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Proofreading.

Proofreading.
@WaqarMMirza WaqarMMirza requested a review from jaekwon as a code owner December 14, 2023 19:18
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TY!

Gaia to save Gaia from itself. A modification to the distribution of $ATONE
through slashing those who voted in favor of #848 would help ensure that the
Gaia to save Gaia from itself. A modification to the distribution of $ATONE,
a through slashing of those who voted in favor of #848 would help ensure that the
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did you mean "through a slashing of"? or "such as through a slashing of"?
i still think the previous version makes more sense.
the slashing isn't necessarily singular,
and I think it's better without the comma. if there is a comma there should be a pair.

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Yes, I meant "through a slashing of".
We can also use a comma after a shorter phrase when we want to emphasize it or add a pause for literary effect.

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@jaekwon should I close the PR if you think the changes are unnecessary?

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