(docs) update README.md - #121
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vladdoster
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Jan 21, 2021
vladdoster
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- fix grammar
- fix spelling
- increase readability for a non-native speaker (me)
- fix grammar - fix spelling - increase readability for a non-native speaker (me)
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| If you want to know about the available actions you can take with your new | ||
| CLI you can always the `--help` command. | ||
| If you want to know about the available actions, you can take with your new |
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I think this comma should not be added.
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It is an introductory clause warranting a comma.
https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/general_writing/punctuation/commas/commas_after_introductions.html
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The problem is that "you can take with your new CLI" is not an independent clause. The "with" is meaningless without the first part, because the noun phrase is actually "the available actions you can take with your new CLI" with "actions" being the object of the preposition "about" in the conditional clause "If you want to know about...".
It's really the whole thing up to "CLI" that is the introductory clause; the independent clause is "you can always use the --help command".
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@jrduncans Ah okay, that makes sense. I appreciate the thorough explanation. I am reverting this change.
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