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🤖 Thu May 08 11:33:46 - Prow CI generated the docs preview: https://92503--ocpdocs-pr.netlify.app/openshift-enterprise/latest/machine_configuration/index.html |
@isabella-janssen PTAL |
I still see a description here talking about custom MCPs not being supported. I think that needs to be updated as well. |
** *ReloadedCRIO* | ||
* *NodeDegraded* The node update failed. You can view the reason for the failure by using the `oc describe machineconfignode` command, as described later in this section. | ||
* *Update Post update action* The MCO reloads CRI-O, as needed. | ||
* *Rebooted Node* The MCO reboots the node, as needed. | ||
* *Update Complete*. The MCO uncordons the nodes, updates the node state to the cluster, and resumes producing node metrics. |
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* *Update Complete*. The MCO uncordons the nodes, updates the node state to the cluster, and resumes producing node metrics. | |
* *Update Complete*. The MCO uncordons the nodes, updates the node state to the cluster, and resumes producing node metrics. It contains the following sub-phase: |
Suggestion: Add the It contains the following sub-phase:
phrase to be consistent with how the Update Executed bullet was written.
@ptalgulk01 PTAL |
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[id="checking-mco-node-status_{context}"] | |||
= About checking machine config node status | |||
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If you make changes to the default control plane or worker nodes in your cluster, for example by using a machine config or kubelet config, you can get detailed information about the progress of the node updates by using the machine config nodes custom resource. Any change that results in a new machine config triggers the node update process. | |||
If you make changes to the to a machine config pool that results in a new machine config, for example by using a machine config or kubelet config, you can get detailed information about the progress of the node updates by using the machine config nodes custom resource. |
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There is typo here between to the / to a
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This looks really good! I just noticed one typo. 🙂
/remove-label peer-review-in-progress
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** *Updated* | ||
* *NodeDegraded* The node update failed. You can view the reason for the failure by using the `oc describe machineconfignode` command, as described later in this section. | ||
* *Update Post update action* The MCO is reloading CRI-O, as needed. | ||
* *Rebooted Node* The is MCO rebooting the node, as needed. |
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Typo: "The is MCO" should be "The MCO is".
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[id="checking-mco-node-status_{context}"] | |||
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If you make changes to the default control plane or worker nodes in your cluster, for example by using a machine config or kubelet config, you can get detailed information about the progress of the node updates by using the machine config nodes custom resource. Any change that results in a new machine config triggers the node update process. | |||
If you make changes to a machine config pool that results in a new machine config, for example by using a `MachineConfig` or `KubeletConfig` object, you can get detailed information about the progress of the node updates by using the machine config nodes custom resource. |
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Should we also introduce the "MCP" acronym here?
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This looks great to me, many thanks @mburke5678 🎉 |
https://issues.redhat.com/browse/OSDOCS-14404
Updates needed
Previews:
About checking machine config node status:
oc get machineconfignode -o wide
command to remove theUPDATECOMPATIBLE
andRELOADEDCRIO
columns;oc describe machineconfignode/<machine_config_node_name> -o yaml
command.Checking machine config node status:
oc get machineconfignodes
command;oc get machineconfignode -o wide
command to remove theUPDATECOMPATIBLE
andRELOADEDCRIO
columns;oc describe machineconfignode/<node_name>
command.QE review: