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6 changes: 6 additions & 0 deletions CHANGELOG.md
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# Changelog

## Unreleased

- Added offenders to `references/prose-phrases.md`: elevate, shift, land,
evolve/evolving, actionable, curious, and quietly (false understatement).
- Added a `prose-marketing-verbs` benchmark fixture covering the new entries.

## 0.3.0

- Published the skill through the standard `skills/slop-cop/` layout.
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must_preserve:
- quoted text

- id: prose-marketing-verbs
beat: prose
input: >-
The redesign quietly elevates the whole experience. It lands with users,
streamlines the busywork, and turns evolving priorities into actionable
next steps. I'm curious how far this pivotal shift can go.
expected_verdict: REVISE
expected_score_range: [12, 26]
must_find:
- marketing verbs
- empty tic words
- no checkable specifics

- id: design-fabricated-proof
beat: design
input: >-
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| unveil | reveal, show, introduce |
| navigate (abstract) | manage, handle, work through |
| streamline | simplify |
| elevate | raise, lift, improve |
| shift (abstract) | move, change, turn |
| land (as in "the point lands") | work, connect, resonate |
| evolve / evolving | change, grow, develop |
| enhance | improve, strengthen |
| optimize / optimise | improve, refine |
| endeavour | try, attempt |
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| intricate / nuanced / multifaceted | complex, detailed, subtle |
| holistic | complete, whole |
| paramount | very important, essential |
| actionable | specific, usable, concrete |
| curious ("I'm curious" / "a curious thing") | interesting, odd, or cut |

## Overused metaphorical nouns

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Kill adverbs doing vague work. Cut or replace with the specific thing.

absolutely, actually, basically, certainly, clearly, definitely, essentially, extremely, fundamentally, incredibly, interestingly, importantly, crucially, literally, naturally, obviously, quite, really, significantly, simply, surely, truly, ultimately, undoubtedly, very, just, genuinely, honestly, deeply, inherently, inevitably.
absolutely, actually, basically, certainly, clearly, definitely, essentially, extremely, fundamentally, incredibly, interestingly, importantly, crucially, literally, naturally, obviously, quietly (false understatement: "quietly transforming"), quite, really, significantly, simply, surely, truly, ultimately, undoubtedly, very, just, genuinely, honestly, deeply, inherently, inevitably.

Filler phrases: "At its core", "In today's [X]", "It's worth noting", "At the end of the day", "When it comes to", "In a world where", "The reality is", "a myriad of", "a plethora of", "the fact that", "prior to" (→ before), "subsequent to" (→ after), "in light of", "with respect to", "in terms of", "pertaining to".

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