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This pull request cleans up the achievements and history page by removing some sections and expanding on others with more detail. The changes generally improve the content, making it more comprehensive. I've identified a few areas for improvement, including typos, grammatical corrections, and suggestions to enhance readability. The most significant issue is a date that appears to be logically incorrect. Addressing these points will help ensure the document is polished and professional.
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| Started the club online in 2021 and then in October 2025 we started live events at the Breakfast Creek Hotel. | ||
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| Completed 9 live over the board events as of 22th December 2005. |
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There are a couple of potential typos on this line. 22th should be 22nd. Additionally, the year 2005 appears to be incorrect, as it predates the club's founding in 2021 and the start of live events in 2025.
| Completed 9 live over the board events as of 22th December 2005. | |
| Completed 9 live over the board events as of 22nd December 2025. |
| - 🌟 I’m interested in *Management Consulting* and *Team Building* | ||
| - 📚 I’m currently learning **RubyFu** with Street Smarts | ||
| - 🤝 I’m looking to collaborate on: | ||
| Over 8 years of contributions into some of the worlds top GitHub organizations some of those including: |
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There's a grammatical error and a minor spacing issue here. worlds should be possessive (world's), and there's an extra space after GitHub.
| Over 8 years of contributions into some of the worlds top GitHub organizations some of those including: | |
| Over 8 years of contributions into some of the world's top GitHub organizations some of those including: |
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| I was elected to the very first management team at Brisbane Social Chess Inc at the corporations first annual general meeting. During my period as manager I took the lead and created and greatly expanded the clubs online presence on platforms like Discord, GitHub and Chess.com. | ||
| I was elected to the very first seven man management team at Brisbane Social Chess Inc at the corporations first annual general meeting. |
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A few suggestions for this line to improve grammar and style:
- For more inclusive language, consider using
seven-personinstead ofseven man. - Compound adjectives like
seven-personare typically hyphenated. corporationsshould be possessive:corporation's.
| I was elected to the very first seven man management team at Brisbane Social Chess Inc at the corporations first annual general meeting. | |
| I was elected to the very first seven-person management team at Brisbane Social Chess Inc at the corporation's first annual general meeting. |
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| Overall I went for about 2 years to meetups at Brisbane Social Chess and I did go to about 12 different locations for chess. | ||
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| During my time as manager I did learn how to set and work four different types of chess clocks and at the events I was hosting a common task would be to help teach newcomers how to both set and play with the clocks. We had a range of chess clocks all digital including small cheap generic no name clocks, two different models of the official Digital Game Technology (DGT) chess clocks and a lot of standard LEAP brand clocks. |
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This sentence is very long and contains a couple of double spaces, which harms readability. Consider breaking it into smaller sentences. I've provided a suggestion to fix the spacing, but further refactoring for clarity is recommended.
| During my time as manager I did learn how to set and work four different types of chess clocks and at the events I was hosting a common task would be to help teach newcomers how to both set and play with the clocks. We had a range of chess clocks all digital including small cheap generic no name clocks, two different models of the official Digital Game Technology (DGT) chess clocks and a lot of standard LEAP brand clocks. | |
| During my time as manager I did learn how to set and work four different types of chess clocks and at the events I was hosting a common task would be to help teach newcomers how to both set and play with the clocks. We had a range of chess clocks all digital including small cheap generic no name clocks, two different models of the official Digital Game Technology (DGT) chess clocks and a lot of standard LEAP brand clocks. |
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| I did also let other players borrow chess books from my own personal library and over 15 books are still out on loan and have not yet been returned. | ||
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| On quiet nights I did provide some one on one chess tutorials and instructions for rookie players. |
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To improve readability, it's conventional to hyphenate one-on-one when it's used as a compound modifier.
| On quiet nights I did provide some one on one chess tutorials and instructions for rookie players. | |
| On quiet nights I did provide some one-on-one chess tutorials and instructions for rookie players. |
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