modified: en/Archive/Development/Miscellaneous suggestions/SharedTracks

User Summary: removing gendered language

Author: BasicBeluga

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@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ The easy part of this: allow other players, for a fee, to use your station and/o
 ===Trains===
 
 We have Player 1, Player 2 and Player 3.
-Player 1 builds a nice network. Player 2 wants to use part of that network. Now Player 1 can build a Toll-Port, which allows Player 2 to access their network. At this port he defines the restrictions he want to add to the trains of Player 2:
+Player 1 builds a nice network. Player 2 wants to use part of that network. Now Player 1 can build a Toll-Port, which allows Player 2 to access their network. At this port they defines the restrictions they want to add to the trains of Player 2:
 * One-Time Fee (which slows down the train for a moment, to pay the fee)
 * Fee per tile moving
 * Fee per day spent on property
@@ -27,13 +27,13 @@ Player 1 builds a nice network. Player 2 wants to use part of that network. Now
 
 There was also some overthinking about what would happen if someone stopped their train on the track (if allowed, or via break-down). Normally, nothing happens. There only happens something when an other train is behind you and now has to wait for a red light. You pay every X ticks for their loose of cargo value. Now who pays if 4 trains behind eachother stand still? The first one, causing the red light. The X ticks are needed, in case everyone starts accelerating.
 
-Now what happens if player 3 is allowed on the network of player 2, can it access the network of player 1? In general: no. Player 1 has to allow player 3 via the toll-ports of player 2. Here he can ask other amounts of money if he wishes. This means that if player 2 is a good friend, you can allow him for free, while asking money to player 3.
+Now what happens if player 3 is allowed on the network of player 2, can it access the network of player 1? In general: no. Player 1 has to allow player 3 via the toll-ports of player 2. Here they can ask other amounts of money if they wishes. This means that if player 2 is a good friend, you can allow him for free, while asking money to player 3.
 
 What we want, is that the info about the agreement between player 1 and player 2 is hidden for player 3, but code-wise this can be hard, so for now it is public-information.
 
 To make this really to work, we need Celestar's patch for pay track upkeep!
 
-You can build a toll-port at any place, not allowing any other player, to make sure he can't enter that part of your track.
+You can build a toll-port at any place, not allowing any other player, to make sure they can't enter that part of your track.
 If you don't protect your stations, and allow them via the toll-port, they are allowed to enter ALL stations.
 
 ===How do the toll-ports look like===
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ I, TrueLight, have some (many?) ideas on this subject. First of all, no we do no
 
 * A new type, like a depot, together with a pool, for Toll-Ports. Together with sprites and everything. Shouldn't be too hard..
 * Alter the PF to see Toll-Ports as options, and to see track behind that as options.
-* A pointer in the vehicle, pointing to the last toll-port, if any, he passed (so we know the penalties and stuff)
+* A pointer in the vehicle, pointing to the last toll-port, if any, it passed (so we know the penalties and stuff)
 * An event-handler on the train-entering-next-track, to calculate fees
 * More event-handlers to handle other fees
 * SaveLoad code to save the new Toll-Ports correctly.