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playbooks/responses/stale-pr.md

@@ -4,16 +4,16 @@ action:
  - close pull request
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-Thank you for your contribution to the project!
+Thank you for your contribution to Electron!
 
-We apologize for the delay in reviewing your pull request. In the time since it
-was opened, there have been many changes to the codebase, and it's possible that
-your pull request is no longer applicable or conflicts with more recent updates.
+We've noticed there hasn't been any activity from the author in some time, and
+since the pull request was opened, there have been many changes to the codebase.
+As a result, your pull request may no longer be applicable or could conflict
+with more recent updates.
 
-To keep pull requests relevant to maintainers, we'll be closing this pull
-request for now. However, if you believe the pull request is still relevant or
-if there was a mistake, feel free to request us to reopen it or provide a
-follow-up comment.
+To keep pull requests relevant for maintainers, we'll be closing this one for
+now. However, if you believe it's still relevant or if there was a mistake, feel
+free to request us to reopen it or provide a follow-up comment.
 
-If you wish to continue pursuing your contribution, please update your branch
-with the latest changes on `main` and resolve any existing conflicts.
+If you'd like to continue with your contribution, please update your branch
+with the latest changes from `main` and resolve any conflicts.