A bunch of non-technical changes, mostly minor.

[nobozo]

I made a bunch of fixes, mostly for consistency. I didn't make any technical changes.
There are still more changes that could be made, but I wanted to see what you think
of what I've done so far before doing them.

[karlseguin]

Sorry to be slow on this request. To be honest, I'm pretty hesitate as a lot of this seems subjective and stylistic. For example, I'm not a fan of a comma before "and", and it's my understanding that it's ok either way, so why change it?

[nobozo]

On 1/31/2014 5:49 PM, Karl Seguin wrote:

Sorry to be slow on this request. To be honest, I'm pretty hesitate as a
lot of this seems subjective and stylistic. For example, I'm not a fan
of a comma before "and", and it's my understanding that it's ok either
way, so why change it?

It all depends on whether you're trying for a book that's both
technically correct (which I can't comment on) and easy to read.
One way to be easy to read is to be consistent, which you're
not. For example, sometime you use "A, B and C", and sometimes
you use "A, B, and C".

I had said in the pull request that the changes I made were
stylistic. Of course you're free to take them or leave them,
but I believe your book would be of higher quality if you
took them.

Jon