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Overall, a very good first attempt. I think what is still missing, is some explanation when fiddling with Kernel parameters is need/wanted (e.g. tuning? troubleshooting, energy saving, etc). For this you should speak to SMEs.
And before this gets published, it needs to be turned into topics and an assembly,
Thanks Souvik!
| <screen>setparams '&productname; &productnumber;' | ||
| <procedure> | ||
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| To temporarily disable the splash screen, proceed as follows: |
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It is not clear that this is just an example. I would move this into the previous paragrtaph saying: In the following example, the splash screen is temporarily disabled.
Maybe you also shopuld add and modify a parameter with this example to cover the three most common use-cases.
Also, some general rules should be mentioned, such as that parameters are separated by space. And (if applicable, not sure) how to correctly quote or escape if a value contains a space. Maybe even move this into a general introduction, because it applies to both, temporarily and permanently modifying parameters.
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Thanks for overhauling and very well done! I know the editorial review is still to follow after the content review. Nevertheless, I included some code suggestions for typos or other small things that I spotted during the content review. More feedback to come via mail - many thanks!
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intermediate changes intermediate changes draft content complete Solved build problem by changing root element from topic to article Fixed typo trivial changes Fixes based on review comments Splitting DC file into two for profiling using PROFOS intermediate changes total revamp of core content restructuring in progress Intermediate changes in assembly structure rearrangements temporary and permanent procedure modularization linuxrc difference partial modularization complete modularization; attempting solution of build errors build problem solved removed the generic profiling dc file
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Smart docs on the topic "Modifying kernel boot parameters"
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