; i < length; i++) {
let row = table.insertRow(1);
let titleCell = row.insertCell(0);
let authorCell = row.insertCell(1);
let pagesCell = row.insertCell(2);
let wasReadCell = row.insertCell(3);
let deleteCell = row.insertCell(4);
titleCell.innerHTML = myLibrary[i].title;
authorCell.innerHTML = myLibrary[i].author;
pagesCell.innerHTML = myLibrary[i].pages;

//add and wait for action for read/unread button
let changeBut = document.createElement("button");
changeBut.id = i;
myLibrary.forEach((book, i) => {
const row = table.insertRow(1);

row.insertCell(0).textContent = book.bookTitle;
row.insertCell(1).textContent = book.author;
row.insertCell(2).textContent = book.pages;

// read/unread toggle
const wasReadCell = row.insertCell(3);
const changeBut = document.createElement("button");
changeBut.className = "btn btn-success";
changeBut.textContent = book.check ? "Yes" : "No";
wasReadCell.appendChild(changeBut);
let readStatus = "";
if (myLibrary[i].check == false) {
readStatus = "Yes";
} else {
readStatus = "No";
}
changeBut.innerText = readStatus;

changeBut.addEventListener("click", function () {
myLibrary[i].check = !myLibrary[i].check;
changeBut.addEventListener("click", () => {
book.check = !book.check;
render();
});

//add delete button to every row and render again
let delButton = document.createElement("button");
delBut.id = i + 5;
deleteCell.appendChild(delBut);
// delete button
const deleteCell = row.insertCell(4);
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Can you think of the pros and cons of these two approaches for creating cells within a row?

  • Keeping all the cell creation code in one location, like the original code does.
  • Scattering the cell creation code across different locations, like what you did.

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Keeping all cells created in one block is the best practice.
It is clearer, safer, easier to maintain, and less likely to produce bugs.
while
Scattered cell creation should only be used when absolutely necessary for conditional or dynamic table structures.

const delBut = document.createElement("button");
delBut.className = "btn btn-warning";
delBut.innerHTML = "Delete";
delBut.addEventListener("clicks", function () {
alert(`You've deleted title: ${myLibrary[i].title}`);
delBut.textContent = "Delete";
deleteCell.appendChild(delBut);

delBut.addEventListener("click", () => {
alert(`You've deleted: ${book.bookTitle}`);
myLibrary.splice(i, 1);
render();
});
}
});
}
6 changes: 6 additions & 0 deletions debugging/book-library/style.css
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button.btn-info {
margin: 20px;
}

@media (min-width: 576px) {
.jumbotron {
padding: 2rem 32px 2rem;
}
}
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