Merge pull request #45 from encryption4all/dobby/ai-slop-marketing-copy-44

chore(copy): drop AI-slop tells from marketing copy

Author: rubenhensen

src/lib/components/SEO.svelte

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
 
 	const siteName = 'PostGuard for Business';
 	const defaultDescription =
-		'PostGuard for Business offers enterprise-grade identity-based email signing and encryption for organizations.';
+		'Identity-based email signing and encryption for organizations.';
 
 	const siteUrl = $derived(env.PUBLIC_SITE_URL || `${page.url.protocol}//${page.url.host}`);
 	const defaultImage = $derived(`${siteUrl}/pg_logo.png`);

src/lib/locales/en.json

@@ -39,15 +39,15 @@
 		},
 		"hostedEU": {
 			"title": "Hosted in the EU",
-			"description": "All data is stored and processed within the European Union, ensuring full GDPR compliance and data sovereignty."
+			"description": "All data is stored and processed in the European Union. GDPR-compliant by default."
 		},
 		"encryption": {
 			"title": "End-to-End Encryption",
 			"description": "Emails are encrypted end-to-end. Only the intended recipient with the right identity attributes can decrypt."
 		},
 		"openSource": {
 			"title": "Open Source",
-			"description": "Built on the open-source PostGuard protocol. Full transparency, no vendor lock-in, community-driven."
+			"description": "Built on the open-source PostGuard protocol. Audit the code or run it on your own infrastructure."
 		},
 		"revocation": {
 			"title": "Email Revocation",
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@
 	},
 	"footer": {
 		"brandName": "PostGuard for Business",
-		"tagline": "Enterprise-grade identity-based email signing",
+		"tagline": "Identity-based email signing for organizations",
 		"product": "Product",
 		"resources": "Resources",
 		"personal": "PostGuard Personal",
@@ -79,9 +79,9 @@
 	},
 	"seo": {
 		"siteName": "PostGuard for Business",
-		"defaultDescription": "PostGuard for Business offers enterprise-grade identity-based email signing and encryption for organizations.",
+		"defaultDescription": "Identity-based email signing and encryption for organizations.",
 		"homeTitle": "Secure Email Signing for Your Organization",
-		"homeDescription": "PostGuard for Business offers enterprise-grade identity-based email signing and encryption. Manage API keys and audit email activity."
+		"homeDescription": "Identity-based email signing and encryption for organizations. Manage API keys and audit email activity."
 	},
 	"pricing": {
 		"title": "Pricing",

src/lib/locales/nl.json

@@ -39,15 +39,15 @@
 		},
 		"hostedEU": {
 			"title": "Gehost in de EU",
-			"description": "Alle gegevens worden opgeslagen en verwerkt binnen de Europese Unie, voor volledige AVG-naleving en datasoevereiniteit."
+			"description": "Alle gegevens worden opgeslagen en verwerkt in de Europese Unie. Standaard AVG-conform."
 		},
 		"encryption": {
 			"title": "End-to-end versleuteling",
 			"description": "E-mails worden end-to-end versleuteld. Alleen de beoogde ontvanger met de juiste identiteitskenmerken kan ontsleutelen."
 		},
 		"openSource": {
 			"title": "Open source",
-			"description": "Gebouwd op het open-source PostGuard-protocol. Volledige transparantie, geen vendor lock-in, community-gedreven."
+			"description": "Gebouwd op het open-source PostGuard-protocol. Bekijk de code of draai het op uw eigen infrastructuur."
 		},
 		"revocation": {
 			"title": "E-mailintrekking",
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@
 	},
 	"footer": {
 		"brandName": "PostGuard for Business",
-		"tagline": "Enterprise-grade identiteitsgebaseerde e-mailondertekening",
+		"tagline": "Identiteitsgebaseerde e-mailondertekening voor organisaties",
 		"product": "Product",
 		"resources": "Bronnen",
 		"personal": "PostGuard Persoonlijk",
@@ -79,9 +79,9 @@
 	},
 	"seo": {
 		"siteName": "PostGuard for Business",
-		"defaultDescription": "PostGuard for Business biedt enterprise-grade identiteitsgebaseerde e-mailondertekening en versleuteling voor organisaties.",
+		"defaultDescription": "Identiteitsgebaseerde e-mailondertekening en versleuteling voor organisaties.",
 		"homeTitle": "Veilige e-mailondertekening voor uw organisatie",
-		"homeDescription": "PostGuard for Business biedt enterprise-grade identiteitsgebaseerde e-mailondertekening en versleuteling. Beheer API-sleutels en controleer e-mailactiviteit."
+		"homeDescription": "Identiteitsgebaseerde e-mailondertekening en versleuteling voor organisaties. Beheer API-sleutels en controleer e-mailactiviteit."
 	},
 	"pricing": {
 		"title": "Prijzen",

src/routes/(marketing)/+page.svelte

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
 				url: 'https://business.postguard.eu/pg_logo.png'
 			},
 			description:
-				'PostGuard for Business offers enterprise-grade identity-based email signing and encryption for organizations.',
+				'Identity-based email signing and encryption for organizations.',
 			sameAs: ['https://postguard.eu', 'https://docs.postguard.eu']
 		},
 		{