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contents/teams/replay/objectives.mdx

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 * onboard Richard and get him rocketing
 * Replay UX Overview
+    * we've invited @corywatilo to our November offsite where we will decide what this means for the last eighth of the year... 
 * replay playback performance
-    * folk don't wait for replay to start playing
-    * increase watch time
+    * we believe that if we improve playback we will see waiting time decrease, watch time increase, and number of recordings watched increase
+    * we believe that those metrics are strong proxies for customer satisfaction in replay
 
 # 🎤 Ship the things users keep asking for